Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-21061Effects of Interferential Stimulation on Clinical Symptoms and Urodynamic Findings in Women with Voiding Dysfunction: A Protocol of Randomized Clinical TrialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Haeri, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please ensure that you refer to Figure 1 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors reported a study aiming to describe the effects of inferential stimulation on clinical symptom and urodynamic findings in women with voiding dysfunction. Generally the study is interesting, but it has some issues. Below there are some comments which need to be taken into account during the revision of this manuscript. 1. Please define voiding dysfunction according to the ICS guidelines. 2. The VD is a general term. Which type of VD patients will include in the study? Describe it completely. 3. Please define positive urodynamic criteria favor the voiding dysfunction diagnosis in the inclusion criteria part. 4. Please include these criteria as exclusion criteria “ 5) absence of pregnancy and breastfeeding, 6) no history of spinal and pelvic surgery in the last 2 years, 7) no history of back and pelvic malignancies in the last 2 years, 8) absence of structural disorder, neurological disorder, history of chronic disease [1], 9) absence of neurological bladder [1], 10) absence of voiding dysfunction secondary to drug use or other diseases [1], 11) absence of high degrees of pelvic organ prolapse (degrees higher than 2)”. 5. Why do you will concern only on Qmax measurement in this study? What about other parameters of uroflowmetry such as voiding volume, Qave, voiding time ? 6. What is the purpose of using these parameters” a carrier frequency of 4000 Hz and a beat frequency of 160-80 Hz” of IF therapy in this study? Which condition will be improved? Please add a reference. 7. Will you use sham stimulation in the control group? If yes, why the output intensity will be adjusted to the patient's initial sensation threshold and the device output will be terminated after one minute? Is increasing of intensity in sham stimulation correct?Please clear it. Reviewer #2: Statistically the manuscript is well designed and the analysis is simple. There are a few clarifications needed. 1. The sample size section is incomplete? In the sample size section, what effect size is being used for the intervention comparison? How did one arrive at 14 per group? In the sample size calculation method in the supplementary protocol there is even less information justifying 14 per group. 2. In the Statistical analysis section, a Two way repeated measure ANOVA and one way ANOVA are mentioned. Why can’t one get the group (intervention) and time affects from the repeated measures ANOVA and test for interaction as well? 3. Unless I am misunderstanding the primary endpoints, it appears that there are about three primary outcome measures (urinary flow patterns, maximum urinary flow rate, and duration of urination). There may actually be four as per the supplementary protocol. What adjustment is being made for multiple comparisons? This will affect the overall type I error. 4. The document is nicely written in general. There are a few typos. Please check for typos: e.g. line 415 , in the ‘Adverse’ Events section, “Also, it is easy to application”. Should be, “Also, it is easy to apply.” Also, the sentence structure may be awkward in a number of places. Thanks! Reviewer #3: Thank you for submitting this protocol. I don't have any major concerns about the grammar or flow of the manuscript - before resubmitting, check the capitalization of your affiliations. There are a few areas that need a bit more detail to help with my understanding: 1. Under Study Design (line 141), it states that "Patients will be recruited through urologist referrals". However, under Recruitment (line 146-47), it states that "Sampling will be conducted using a non-probability convenience sampling method, based on specialist referrals and public announcements on social media." Please clarify how participants are being recruited, so it is consistent between the two sections. 2. Outcomes section a. I recommend including the minimum clinically important difference (MCID) for the ICIQ-FLUTS, PFDI-20, and GRCS. These values will help to determine if the changes noted with the intervention are clinically meaningful. b. Please provide a bit more detail about how the bladder diary will be completed. For example, how will participants measure voiding volumes and fluid intake? Which three days will be selected to complete the bladder diary (e.g., weekdays versus weekends)? What will be done to help with fully completing the bladder diaries (I often find patients have difficulties filling them out for the full three days)? 3. Treatment protocol section a. Please provide more details about how the physiotherapist will guide pelvic floor contractions (lines 275-277), will they be using ultrasound, external palpation, or an internal exam? b. Please clarify the pelvic floor muscle training parameters - is the participant expected to to one set of 10 in each of the three positions? c. Will the control group remain connected to the IFC for the full 20 minutes, but with the current disconnected after 1 minute? Please clarify in lines 303-307 if the duration attached to the machine will be the same as the treatment group. 4. Statistical analysis a. To make it clear to the reader, please list the demographic quantitative variables and the qualitative variables in the first paragraph of this section. 5. References a. I'd recommend referring to the most recent publications as possible (e.g., Incontinence 7th Edition - https://www.ics.org/education/icspublications/icibooks) when developing your inclusion criteria and describing the urodynamic testing you'll be using. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Lida Sharifi- Rad Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-25-21061R1Effects of Interferential Stimulation on Clinical Symptoms and Urodynamic Findings in Women with Voiding Dysfunction: A Protocol of Randomized Clinical TrialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Haeri, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 03 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Mazyar Zahir Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Please kindly address the following minimal comments prior to the final acceptance of your manuscript: 1) Ensure the accurate use of the terms "dysfunctional voiding" and "voiding dysfunction". As noted by the first reviewer, the term "dysfunctional voiding" is primarily a pediatric diagnosis. In older patients, alternative terms such as "voiding dysfunction", "non-neurogenic detrusor sphincter dyssynergia", or "functional bladder outlet obstruction" may be more appropriate. Please ensure uniformity in definitions and terminology throughout. 2) We also recommend a final round of proofreading for grammatical and typographical accuracy. A thorough English language edit by a native speaker, as well as a formatting and layout edit would be appreciated. Additionally, kindly eliminate redundancies where possible. For example: - In the statistical analysis section, several tests are described more than once and could be consolidated, - In the inclusion and exclusion criteria section, the reference numbers are intermingled with the actual criteria causing confusion. You may consider placing the references at the beginning of the section or alongside the first mention of the criteria. - Some subheadings such as "Objectives" (line 135), and "Participants Schedule" (line 165) may be removed to streamline the study. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors who made the necessary corrections to develop the manuscript. Only I have one question. s it permissible to use the term of dysfunctional voiding in older women? Because pelvic floor muscle weakness or bladder neck disorders are more common in these older women, and the diagnosis of dysfunctional voiding was made by positive EMG activity during voiding.. Reviewer #2: None XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Reviewer #3: Thank you for making changes to the manuscript, addressing our concerns. I noticed some small typos, missing punctuation, and grammatical errors during my review - I'd encourage you to ask a friend or colleague not associated with this manuscript to proof read the final submission. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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