Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 1, 2025 |
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PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript presents a study protocol examining the role of wearable devices and artificial intelligence (AI) in the management and prevention of Alzheimer's disease (AD). While it addresses an important and emerging research area, several aspects require refinement to enhance clarity, methodological rigor, and theoretical grounding. <h4 data-end="422" data-start="385">Key Areas for Improvement: </h4>
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Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure: [Zhejiang Province Traditional Chinese Medicine, Science, and Technology Project (2023ZF134) supported by SC, Zhejiang Provincial Medical and Health Science and Technology Program Project (2022KY1052) supported by SC,First-Class Course of Zhejiang Province (2022-1133) supported by SC,Basic Public Welfare Research Project/Joint Fund Project of Zhejiang Province: Research on accurate localization of gait disorder brain region in Parkinson's disease based on pfMRI data set and hierarchical Bayesian model(LBY23H200002), supported by XL.]. Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: ""The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."" If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. 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Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process. 4. PLOS requires an ORCID iD for the corresponding author in Editorial Manager on papers submitted after December 6th, 2016. Please ensure that you have an ORCID iD and that it is validated in Editorial Manager. To do this, go to ‘Update my Information’ (in the upper left-hand corner of the main menu), and click on the Fetch/Validate link next to the ORCID field. This will take you to the ORCID site and allow you to create a new iD or authenticate a pre-existing iD in Editorial Manager. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: My concerns are as follows: 1. The abstract is overly redundant and appears to be written as an introduction; a complete rewrite of the abstract is recommended. 2. The paper explores a relatively emerging intersection of wearable devices and AI in Alzheimer's disease (AD). However, the existing literature on AI in healthcare, including Alzheimer's, has been growing, and the manuscript does not highlight its unique contribution clearly in the introduction. It would benefit from a clearer statement on how the review will fill existing gaps. 3. The protocol promises to synthesize a significant amount of existing research, but it remains unclear what specific contributions it will make beyond summarizing previous findings. It would be useful to further emphasize how the findings will directly influence future research directions or clinical practices. Some workss are worth mentioning: (1)DOI:10.62762/CJIF.2024.876830 (2)DOI:10.62762/TIS.2024.680959 4. The manuscript discusses the types of data (e.g., gait, EEG) that will be covered, but there is limited discussion on how diverse data collection methods could influence the model's performance. It should address how the variety of data sources will be handled, especially multimodal data. 5. What are the newly-added values? 6. The manuscript lacks a detailed discussion on the theoretical models that underpin the use of AI in AD prediction. A more comprehensive review of existing theories or frameworks (such as machine learning principles and their adaptation for healthcare applications) would strengthen the theoretical grounding. Reviewer #2: This is a very interesting manuscript. The use of wearable devices and the use of artificial intelligence as an intervention in the management and prevention of Alzheimer's disease is welcomed. Reviewer #3: Although the protocol described in this manuscript itself is well designed, it does not provide any new findings. The authors should perform a scoping review based on their own protocol and publish the results. Reviewer #4: First off, congrats on putting together this study protocol. Now, as I was reading through, a couple of things popped up that you might want to think about a bit more: Methods One thing to consider clarifying is regarding the "gray literature" you plan to retrieve. Could you give a few examples of what you consider gray literature in this context? This would make your search strategy even more transparent. You mention using the PROBAST and TRIPOD tools. It might be helpful to briefly mention what each of these tools helps you assess (e.g., risk of bias for PROBAST, reporting completeness for TRIPOD) directly in the methods section rather than just citing them. Regarding the databases mentioned in the methodology versus the supplementary material, it's important to note that the main "Search strategy" section explicitly lists Google Scholar, Scopus, and Cochrane Library (along with other databases) as sources that will be searched. However, in Supplementary file, which provides example search strategies for different databases, a specific search strategy for Google Scholar, Scopus, or Cochrane Library is not explicitly shown. For transparency and reproducibility, it would be beneficial for the authors to include example search strings for these databases as well in the supplementary material. Overall, I must say that this is a very well-put-together study protocol, and I genuinely enjoyed reading it. Addressing these minor points will enhance the clarity, transparency, and rigor of your protocol. To be honest, I see significant potential for publication here if these enhancements are made. Your detailed methodology and focus on a crucial area of research make this a valuable contribution. I wish you the best of luck with your scoping review. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: OLAYINKA ADEBAJO Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Dear Dr. Cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Marcello Moccia Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Please, carefully consider new comments and also improve responses to Reviewer 1. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The author did not address my previous concerns and therefore the current version is not suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: This is such an insightful article , although not novel, as there are similar articles that have explored the use of AI and wearable devices in managing alzheimer's disease. This article adds to the body of knowledge. Reviewer #3: I suppose that the revised manuscript has the content and quality to be published as a study protocol paper. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: OLAYINKA ADEBAJO Reviewer #3: Yes: Ryuichiro ARAKI ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Integration of wearable devices and artificial intelligence in alzheimer's disease: a scoping review protocol PONE-D-25-03879R2 Dear Dr. Cao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marcello Moccia Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing the comments and, again, sorry if the peer review process took longer than we expected. Reviewers' comments: |
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