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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: To be accepted for publication in PLOS One, research articles must satisfy the following criteria: 1. The study presents the results of original research. Yes. The manuscript presents an original methodological contribution to demographic measurement by proposing a new index, “RWtot”, for assessing the quality of age reporting. The innovation lies in its mathematically robust formulation and its ability to overcome limitations in existing indices like the Total Modified Whipple Index (Wtot) and Noumbissi’s digit-specific indices. The proposed method enhances accuracy and interpretability for assessing age heaping across all digits. 2. Results reported have not been published elsewhere. The approach and formulation of the RWtot index appear to be novel and are applied to publicly available Demographic and Health Survey (DHS) datasets and simulated data for validation. 3. Experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail. Yes. The authors provide clear mathematical derivations, define all index formulas, and apply the method to extensive real-world datasets from India, Pakistan, and Turkey. They also include simulation studies that support the index's robustness. The statistical procedures and underlying assumptions (e.g., equal terminal digit probabilities) are well justified. 4. Conclusions are presented in an appropriate fashion and are supported by the data. Yes. The conclusions follow logically from the empirical and simulated results. The authors demonstrate that RWtot produces more balanced and accurate assessments of digit preferences. Figures and tables effectively support these claims. 5. The article is presented in an intelligible fashion and is written in standard English. Generally yes. The article is intelligible and the structure is coherent. However, minor language improvements are recommended. 6. The research meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. Yes. The research uses publicly available DHS data. No human or animal subjects are directly involved. 7. The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability. Yes. Data used in the study are available through the DHS Program website. Summary of the Article This paper introduces a more precise measure for detecting age heaping in demographic data by proposing a re-modified version of the Total Modified Whipple’s Index (RWtot). The authors critique the limitations of existing age-quality measures—particularly the Whipple Index and Spoorenberg's Total Modified Whipple Index—arguing that these either focus too narrowly on digits ending in 0 and 5 or suffer from biased digit-specific weighting. The proposed RWtot, grounded in the original Whipple’s structure, ensures equal treatment of all terminal digits (0–9) and addresses methodological inconsistencies in earlier adaptations. The method is tested using DHS data from India, Pakistan, and Turkey and validated with simulated datasets. General Assessment This is an excellent and well-structured contribution to the field of demographic data quality. The authors succeed in both identifying a nuanced problem—bias in existing digit-specific indices—and offering a mathematically sound and interpretable solution. The paper is methodologically rigorous, clearly written, and practically relevant for demographers and statistical agencies working with census or survey data. Its novelty lies in the construction of RWtot using consistent probabilistic and mathematical logic, while retaining computational simplicity. 3. Major Comments Main Strengths: The article makes a clear and justified methodological advancement by proposing RWtot. The RWtot is built on a solid critique of the denominator issues in Noumbissi's Wi index and addresses them using a uniform framework (equations 15–24). The authors have provided convincing empirical tests using large DHS datasets and simulation studies. The work is timely and relevant for low- and middle-income countries, where age misreporting is common and demographic indicators depend on clean data. Suggestions for Strengthening the Paper: Robustness Checks: Consider including additional countries (e.g., sub-Saharan Africa) to show geographic robustness. Sensitivity to Age Range: While the focus is rightly on 23–62, a brief note on the applicability (or adjustment needs) for other age ranges could broaden utility. Terminology Consistency: Throughout the article, ensure consistent use of symbols (e.g., WI, Wi, RWtot) to avoid reader confusion, especially in equations and figures. 4. Minor Comments Ensure that all figures and tables are referenced in the text and are clearly labeled in the final version. 