Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-07209Earmarking Donations to Boost Study Participation? Evidence from A Field ExperimentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see, both reviewers find the paper interesting but also raise serious concerns about the framing and the study setup. My own independent reading confirms their views. As concerns framing, it is unclear how the outcome of "study participation" contributes to the literature on earmarking, specifically its effect on the likelihood of donation. My recommendation is to frame the paper differently, starting with the puzzle of why participation in research studies remains low, and whether the promise of (earmarked) donations can boost participation. This would strike me as a more effective framing strategy and require reviewing a slightly different literature. As concerns the study design, it is unclear 1) whether academics are a relevant sample from which we can generalize; 2) whether some outcomes used are meaningful (especially "consent" -- perhaps better labelled as "survey begun"), and 3) if the treatment worked (manipulation checks and power calculations missing). Please add relevant explanations. Moreover, it appears that the results need to be interpreted differently in that any donations for study participation, not just earmarked donations, fail to be effective. This seems like the more important finding but this baseline effect is not discussed. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article looks at the question of whether the opportunity to earmark donations affects study participation among academics at psychology departments. The motivation for this question is based on the finding in the literature that earmarking donations often affects willingness to donate, and the authors are interested in whether this extends to study participation. The manuscript is clearly written, and the experiment is cleanly executed, which make for an interesting read. However, my main comments are to do with whether study participation is a relevant outcome for donations being earmarked versus not, and whether an academic population is necessarily informative for donation behaviour more broadly. The following points expand on this and summarize a few other comments that I hope will help the authors. • First, it is not clear why the effect of earmarking donations on study participation is an interesting question because earmarking usually relates to donations to charities and international organizations, as the authors also note, whereas study participation of the sort we see in this manuscript is academic. Therefore, it is not clear why this is an interesting and relevant question and whether (academic) study participation is a relevant and useful outcome for studying the effects of earmarking donations. • Somewhat related to the previous point, are academics generally a good population for studying the effects of earmarking donations? In other words, academics are not usually the main target audience for charitable donation so studying their receptiveness to earmarking versus not is not necessarily informative. I realize the charity in question is relevant to academics but the literature that the manuscript is situated in is broader and the examples of charities given are also very different from the kind of society/charity used in the experiment. The conclusions drawn seem to be very broad, which is why it becomes even more important to consider whether the type of sample used in the experiment is relevant for the kinds of charities the results are alluding to. • The choice of the charity makes sense given the target audience, but it is unclear whether it is one that participants would care deeply about especially in comparison to charities that are usually studied in this literature. Did the authors perhaps ask questions to gauge whether participants trusted the Society to choose the right causes, spend the money fully et cetera? Similarly, was this a charity where participants likely cared enough about it in general to care about how their donation money would be spent? • One of my main concerns when reading about the treatment conditions was whether the purposes were sufficiently different for participants to care enough to want to complete the study and be able to earmark. The authors briefly touch upon this in the conclusion, but this may be a more significant factor than presented because, in the real world, charities, especially international ones, are donating to very disparate causes with a lot of differentiation. For instance, when donating to something like UNICEF, you can often choose between different causes and different countries and, therefore, it is much more likely that those who are donating will care about which cause their donation goes to. In comparison, roughly the same set of recipients between three purposes that are all to do with helping academics within the field of psychology is unlikely to evoke the same reaction or interest in differentiating between the various causes. It may also, in general, not be a set of causes that participants have strong feelings about in any case, again especially in comparison with the types of recipients that large charities, whether national or international, help. • In the analysis, it is unclear why "consent" is a dependent variable of interest. Participants who consented may or may not have reached the treatment page so it’s not obvious what information can be gleaned from this, and therefore it’s a bit odd that this is a main dependent variable in the analysis. • The authors summarize their power calculation, but it would be helpful to know whether a change of 2 percentage points would be meaningful in this context, as it seems rather low. It would also be helpful to know what the basis is for the 10% assumed participation rate, unless that is simply an example in which case stating that would add clarity. Reviewer #2: Introduction The introduction advances the earmarking concept in charitable giving and provokes the primary question of the study: whether earmarking would boost participation in research studies with donation-based incentives. It defines the gap in generalizing donation behavior findings to study participation and introduces the experimental design. • Sudden shift to the "dark side" of earmarking. The transition can be facilitated by a bridging sentence that logically links the good and bad sides of earmarking. • Limited theoretical foundation connecting donation motivation and study participation. Draw on self-determination theory or prosocial behavior spillover literature to account for why earmarking effects would generalize to participation. Literature Review Literature review documents prior earmarking studies, psychological accounts (control, effect, transparency) and effect of earmarking on donation behavior. Surface-level analysis of mechanisms (impact, control, transparency). Expand this section to distinguish between these mechanisms in depth and examine which might not be effective in a study participation context. Failure to report charity-based rewards in survey research and theories of research participation motivation. Integrate literature on incentives of donation in research and motivational aspects in responding to surveys. The critique lacks a strong concluding sentence that summarizes the gap and clearly conveys the need for this research. Methodology The study uses a large-scale field experiment with 6,711 academic