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PONE-D-25-18160Sustainable Heavy Metal Immobilization in Contaminated Soils Using Plant-Derived Urease- Driven BiomineralizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. XU, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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It is not a requirement to cite these works. We appreciate your attention to this request. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript investigates the immobilization of heavy metals by a plant-derived urease-driven carbonate precipitation process, providing a new idea for the remediation of heavy metal-contaminated soils. After careful review, the work was found to be innovative, the analysis of the data results was rather lacking, and major revisions were needed. Reviewer #2: This study introduces a sustainable approach for immobilizing heavy metals (cadmium, lead, and zinc) in contaminated soils using enzyme-induced carbonate precipitation (EICP) driven by plant-derived ureases from jack bean and watermelon seeds. The research demonstrates high sequestration efficiencies for these metals after optimizing key process parameters, including the urea-CaCl2 ratio and enzyme dosage. Notably, the EICP treatment maintained soil permeability and exhibited durability under simulated environmental stressors like acid rain and freeze-thaw cycles. This plant-based EICP system presents a promising, potentially cost-effective, and environmentally sound alternative to conventional soil remediation methods. The paper demonstrates some positive outcomes as listed below. 1. High Heavy Metal Sequestration Efficiency: The EICP system using jack bean and watermelon seed ureases demonstrates significant immobilization of cadmium (87.3%), lead (91.5%), and zinc (76.4%). This high efficiency suggests strong potential for effective remediation. 2. Plant-Derived Enzymes: Utilizing plant-derived ureases offers a potentially more sustainable and cost-effective alternative compared to microbial-based methods, reducing reliance on microbial cultivation and associated costs. 3. Optimized Process Parameters: The study successfully identified and fine-tuned critical parameters (urea-CaCl2 ratio and enzyme dosage) to maximize carbonate mineralization and heavy metal sequestration. This optimization enhances the reliability and effectiveness of the EICP system. 4. Preservation of Soil Hydraulic Properties: Maintaining soil permeability (>10−5 cm/s) throughout the precipitation cycles is a significant advantage, as it ensures that the remediation process does not negatively impact essential soil functions like water infiltration and drainage. 5. Durability under Environmental Stressors: The EICP-treated soil exhibits good durability, retaining a substantial portion of the immobilized heavy metals (Cd: 82.5%, Pb: 92.7%) even after exposure to simulated acid rain and freeze-thaw cycles. This indicates the long-term stability of the remediation. Some of the draw backs which needs justification are listed below 1. Limited Scope of Heavy Metals: The study focuses only on cadmium, lead, and zinc. The effectiveness of this EICP system on other heavy metal contaminants is unknown and requires further investigation. 2. Enzyme Dosage Optimization: While the study optimized enzyme dosage, the process of determining the optimal 1.2 U per gram of soil might be sensitive to variations in soil type and contamination levels, potentially requiring site-specific adjustments. 3. Potential for Scalability Challenges: The abstract doesn't discuss the feasibility and cost-effectiveness of scaling up this EICP system for large-scale field applications. Transitioning from lab experiments to real-world implementation can present significant engineering and logistical challenges. 4. Long-Term Stability Beyond Tested Conditions: While durability under simulated acid rain and freeze-thaw was assessed, the long-term stability of the immobilized heavy metals over decades and under other environmental stressors (e.g., changes in groundwater chemistry, biological activity) remains to be fully evaluated. 5. Line 85 Please write the main objectives of your work and the research gap before concluding the introduction. please refer the following papers 10.1007/s40098-022-00638-8, 10.1007/s40098-022-00638-8, 10.3390/buildings14040909 to help you answer the comment. 6. Line 143 why only Carbonate was sequentially extracted even though there are more fractions available since the data is available from your work. and please elaborate refer the following 10.1007/s40098-020-00464-w to answer this comment. 7. List out the objectives of the present work in the last paragraph. 8. Line 106-108 soybean (Glycine max) please explain glycine max. 9. The mixture was subsequently clarified via centrifugation at 10,000 ×g for 15 10. minutes. Comparable extraction protocols were applied to soybean (Glycine max) and 11. watermelon seed (Citrullus lanatus) samples, utilizing pH-optimized buffering systems 12. adjusted to 7.5 and 6.5, respectively, to ensure species-specific enzyme stability…… 13. Not very clear cannot comprehend whether you have extracted urease from soybean and water melon seeds I am not able to find data from these two ingredients in the paper. 14. Line 118 and 119, 1.2 U g⁻¹ soil, urea-CaCl₂ molar ratios systematically varied from equimolar (1:1) …….. The authors have determined 0.2 – 1.2 Urease per gram of soil as optimum dosage but it is not clear how to prepare samples so as to arrive at that dosage. Please give details in terms of how many grams of jack bean seed derived powder should be added to obtain 1.2 U.. of urease similarly for soybean and water melon seeds. Else this cannot be replicated. 15. Fig 1. X axis is urease dosage in U/g but not clear how you have arrived at it, y axis “immobilization efficiency” please use a simple word as percentage retained or sorption efficiency. 16. Table 1 economic analysis of soybean is not done. 17. 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PONE-D-25-18160R1Sustainable Heavy Metal Immobilization in Contaminated Soils Using Plant-Derived Urease- Driven BiomineralizationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. XU, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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