5. Recommendation Accepted with Minor Revisions The manuscript makes a meaningful and methodologically robust contribution to demographic measurement. The paper is accepted with minor revision, especially focus the stylistic and presentation will further improve the clarity and accessibility to the readers. Reviewer #2: Review of Manuscript Quality of reported ages: A robust re-modification in Total Modified Whipple's Index Summary and Overall Impression I would like to commend the authors for this well-researched and timely manuscript. The paper addresses a fundamental and persistent challenge in demographic data analysis the accurate measurement of age misreporting. The work makes a significant and valuable contribution by proposing a new, robust summary index (RWtot) for measuring age heaping across all ten terminal digits. The importance of this paper lies not only in the introduction of a new method but also in its rigorous and clear critique of the mathematical shortcomings in existing comprehensive indices. Specifically, the authors’ deconstruction of the Total Modified Whipple Index (Wtot) , as proposed by Spoorenberg(2007) based on Noumbissi’s work, is a critical insight for the field. This manuscript is a fine example of methodological refinement that promises to improve the quality and reliability of demographic analysis. A major strength of the manuscript is its clear and logical deconstruction of the evolution of Whipple’s Index, from its original form to its various modifications. The critique of Noumbissi’s (1992) modification and the subsequent Spoorenberg index(Wtot) is particularly compelling. The authors effectively demonstrate the mathematical flaw wherein the formulas for terminal digits 1,2,3 and 4 lead to an overestimation of preference. The authors employ a highly effective multi-pronged validation approach that substantially strengthens their claims. Suggestions for Improvement The manuscript is strong, and the following suggestions are offered in a constructive spirit to enhance its clarity, impact, and utility for the research community. Refine the Terminology While the name “remodified of total modified Whipple’s Index” (and its abbreviation RWtot) is accurate in describing its lineage, it is somewhat cumbersome and may hinder recall and adoption. To facilitate easier reference and citation, the authors might consider a more concise and memorable name. Suggestions include� • Comprehensive Rogers-Whipple Index (CRWI), to credit the methodological foundation. • Ten-Digit Whipple Index (TDWI) , to highlight its key feature. • Robust General Whipple Index (RGWI) , to emphasize its stability. A more distinct name could help establish the index as a new standard in literature. Address the Linearity Assumption Trade-off The paper correctly notes that Noumbissi’s method was developed partly to address the “crude” 10-year linearity assumption of Roger’s index , opting instead for a more granular 5-year assumption. The proposed RWtot, by building on Roger’s framework, reverts to this 10-year assumption. The manuscript would be strengthened by a brief discussion explicitly acknowledging this trade-off. The authors should clarify why accepting the broader 10-year linearity assumption is a worthwhile compromise to achieve a mathematically consistent and robust summary index that covers all ten digits without distortion. Elaborate on the Proposed Quality Criteria The paper proposes a new set of quality criteria for the RWtot index in Table 2. This is an excellent and necessary step for practical application. However, the derivation of these specific thresholds (e.g. ,“Moderate” for a value of 1.00-1.99, corresponding to 5-9.99% of people reporting an incorrect age) is not detailed. The manuscript would be significantly enhanced by adding a paragraph explaining the rationale behind these ranges. How were these thresholds calibrated? A clearer justification would increase transparency and boost the confidence of researchers looking to apply these standards in their own work. Enhance Data Visualization The figures are informative, but the comparison between the competing indices could be made more direct and impactful. I would suggest creating a single, combined chart for a key dataset that plots the digit preference indices side-by-side. For example , using the Turkey 1993 data from Table 4 , a bar chart could directly contrast Noumbissi’s W; with the proposed WI; for each digit. This would provide a powerful , at-a-glance visualization of the overestimation issue in the former method and the more plausible distribution of the latter. Concluding Remarks and Recommendation In conclusion , this manuscript presents a valuable, robust, and well-validated tool for demographic analysis. It successfully identifies and rectifies a significant mathematical flaw in a widely used method for assessing age data quality. The proposed RWtot index is a clear improvement, offering researchers a more reliable and comprehensive measure of age misreporting. The paper’s strengths are substantial , and the identified areas for improvement are addressable through minor revisions that would further clarify its contributions and enhance its practical utility. Recommendation: I recommend this manuscript for publication. The proposed index represents a significant and needed improvement over existing methods for assessing the overall quality of age reporting. I am confident that this work will be of great interest and utility to the demographic research community. Publication is recommended following minor revisions to address the constructive suggestions outlined in this review. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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