Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 13, 2025 |
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript presents a meta-analysis investigating the impact of the Sport Education Model (SEM) on students’ physical education learning outcomes, with a focus on participant and intervention characteristics. The topic is highly relevant, especially for educators and policymakers seeking evidence-based practices in physical education. The study is well-structured, follows PRISMA guidelines, and attempts to contribute to understanding moderating factors that affect SEM efficacy. However, while the paper is ambitious and has notable strengths, several critical concerns related to methodological rigor, reporting transparency, analytical limitations, and writing quality must be addressed. You can see my suggestions to authors below: Certainty of Evidence (GRADE Assessment) – Serious Concern The GRADE evaluation rates the certainty of evidence for both cognitive and non-cognitive outcomes as very low. This severely limits the confidence in the findings. The authors should either: a) justify why their conclusions are still meaningful despite low evidence certainty, or b) temper their recommendations and claims of practical applicability. The I² value of 98% indicates extremely high heterogeneity, which threatens the validity of the overall pooled estimate. Although subgroup analyses are presented, the authors must explore and report sources of heterogeneity more deeply (e.g., study design quality, cultural context, variation in implementation fidelity). More visual representation of heterogeneity in the main manuscript or supplementary materials would strengthen transparency. The subgroup analyses (e.g., by session frequency or class size) are informative but risk Type I error due to multiple comparisons and small subgroup sizes. The authors should indicate whether interaction tests were performed between subgroups and report corresponding p-values. The classification of outcomes into “cognitive” and “non-cognitive” needs clearer operational definitions. It is currently unclear, for instance, why “motor skills” are categorized under cognitive outcomes when they also depend on psychomotor learning. While RoB-2 and ROBINS-I were used, the specific domains of bias (e.g., blinding, selection bias) are not discussed in sufficient depth. Figure references are made (e.g., Fig 2, Fig 3), but visuals are not included in the provided material. Ensure these are present in the final submission. The inclusion of non-English language articles is commendable, but more detail is needed about how translations were verified and whether this affected coding reliability. While overall readable, the manuscript contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. The term “learning efficiency” is used without clear definition and appears non-standard. Consider replacing with “learning outcomes” or “educational gains.” Some appendices (e.g., Appendix 3 – description of 430 records) are critical for replication but should be summarized in the main text or tables for clarity. The search was concluded in February 2025, and some included studies are listed as from 2024. Confirm the accuracy and peer-reviewed status of these articles. The authors recommend 2 lessons/week for ≤18 sessions universally. However, contextual constraints (e.g., curriculum length, teacher capacity) should be acknowledged. Recommendation: Minor Revision This study presents an important contribution to physical education literature by quantifying SEM’s impact across various implementation conditions. However, to ensure robustness and clarity, substantial revisions are required, particularly regarding methodological transparency, heterogeneity management, and evidence strength communication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents relevant findings on the effectiveness of the Sport Education Model. The methodology is generally appropriate, and the analysis is clear. Please ensure that all journal formatting and reference guidelines are carefully followed before final submission. Reviewer #2: I had the pleasure of participating in the review process of a manuscript entitled "Effective Implementation of the Sport Education Model in Physical Education: A Meta-Analysis of Participant and Intervention Characteristics." The study investigates the facilitative effects of SEM on students' physical education learning and examines the Participant and Intervention Characteristics that modulate its impact. The study provides novel research findings that significantly enhance the existing knowledge on the subject. A series of meticulously designed experiments were conducted, and the resulting data underwent rigorous statistical analyses, all executed to elevated technical standards. The author provides sufficient detail about the methods used in these analyses to ensure their comprehension and replication. The study's conclusions are obvious and based on the evidence. The author writes the document in typical academic English, demonstrating careful attention to word choice and order. It also follows the correct regulations for reporting (CONSORT, PRISMA...). For these reasons, I believe that the manuscript is suitable for publication in its current form. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Effective Implementation of the Sport Education Model in Physical Education: A Meta-Analysis of Participant and Intervention Characteristics PONE-D-25-13280R1 Dear Dr. Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mert Kurnaz, Ph.D Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I have carefully reviewed your responses to the reviewers’ comments and the changes you have made. The revisions have addressed all the points raised in the review process with clarity and thoroughness. The manuscript is now stronger, both in methodological transparency and in the depth of its discussion, and it clearly communicates its contribution to understanding how participant and intervention characteristics influence the Sport Education Model’s effectiveness. Thank you for your diligence and professionalism throughout the revision process, and congratulations on producing a valuable and well-crafted contribution to the literature. |
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