Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-24754Subjective socioeconomic status moderates depression's impact on fairness perception in the ultimatum game: a moderated mediation modelPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Subhi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I have received reports from 2 expert reviewers. Both reviewers recommend a revision. The reviewers agree the research question is worthwhile, and the paper makes a useful contribution to the literature. However, several aspects need clarification, including the experimental procedures, statistical analysis, and discussion of the conclusions, as detailed in the reports. In your revisions, please include a response to each of the reviewers' comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 10 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study investigates the effect of depression on rejection behavior in the Ultimatum Game (UG), focusing on how fairness perception mediates responses to unfair offers. It also examines subjective Socioeconomic Status (SES) as a moderator in the relationship between depression, fairness perception, and rejection behavior. The authors find that higher levels of depression are associated with perceiving unfair offers as more fair, which in turn leads to lower rejection rates. The paper contributes meaningfully to the literature. However, several aspects of the experimental design and reporting require clarification and additional information. Major Comments 1. The authors should report detailed information about the fairness perception task, such as all offer amounts and the initial endowment used in the task. 2. More detailed information is needed about the basic experimental setup. Please include the number of sessions, average duration of each session, average participant payment, and average rejection rates for each of the nine possible offers in the UG task. 3. The incentive structure is unclear. Please explain in more detail how participants were compensated. Was the payment based on one randomly selected decision from the 18 tasks, or were all decisions used to calculate the final payment? 4. The rationale for using a threshold of 5 to define high SES is unclear. Other criteria such as the mean or median SES score could also be considered. The authors should report the median SES value and clarify whether the results are robust to alternative thresholds (e.g., using the mean or median). Would the main findings hold under a different SES cutoff? Minor Comments 1. Does the mention of statistical significance in line 252 refer to the 10% level? Please clarify. 2. Reference 30 appears to be missing from the list. 3. The reference list should be ordered numerically. Reviewer #2: This study examined the moderating effect of subjective SES on the relationship between depression and perceptions of fairness. In turn, perceptions of fairness influenced the decision to accept or reject offers in the ultimatum game. The moderation effect is interesting and demonstrates ways that personal experiences can affect how depression influences cognitive distortions. However, I have some remaining questions about the interpretation as well as some recommendations to improve the clarity of the manuscript. 1. I was expecting that depression would be a predictor of UG rejection rates, although in your introduction you wrote that there is mixed evidence of this relationship. This result has some implications for the hypothesis tested, but it is not directly stated in the results or discussed in context of the previous literature. I would like you to add a bit more in the results and discussion regarding the lack of this effect and why that might be. 2. Is there any reason to believe that depression would affect subjective SES? Given that we expect some distortion about the perceptions of the world in depression, could that alter the subjective experience of SES? Could you provide more information about the relationship between the two? 3. I’d like if the model could include the standardized beta weights in the figure 1 to make it easier to interpret. While it’s not necessary, you may also want to consider other tools to build the model such as powerpoint or google slides to make that easier. 4. Overall, the article could use some additional editing for grammar and clarity. There are several incomplete sentences (ex. “And fairness perception of unfair offers had a negative effect on rejection rate on unfair offers (β = -0.051, p < 0.01).”) that make it a bit harder to read. The writing in the introduction and discussion could also be more concise to get the point across as well. Right now, I had to read it several times to make sure I understood the argument being made. I believe you are arguing that the inconsistent relationship between depression and acceptance of unfair offers is due to differences in perceptions of fairness affected by the interaction of life experiences and cognitive distortions in depression, rather than solely depression. However, there were some other parts of the discussion that I had trouble fitting into the argument, such as the influence of medication and defense mechanisms. Please review these sections to ensure that they are concise and clear about the interpretation of your results. 5. There was a specific sentence that I found difficult to parse: “Depression is a defense mechanism for fairness perception”. I think this might be reversed from your meaning, although I’m not entirely sure. From the other points you’ve made, I would have thought that cognitive distortions to view the world as more fair would be the defense mechanism for depression. Could you please clarify? 6. Please provide a sensitivity analysis for the moderated mediation based on your sample size. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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