researchers randomly assigned to three conditions: Random, Earmarking, and Earmarking with Flexibility. The main dependent measures are completion and consent rates. • Uncertainty regarding randomization procedure (manual or computerized, stratified by variables like university?). Detail randomization procedure and include balance checks on age, gender, rank. • No manipulation check for whether or not participants appreciated and saw the earmarking opportunity. Future experiments must include a post-task assessment of manipulation. • Equivalence in donation targets erodes the salience of the choice. Future experiments must employ more dissimilar donation opportunities. • No attrition analysis (who withdrew after consent). Report the drop-off rate and assess if attrition by condition differed. • Findings show no significant material effect of earmarking on completion or consent rates. Equivalence testing suggests any effect is smaller than the pre-specified 2% cut-off. Click rate exploratory analysis suggests a small, non-significant difference. Discussion The discussion interprets null findings, identifies limitations, and specifies implications for the use of earmarking in research volunteer incentives. • Disjointed limitations section; no flow and connections to theory. Reorganize into a single paragraph with each limitation connected to its effect on results and proposing future research directions. • Limited discussion of the theoretical explanations for why earmarking may not prompt participation. Incorporate behavioral economic theories or motivation theories describing the distinction between giving and participating. • The shift to applied implications is abrupt. Add a bridging sentence connecting the theoretical findings to practical recommendations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-25-07209R1Earmarking donations to boost study participation? Evidence from a field experimentPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We have reached a decision of "minor revision" (without external review). R1 is satisfied with the revisions as they address their points raised. R2 recommends a minor revision, asking you to do a better job in interpreting the substantive effects of the treatment and to discuss the wider implications of whether earmarking is overall a good strategy to boost donations, especially given a host of literature on the negative performance effects of earmarking. We agree with R2's points, even though we are also aware that some of these asks fall out of the scope of your analysis. Please do a good faith effort to address these points. We would recommend you take a look at these studies on the effectiveness of earmarking, which should help contextualize the findings. https://doi.org/10.1086/736339 https://doi.org/10.1111/rego.12632 https://doi.org/10.1017/S0020818323000085 Please note: the revised version will not be sent back to the reviewers. We hope this will accelerate the decision-making process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: After careful consideration i believe the authors have adequately addressed my comments and concerns. Reviewer #3: This article presents findings from a survey experiment on whether allowing participants to earmark charitable contributions given as an incentive for participation increases the response rate. Counter to expectations derived from literature on charitable giving, it finds that it does not. The article is clearly written and makes a succinct point. I think it is worthy of publication. However, I would suggest some further revisions to clarify the findings as well as their contribution and implications. Most importantly, while the brief literature review covers key explanations for why earmarking should encourage charitable giving, it does so in a theoretical register. To help interpret the findings, the authors should provide substantive discussion of the findings of this literature, including the type of effects and their magnitude. For example, the article states that earmarking encourages charitable giving. However, it would be helpful to clarify whether it incentivises people to give who otherwise would not, or if it increases the amount they give. Relatedly, the authors should provide evidence on the magnitude of the effect for charitable giving found in previous studies to provide a sense of what effects we might be looking for in this experiment. Importantly, there must be some minimum level of effectiveness of earmarking for the research to be relevant, so that should be clearly stated. (This is the most important mechanism to provide substantive insights on, but it would be helpful to also provide brief substantive discussion of the other mechanisms highlighted in the literature review). As a second point, the article claims that there is no evidence of harms of earmarking, and it might yield benefits. I was sceptical of this claim for two reasons: (1) As I understand it, earmarking is bad for charities, as it prevents them from using funds in the most effective way; and (2) presumably there is some additional cost to the researchers, even if marginal, to manage this data. The claims here should be clarified accordingly. Third, I wondered if the authors might expand a bit more on what they think explains the lack of results. This may be easier to clarify once the expectations are more clearly stated (by drawing out the substantive content in the literature review as noted in point 1) Minor points: - The response rates of this study and other studies of 9-10% are first mentioned in the analysis strategy. I wondered if this could be mentioned earlier to further motivate the study. - The first sentence of the abstract: “Charitable donations are often the best way to incentivise study participation” – requires citation and/or evidence, or should be toned down. - It would be helpful to clarify throughout that this is about increasing response rates to surveys. - The article states that “affluent or time-poor individuals may face opportunity costs that no realistic cash payment within the study budget can offset [15, 16]. Under such circumstances, even modest personal incentives are unlikely to attract these participants.” � but then presumably donation-based incentives also wouldn’t impact them? If there is evidence that people would be more persuaded by a donation than direct payment, stating it more explicitly would be important. Otherwise, I think the justification can rest on the idea that sometimes it is not appropriate to pay respondents and that it can be difficult (especially with data protection/management requirements, and for online surveys where you would not be able to hand cash directly to respondents) - The article mentions the importance of trust to earmarking – but I wondered if it is also possible that if people really trust the organisation, they don’t care about earmarking because they figure the organisation can decide what to do with the resources more effectively than they can. - On the ethics statement, clarify the language - The study was not anonymous, rather no identifying data was collected/respondents remained anonymous - I agree with one of the previous reviewers’ comments that a brief reflection on the possibility that the $5 donation had no effect on participation at all is worth mentioning – even though of course the study did not test this, pointing it out as a pathway for future study may be valuable. ********** 7. 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