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| Original SubmissionJuly 29, 2024 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information.?> [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The purpose of this investigation was to evaluate the feasibility (data completeness and quality) and acceptability of implementing research grade wearable devices in a rural setting of Nouna, Burkina Faso. While this study was very novel, there are several major limitations. First, the study focuses on sex differences in feasibility and acceptability. However, this does not appear the purpose of the study. It is also unclear the purpose of comparing indoor and outdoor WBGT measurements outside of feasibility and acceptability. It is important for the survey to be developed systematically. The authors need to expand on how the survey was developed to ensure the questions align with the study objectives. Below are several items that authors must consider before a deeper evaluation of the manuscript. Abstract: Line 28-29: sentence needs to be revised for clarity Line 39: what does it mean by data was “very” Line 39: data should be plural consistenly throughout the manuscript Introduction: Line 48: has increased by 1.1? Line 53: The sentence needs to be revised. The term “heat stress” refers to the heat load (i.e., environmental conditions, physical exertion, and PPE). It appears the authors are referring to heat illness in this statement. Line 109: It is unclear what the authors are referring to by “closing the gap”. Does this mean that the assessment of physiological responses hasn’t been done before? Authors should consider how the collection of physiological responses would benefit workers in SSA. Authors are encouraged to consider how this information, after collected, will benefit the SAA inhabitants. Methods Line 137: what is the rationale for including men and women who are from the same household? Is this referring to the main residence? If not, authors should define the term “household”. Line 154: author should clarify how many total study visits. Is the first visit part of one of two, study “runs”? Line 155: make and model of device? What height was the environmental monitor placed at ? Line 185: it should be noted that it is an estimation of core body temperature (not a direct measure) The methods for the survey development should be clearly outlined in the methods section. Data analysis It is unclear if data analysis is performed on environmental data. - The variables being collected should be included in the data analysis section (ex. Sleep duration,step count, sleep efficiency) for clarity. A comparison between sexes is not mentioned before the data analysis section. It should be included previously. Results -There is no mention of collection of blood pressure in the methods section. -Line 247: what was used to determine data quality for WBGT? - Line 248-251: Authors should consider whether the inclusion of a comparison between indoor and outdoor WBGT should be removed since the overall objective of the study is assessment of data quality and feasibility of implementation. -Line 260-266: what criteria was used to determine data completeness and quality for GPS and ACT? - the comparison of men and women does not appear to be an objective of the study. -304-307: it is unclear whether the thematic subsections were chosen before or after the questionnaire was completed by participants. If it was performed before, the methods should be outlined in more detail and it should be Reviewer #2: This is a valuable report that discusses the potential of wearable devices in the harsh environment of Africa. However, there are a number of places throughout the report where the description is insufficient. In addition, there are some places where the experimental methods and interpretation of the results are not fully explained. Please consider making revisions, focusing on the points we have commented on. L.25: You write ‘mean ambient temperatures of 1.5°’, but the unit of temperature should be ‘°C’, not ‘°’. L.64: You mention‘even moderate heat stress (18° WBGT)’, but WBGT 18°is really ‘moderate heat stress’? In the reference cite, it seems to be mild heat stress. Also, 18° and 40° are inappropriate units, and should be °C. L89: Why is PSI not used in this study, even though it is mentioned as an excellent indicator here? If possible, please mention it L.153-156, L.172-173: Please clearly state the names of the devices used in the main text, not just in Figure S2. lso, please describe how the portable WBGT meter used here calculates WBGT. The method specified in ISO 7243 is the only correct method for WBGT, and if a different method is used, it is considered to be nothing more than an estimate, so you need to show in the literature, etc., how the estimate was made. Otherwise, you should indicate that these values are merely estimates. L170-172: What measurement factors were used to estimate WBGT in this measurement system, and how was it estimated? Please specify this in the main text so that it is clear to those who have only read this paper, rather than just citing reference 28. In addition, I have looked at Reference 28, and while there is a certain degree of correlation between the methods for estimating WBGT from meteorological observation data, they are not yet established, and it is thought that more data is needed. It is thought that WBGT is correct when measured using the method specified in ISO 7243, and that the accuracy of WBGT measured using other methods needs to be considered. L.175: Fig. S3 contains technical information on environmental measurements, but this information is completely inadequate. As mentioned above, please clearly state what measurements were taken and how the WBGT value was calculated (or estimated). L177-178: You use a wrist-mounted accelerometer, but can you understand the activity status of the whole body with a wrist-mounted accelerometer? I think it would be better to cite any references you have on this point. L180: Please cite the R package used and also the references for each calculated value. L183: There is a missing period after ‘during nightly rest [30,31]’. L185-188: The deep body temperature is measured using a heat flux sensor attached to the forehead, but there is a lack of information about the validity of this. You cite reference 33, but this reference only measures CBT in the same way as this report, and does not demonstrate its validity. It seems that the paper cited in reference 33 should be cited, not reference 33? Please re-examine the validity of the cited references. Furthermore, it is our understanding that the estimation of deep body temperature using this method is not yet established, and there is debate about its validity. I think this point should be mentioned in the discussion. L188-189: Please either provide details of the ‘custom-made headband’ or a list of references. L193: Please include information that will allow readers to reproduce ‘the native software’. L197-198: We have checked the WBGT device, and it appears to be a product made by Canmore in Taiwan, not Germany. Please be more precise in your description. L214-218, L269-271: The quality of data is evaluated by asking whether ‘all possible data points exist in the valid data set’, but is this enough to determine validity? If the accuracy of the data is not evaluated, it is difficult to evaluate the quality, isn't it? Please include your thoughts on this point in your discussion. L246: The data integrity is said to have reached 85%, but what is the reason for the remaining 15% not being complete? Please describe this in your consideration to the extent possible L247-248: You write 'No decline in data quality was observed', but how did you determine that there was no decline in quality? L249-250: It says that the indoor WBGT was higher than the outdoor WBGT, but normally, the WBGT is thought to be higher outdoors, where the black globe temperature is higher. Please describe in the discussion section any possible reasons why the indoor WBGT was higher this time. In addition, different methods are used to measure indoor and outdoor WBGT. These differ from the methods specified in ISO 7243, so is it possible to compare indoor and outdoor WBGT in this situation? Please consider this point as well. L314-318: Did the tendency to make negative statements about receptivity differ depending on the type of wearable device? Please describe this to the extent possible, as there is a possibility that receptivity will differ depending on the type of device. If you did not obtain any data, please state this in the discussion. L326-327: The same applies here as above. Were there any differences between the types of device? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Feasibility and acceptability of research-grade wearables for health and labor capacity monitoring in the context of climate change and heat stress: the case of Nouna, Burkina Faso PONE-D-24-28297R1 Dear Dr. Zout, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hidenori Otani, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for reviewing the revised manuscript. I have confirmed that you have responded appropriately to the review comments. Therefore, I have decided to accept this manuscrip ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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