Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 16, 2025 |
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Kind regards, Hailing Ma Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match. When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer Comments – Major Revision (Total: 50) Abstract Structure & Scientific Clarity (1–10) Lack of clarity in the problem statement: The abstract does not clearly state why antimony removal is an urgent or novel topic. Please briefly introduce the environmental risk. Improve technical flow: The transition between electrolysis, SbH₃ formation, and Sb recovery feels abrupt—provide a clearer cause-effect structure. Quantify the initial concentration ranges: State the initial Sb concentrations used in the experiments for context. Avoid passive phrasing: Revise passive structures like “was employed” to active voice where possible. Explain recovery vs. removal distinction: Is Sb merely removed or also recovered in solid form? Clarify in abstract. Clarify mechanisms: State more explicitly how SbH₃ formation and decomposition enable Sb separation and recovery. Reword ambiguous phrasing: "Overflowed from the solution" is vague; suggest "was released as gas" or similar. Include brief methodological note: Mention reactor configuration or stirring methods used, even if in brief. Summarize results more clearly: Mention the optimum conditions in one concise summary sentence. Add significance: Conclude abstract with a statement on the broader implications for wastewater treatment. Technical Depth and Experimental Design (11–20) Compare to existing methods: Clarify how this method compares to conventional chemical precipitation or adsorption approaches. Explain electrode selection: What electrode materials were used? Were they inert or catalytic? Include membrane specification: Provide model or manufacturer details for Nafion—there are multiple variants. Define temperature control method: Was water bath or Joule heating used? Stability of temperature matters. Describe gas measurement: How was SbH₃ generation confirmed or quantified—through GC or other analytical means? Justify ultrasonic stirring: Provide rationale or reference showing why ultrasound is effective at high concentrations. Control group needed: Was there a baseline group without electrolysis? Necessary to prove electrogeneration role. Quantify hydrogen competition: Is hydrogen production rate measured or estimated to demonstrate its competitive relationship? Explain decomposition threshold: Was the temperature decomposition of SbH₃ determined experimentally or inferred? Add real sample test: Was this validated using actual industrial Sb wastewater? If not, suggest as future work. Mechanism and Chemical Interpretation (21–30) Thermodynamic support lacking: Consider calculating ΔG or Gibbs energy for SbH₃ formation/decomposition. Phase change not explained: Elaborate whether Sb is recovered in crystalline, amorphous, or colloidal form. Oxidation state unclear: Is Sb present as Sb(III) or Sb(V)? The valence state affects hydride generation. Missing side-reactions: Was any stibine oxidized or lost via volatilization? Discuss gas-phase losses. Clarify proton exchange role: Why does Nafion outperform CEM? Is it due to proton mobility, selectivity, or structure? Incorporate reaction equations: Add half-cell or global electrochemical reactions for clarity. Hydride safety: Mention the toxicity or handling precautions of SbH₃—very relevant for real-world applications. Reversibility of SbH₃ reaction: Discuss whether SbH₃ can redissolve or react in aqueous phase. Competing anions: Were any other ions (e.g., sulfate, nitrate) present? They may interfere in electrolysis. Inclusion of pH dependency: Provide pH window in which SbH₃ formation is optimal. Data Presentation and Analysis (31–40) Add standard deviations: Were removal efficiency values repeated? Include standard error bars. Statistical significance: Were differences between membranes or stirring methods statistically analyzed? Include figures/tables: The abstract suggests comparative data—include bar or line graphs to visualize results. Summarize orthogonal experiment: Present the L9 (3⁴) table or equivalent clearly and concisely. Include power consumption analysis: Energy cost is critical for scale-up—present kWh/m³ values. Define "highest removal efficiency" clearly: Is this for synthetic wastewater only or compared to real systems? Optimize parameter interaction: Use contour or response surface plots if multiple variables affect removal. Include control of ambient pressure: Was the system open or sealed? Could affect gas release dynamics. Discuss reproducibility: State if results were consistent across batches. Add detection methods: Specify ICP-OES, AAS, or other for final Sb quantification. Writing and Grammar (41–45) Fix grammar: “An optimized EML model were developed” → “was developed.” Avoid sentence redundancy: Lines 14–15 and 23–24 repeat concept of removal being affected by competition. Use formal tone: Avoid casual language like “notably accelerated.” Try “significantly enhanced.” Check article usage: “a proton exchange membrane” not “employing proton exchange membrane.” Simplify structure: Break long compound sentences for clarity, e.g., lines 22–24. Scientific Significance and Journal Fit (46–50) Highlight environmental relevance: Emphasize removal of a priority pollutant per EPA/EU regulations. Add novelty statement: Explicitly state what is novel—electrogeneration of SbH₃? Use of SHG for Sb? Discuss scale-up potential: Comment on feasibility in industrial wastewater treatment settings. Propose future directions: Suggest exploring alternative membranes or hybrid ultrasonic-electrochemical reactors. Align with journal aims: Frame the study within context of advanced oxidation/electrochemical wastewater remediation field. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No ********** Reviewer #1: 1-The manuscript presents a novel application of electrochemical hydride generation (EHG) using a Nafion membrane for antimony (Sb) removal, which offers potential advantages over traditional electrochemical and adsorption methods. However, the novelty needs to be more explicitly emphasized. The authors should clearly differentiate their approach from other electrochemical techniques, such as electrocoagulation, and elaborate on how the use of Nafion and the recovery of Sb via SbH₃ decomposition significantly advances the field. 2-The experimental methods are generally well-structured, but important details are missing that may hinder reproducibility. Key parameters such as the spacing between electrodes, exact volume of electrolyte, electrode immersion depth, and duration of each test run should be clearly specified. Including a schematic diagram of the experimental setup with precise dimensions would improve clarity and help readers replicate the experiments. 3-The proposed removal mechanism based on SbH₃ formation and decomposition is reasonable, but relies heavily on indirect observations (e.g., silver mirror effect and post-experiment nitric acid soaking). To strengthen the evidence, the authors should consider incorporating direct or in situ measurements of gaseous SbH₃ (e.g., GC-MS, FTIR) in future work. Additionally, a discussion of potential safety hazards associated with SbH₃ and how they are mitigated would be valuable. 4-The extension of the method to real leachate from the Banpo antimony mine is a strong point. However, this section is relatively brief. The manuscript would benefit from a more comprehensive comparison between the treatment of synthetic and real wastewater, including how matrix complexity, oxidation states, and competing ions affect Sb removal. A summary table comparing removal efficiencies and pH effects in synthetic versus real samples would be a helpful addition. 5-While the manuscript is generally readable, the text in the Results and Discussion sections can be overly detailed and sometimes repetitive. The authors are encouraged to condense descriptions where possible and improve the logical flow. Subheadings or bullet points could help in summarizing key findings. Minor grammatical corrections and sentence restructuring are also recommended throughout the manuscript for improved clarity and professionalism. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Akbar Abbasi ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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The Optimization of Electrochemical Hydride Generation Technology for Treating Antimony-Containing Wastewater PONE-D-25-20648R1 Dear Dr. Liu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hailing Ma Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have thoroughly addressed the reviewers’ comments and substantially improved the manuscript; I recommend acceptance for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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