Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 9, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-56842 Tomato juice supplemented cultivation of Prevotella copri inhibits intestinal permeability enhancing effect of the bacteria in Caenorhabditis elegans PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fuke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both reviewers' have provided constructive comments to improve the manuscript. Specifically, more explanation should be provided for the study design, including the use of 1% v/v tomato juice. Reviewer #1 further pointed out the need to examine the viable counts of the three bacterial species. In addition, reviewer #2 commented the lack of clarity for the statistical analyses used. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Or, if the data are not a core part of the research being presented in your study, we ask that you remove the phrase that refers to these data. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In a previous epidemiological study, the authors investigated the relationship between human intestinal bacteria, tomato juice intake, and blood LPS-binding protein concentrations. As a result, they reported that there was a positive correlation between the population of intestinal bacteria three genera, Prevotella, Megamonas, and Streptococcus, and LPB, and a negative correlation between the intake of tomato juice and the amount of bacteria genus Streptococcus. Therefore, the authors used a model organism, the nematode C. elegans, to feed these bacteria cultured in a medium containing tomato juice and examined the intestinal permeability. The ideas in this study are considered novel and important. On the other hand, some controlled experiments and more careful consideration are needed to reach any conclusions. Additionally, the English text also needs further proofreading. (Major points) (1) The title and short title are unclear and should be corrected. For example, “Cultivation of P. copri in a medium supplemented with tomato juice suppresses the bacteria-induced intestinal permeability in C. elegans.” or “P. copri cultured with tomato juice supplement abolishes bacteria-induced intestinal permeability in C. elegans.” (2) To assert that the three bacteria used in this experiment increase the intestinal permeability of C. elegans, the results of the Smurf assay of E. coli OP-50 cultured for up to 8 days as a control are needed. (3) In addition, the authors should conduct experiments in which these three types of bacteria are fed to L1 larval nematodes from day 1 to day 8. Whether the nematodes can digest these bacteria and grow normally is also important for understanding the physiological state of the nematodes in the experiment in which bacteria are added from day 4. (4) Could the large indentations seen in SEM observations (Fig. 3) be debris of bacterial origin? Why would washing bacteria with sterile water produce indentations? An explanation is needed. (5) Furthermore, shouldn't saline be used in general to wash away bacteria? Osmotic pressure changes occur. Washing PI-positive cells with sterile water may cause the bacteria to burst and die due to osmotic stress, leading to a decrease in PI positivity and an increase in debris. (6) The decrease in absorbance seen in Figure 6 may be due to the lysis of bacteria during storage. Furthermore, this lysis appears to be accelerated by culturing with TJ. In the washing with sterile water (Figures 3 and 4 exp) and the experiment in Figure 6, it is necessary to measure the number of live bacteria by measuring the number of colonies formed. (7) One hypothesis is that when cultured with the addition of tomato juice, the bacteria produces antibiotics, but this hypothesis is difficult to understand because antibiotic-producing bacteria generally have mechanisms for conferring resistance to the antibiotics themselves. (8) It remains to be confirmed whether heat treatment of the other two bacteria also alters the intestinal permeability of the nematode. This finding may simply be the result of P.copri bacteria being more easily lysed (dead) when cultured in a medium containing tomato juice and washed with sterile water. Examining the viable counts of the three bacteria after each treatment may provide the key to solving this mystery. Reviewer #2: In this study, the authors address a novel aspect of how tomato consumption may influence intestinal permeability through its effect on specific gut bacteria, which is relevant given the increasing interest in diet-microbiota interactions. However, the following comments and suggestions might be useful for improving the manuscript. Major comments: 1. Utilizing C. elegans as a model organism for studying the impact of bacterial composition on intestinal permeability provides an efficient system for preliminary screening before moving to more complex models. However�the authors note that extrapolation to humans remains a challenge, it would be beneficial to discuss potential pathways or mechanisms that could be conserved across species, thereby justifying further studies in more complex models or human populations. 2. Although L-(-)-3-phenyllactic acid accumulation is identified as a possible factor, more detailed investigation into how this compound specifically affects intestinal permeability and whether it directly causes increased vulnerability of P. copri would enhance the study's explanatory power. 3. Providing information about the statistical methods used to analyze the differences in Smurf ratios and survival rates would increase confidence in the reported outcomes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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<p>Cultivation of Prevotella copri in a medium supplemented with tomato juice suppresses the bacteria-induced intestinal permeability in Caenorhabditis elegans PONE-D-24-56842R1 Dear Dr. Fuke, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chun Wie Chong Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Atsushi Higashitani Reviewer #2: Yes: Qiuhong Niu ********** |
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