Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 8, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-18731Osmolality as a strong predictor of COVID-19 mortality and its possible links to other biomarkersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ulgen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In Line 8, the author has mentioned as In our own work... it is not clear that the author wants to cite his previous paper or mention the present work. If it's present work, then it should not be in the introduction. In line 17, the formula of osmolality is mentioned, which should be in methodology part Line 72 to 81 should be in introduction part Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s Comments: The manuscript presents a comprehensive retrospective study investigating the predictive power of calculated plasma osmolality on COVID-19 mortality and hospitalization, incorporating extensive statistical analyses, including collider and mediation models. The study utilizes a substantial dataset (n = 1323) from Tokat, Turkey, and proposes a novel framework for integrating classical and causal inference methods in the interpretation of clinical biomarkers. I suggest the following to the authors: Major Strengths of the study 1. The investigation into osmolality as a prognostic marker is novel, as this parameter has been historically underutilized in COVID-19 clinical management despite being readily calculable from routine blood tests. The study highlights osmolality as a potentially stronger predictor of disease severity than its components (sodium, urea, glucose), which is an insightful and practical contribution. 2. The authors employ a multifaceted statistical approach, including logistic regression, ordinal logistic regression, collider analysis, and causal mediation analysis. This multi-tiered approach allows for a nuanced understanding of both direct and indirect biomarker associations. 3. The use of collider and mediation analyses is well-explained and innovative in the context of clinical biomarkers. The resulting causal model (Figure 3) is a valuable conceptual framework that can guide future research. Suggestions for Improvement: 1. While the statistical rigor is appreciated, some of the results, particularly around transformed odds ratios and indirect effects, may be challenging for clinical readers to interpret. Inclusion of a summary table or visualization comparing biomarker performance (e.g., ROC curves or AUCs) would help translate findings into clinical utility. 2. The transformation of glucose leading to loss of significance warrants further discussion. Is this due to outliers, non-normal distribution, or a true change in association? A sensitivity analysis or data distribution plots might strengthen this point. 3. The exclusion of variables with high missingness (e.g., immune cell counts) is noted, but a summary on the extent and nature of missing data for other variables would be valuable, including any imputation strategy (if used). 4. The female-to-male ratio (approximately 3:1) is skewed. The authors should discuss how this imbalance might affect generalizability or statistical power in stratified analyses. 5. The clinical or physiological rationale linking osmolality (and its components) with COVID-19 severity is only briefly discussed. Further elaboration on how hydration status, renal function, or metabolic derangements contribute to poor prognosis would add depth. 6. While the authors have excluded several potential confounders (e.g., hematological malignancies, CKD), there is limited information on the patients’ comorbidities such as diabetes or hypertension, which may impact both osmolality and COVID-19 outcomes Minor Comments: • The manuscript could benefit from language polishing for grammar and flow in some sections (e.g., line 174–180). • Consider providing actual effect sizes and confidence intervals for mediation paths in the main text rather than in supplementary tables only. • It would be helpful to specify if the same causal framework can be generalized to other viral infections or critical illnesses beyond COVID-19. This is a highly commendable study with methodological innovation and significant clinical relevance. The identification of osmolality as a composite yet potentially superior biomarker for COVID-19 prognosis is both timely and actionable. With minor revisions and improved clinical contextualization, this manuscript will make a strong contribution to the field of infectious disease biomarkers and statistical modeling in medicine. Recommendation: Minor Revision ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Richa panchgaur Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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<p>Osmolality as a strong predictor of COVID-19 mortality and its possible links to other biomarkers PONE-D-25-18731R1 Dear Dr. Ulgen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper addressed the comments whatever it was previously mentioned. The journal can further proceed for pubication. Reviewer #2: The manuscript titled "Osmolality as a Strong Predictor of COVID-19 Mortality and its Possible Links to Other Biomarkers" presents an important and timely investigation into the prognostic significance of osmolality in COVID-19 patients. The topic is highly relevant to current clinical practice, particularly for risk stratification and improving patient management during infectious disease outbreaks. The integration of osmolality with other biomarkers adds value to the existing body of literature and could potentially influence future diagnostic and therapeutic protocols. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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