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| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2025 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: Observations The study was done through a systematic literature analysis based on Global Burden of Disease (GBD) 2021 database. The study aimed at providing a comprehensive analysis of the global, regional, and national burden of Age Related and other Hearing Loss (ARoHL). The study involved the GBD 2021 database which integrates multidimensional epidemiological data from 204 countries and regions worldwide, covering 371 diseases and health issues, as well as 88 risk factors, spanning the years 1990 to 2021. Overall, it is a well-thought out and executed research manuscript capable of contributing to the body of knowledge regarding the impact of ARoHL. However, I have the following observations, 1. Methods: The study utilized a variety of instruments such as the health inequality analysis. Based on the populations of countries like China and India, their contribution which had the largest impact on Slope index of Inequality, might have been due this factor. Hence comparism with smaller countries may not truly give realistic values. Hence might tend to have inherent sampling bias. 2. References: The referencing style appears generally fine. However, it appears the reference cited (references 9) due to its publication date, 1978 might not be reflective of current trends due to being slightly outdated. 3. The phrasing of the language used in the entire document could benefit from a more professional grammatical input. 4. I found the title, study design, statistics, figures and tables quite satisfactory. Reviewer #2: Comments on Strengths. a) Good graphs/figures with appropriate labels and annotations. Best figures are 1, 2, 4. b) Compréhensive, quantitative analyses. Good use of techniques for decomposition analysis, cross-country inequality analysis, frontier analysis, and predictive analysis. c) Attempt to provide a quantitative perspective for global, regional, and national prevalence of ARoHL that would be helpful for developing health-care plans appropriate for a given region/nation. Issues, Items, and Questions to be Addressed. General: 1) Provide a table with definitions for all acronyms used throughout the manuscript. 2) When giving numbers, show only the significant digits and use exponential notation when spanning several orders of magnitude. Do this throughout the text and also for Table 1 (which is difficult to read as it is). 3) Throughout the text, as a “standard”, state and use and discuss all variables in terms of normalized (for population size; i.e., per 100,000). When stating/discussion “raw”, un-normalized values, then clearly state that (and distinguish from normalized values). Specific: 1) The reference list is difficult to read. Re-format. For example, for a given reference indent all lines after the first. In addition, double space between references. 2) Table 1 is difficult to read. Re-format per above. Consider putting this into supplementary material (and relying on the figures). 3) Abstract a. Emphasize prevalence and YLDs that are normalized for population size (e.g., cases per fixed number of people within a given population). b. Emphasize trends, disparities, and differences between using normalized values (for population size) for prevalence an YLDs. 4) Add more detail, emphasis, and discussion about normalizing the prevalence, YLDs, and distribution of ARoHL with respect to the population size at each time point being analyzed. In other words, prevalence per fixed number of people within a given population. The normalized variables are more meaningful in terms of explaining possible effects of the various “driving” factors (compared to the effect of increases/decreases in the total population size on the raw, absolute numbers). 5) Provide some examples of possible actions that could be taken and strategies that could be proposed, in view of the projections for future trends. 6) Decomposition Analysis a. Discuss possible other/confounding factors, including the following: noise-induced hearing loss (outside environment and home/work conditions), side-effects of medical treatments (medications/drugs, surgery, radiation), family history and genetic pre-dispositions. b. Line 134: Provide a table listing all the factors “behind changes in the disease burden of ARoHL” and their percent contributions. Emphasize the percent contributions for changes in a normalized (for population size) prevalence of ARoHL. c. Line 140: Discuss “the accelerated aging process”. d. Line 147: Explain and discuss the meaning of “for a comprehensive understanding of the epidemiological evolution of middle ear disease”, within the context of ARoHL. Why refer to “middle ear disease”? 7) Results a. Emphasize ASPR per 100,000 people within a given population (i.e., normalized for population size). b. Lines 216 - 218: State that these numbers for prevalence are a raw number of cases in the population. State that the ASPR is per 100,000 (i.e., normalized for population size. It is especially meaningful to emphasize changes in a normalized prevalence (cases per fixed number of people within a population) over the 21-year time period. Thereafter, one can consider possible factors involved (other than population increase or decrease). c. Lines 218 – 219: In regard to “age-standardized prevalence rate (ASPR)”, provide a literature reference/citation that details/describes comparing across populations with different age structures (using weights based on the age distribution of a standard population). d. Table 1 legend: State the EAPC is based on the normalized ASPRs (per 100,000 people). e. Figure 1 legend: State normalized ASPR and normalized YLDs are shown in the figure. 8) Conclusions a. Lines 448 – 452: Expand. Besides “raw”, un-normalized total numbers, emphasize changes in numbers that are normalized for population size. Summarize the percent changes (for normalized data). This way one can meaningfully consider changes in prevalence related to all factors (other than population growth) which might be important for considering intervention strategies. Finally, suggest (speculate) possible intervention strategies. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Stephen O Adebola Reviewer #2: Yes: John H Anderson, MD, PhD ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Global burden and trends of age-related and other hearing loss: A 32-year analysis and future projections based on the GBD 2021 PONE-D-25-18205R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gauri Mankekar, MD,PhD,FACS Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Observations The study was done through a systematic literature analysis based on the Global Burden of Disease (GBD) 2021 database. The study aimed at providing a comprehensive analysis of the global, regional, and national burden of Age Related and other Hearing Loss (ARoHL). The study involved the GBD 2021 database which integrates multidimensional epidemiological data from 204 countries and regions worldwide, covering 371 diseases and health issues, as well as 88 risk factors, spanning the years 1990 to 2021. Overall, it is a well-thought out and executed research manuscript capable of contributing to the body of knowledge regarding the impact of ARoHL. However, I have the following observations, 1. Methods: Study design appeared a bit skewed, but acceptable in current version 2. References: Improved upon based on updated revised copy 3. The phrasing of the language reads more grammatically based on professional input. I found the title, study design, statistics, figures and tables quite satisfactory Reviewer #2: The reviewers' requests were fully addressed. The clarity, specificity, and context for the results have been significantly improved. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Stephen Adebola Reviewer #2: Yes: John H Anderson ********** |
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