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PONE-D-25-23279Effects of Boysenberry on Postprandial Energy Metabolism in Healthy Adults: A Randomized Controlled Crossover TrialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Furuuchi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper investigates the effects of boysenberry juice (BoyJ) containing boysenberry anthocyanins (BoyACs) on postprandial energy metabolism, particularly focusing on diet-induced thermogenesis (DIT) and fat oxidation in healthy adults. Below are some comments/questions: 1. Sample Size Justification: The target sample size (n=22) was based on a pilot study measuring cold-induced BAT activation, but this study assessed DIT under thermoneutral conditions. Was the effect size for DIT expected to be similar to cold-exposure BAT effects? If not, how was the power calculation adjusted? In addition, COVID-19 reduced the final sample to n=19 (14% dropout). Was an intention-to-treat (ITT) analysis considered to mitigate bias from dropouts? 2. The significant fat oxidation finding contrasts with null DIT/BAT results. Could non-BAT mechanisms (e.g., hepatic or muscle metabolism) explain this effect? Were other pathways (e.g., AMPK/SIRT1) explored? 3. ΔTscv–ch P-value Discrepancy: Text states p=0.210 for ΔTscv–ch (BAT temperature), but Table 4 reports p=0.133. Which statistical test was primary (mixed-model vs. t-test)? Please clarify. 4. Fat oxidation is reported as mg/min in tables but g/min in supplemental files (S2/S4). Can units be standardized to avoid confusion? 5. Washout Period: A 4-week washout was used, but no pharmacokinetic data confirmed BoyAC clearance. Was this duration validated for anthocyanins or their metabolic effects? 6. BAT Measurement Sensitivity: BAT activity was assessed via skin temperature (not gold-standard PET/CT). Could the null BAT result reflect low sensitivity of thermography under thermoneutral conditions? 7. Post Hoc Power: The observed power for DIT was ~30% (when small effect size: d=0.35 is used). Should the DIT result be framed as "inconclusive due to underpowering" rather than "no effect"? 8. Participants were healthy adults (BMI 18.5–25). Would the findings extend to metabolic syndrome or obese populations? Reviewer #2: Thank you for the invitation to review this impressive randomized controlled crossover human clinical trial (with washout period!) investigating the potential for boysenberries to modulate energy expenditure and substrate utilization. It takes a village of scientists to perform this careful gold standard in our field of nutritional sciences. This is a strong backbone of empirical research – my suggestions are reserved simply for adding some details where I thought it would help the authors tell their story more effectively, so as to be better received by interested readers. Compliments: I perform the same type of statistical testing – it is honest, and is also sensitive to detect changes that effectively tease apart subtle diet effects on EE, substrate metabolism, or both. Cheers to the research team for an excellent design. 19 participants is a robust and hard-earned pilot dataset – as the authors pointed out they have achieved statistical power – I empathize with the mentality to tell the readers this project was upended by the pandemic – my gentle point is you have power and you have discovered meaningful differences. Beyond what is stated re the CONSORT on line 98, I propose omitting mention of the hardships of the pandemic (lines 181-183, and lines 201-202, for example) unless there is additional meaningful context I missed – in which case I meant no offense. Minor suggestions – this is mostly commentary for your team to consider rather than pointed criticisms or “required” corrections: Line 68 – I suggest replacing “fat consumption” with “fat oxidation” Lines 70-75 – great tie in with the metabolic pathway activation – consider briefly elaborating on SIRT1 in relation to PGC1a and AMPK – one proposed axis of anthocyanin activation. Line 111 – Observing meaningful effects with 61 mg of anthocyanins is remarkable – more below on that topic. Line 122 – Simple randomization was used – please consider reporting how this affected your sex balance across sequences – I suggest using “covariate adaptive randomization” (stratify sequence on gender) next time. Line 194-195: I again commend the excellent approach to statistical testing. In one of our previous studies, we noted possible carryover effects when there was only a 1-week crossover (being driven by 1 volunteer in particular, who was also technically insulin resistant). We therefore became more conservative in follow-up studies and increased our washout period to 2 weeks. We only extended to 3 weeks in a recent study due to metabolic cart limitations. My suspicion is more “metabolically compromised” study volunteers (BMI > 25 and with associated metabolic stress) may heighten risk of carryover effects. In essence, I suggest your research team consider shortening your washout period, if time constraints of your current washout period length are complicating your productivity. Lines 222-225 – it is interesting that you detected a significant difference in fat oxidation but not the RQ. In our hands, any time we observed significant effects on fat oxidation, the RQ also typically was significantly different (rationale since the fat oxidation calculation incorporates VO2 and VCO2). I wonder if your significance in one but not both is also a testament to more subtle differences. Considering the relatively low daily dose of anthocyanins (we hypothesize there is a threshold dose to reach measurable differences, at least in overweight/obese volunteers). Lines 238-278 – very nice discussion. Mentioned above, the two things that impress me with your work are the relatively low dose of daily anthocyanins, and that you tested in very healthy individuals (by BMI standards, at least, indicating your cohort was within the healthy weight range). You may consider talking to the potency of boysenberry juice, as I do not recollect a study that could demonstrate detectable changes at 60 mg daily dose – this may speak to the potency of the anthocyanin composition of your berry juice – it could also be a testament to threshold doses for different body sizes? Even with the interesting nuance – I caution you to consider higher doses if you intend to test overweight/obese volunteers in future work. We have fed up to 720 mg of elderberry juice for 7 days – despite the low palatability of 100% juice, only 1 volunteer mentioned upset stomach. 289-290 – strong conclusion – well done. Best wishes in your future pursuits on this topic – thank you for the chance to help elevate your work. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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