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| Original SubmissionDecember 14, 2024 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors assessed the global burden of NAFLD from 1990 to 2021 encompassing 204 countries, 21 regions with varying disease burdens, and 5 SDI areas. Projections of global burden trends were made using a Bayesian age-period-cohort (BAPC) model. The study provides informative summaries of increasing NAFLD burden overall and national level. My questions below are related to projection, estimation of association between risk factors and NAFLD burden, and their interpretations which needs further clarification. The authors used BAPC models to estimate reasonable predictions of global burden trends. Additional details would help understand the approach. What prior was used? Has sensitivity analysis done based on the different choices of priors? The authors also mention the prediction yields precise predictions of ASIR, ASPR, and ASMR (line 287). Please elaborate on the reliability and robustness of the predictions. From Figure 3, high SDI group has the lowest incidence and prevalence of NAFLD, but all other groups have wide overlap. How is the uncertainty represented by the ribbons around the estimates captured here? Are these model-based confidence intervals? If not, have the authors considered fitting a model to test whether middle SDI has the highest and high SDI has the lowest ASIR and ASPR trends over time? Why is there such a big gap of ASIR and ASPR trends between high SDI vs. other SDI? Do the authors have hypothesis driving this? The authors used SDI calculated from several social factors, including the fertility rate of the population aged <25 years, the education level of the population aged >15 years, and per capita income. Have the authors investigated the association of these individual factors to NAFLD burden? The risk factors were assessed at country and regional levels. Were data available on a more granular level? If not, would the authors see this as a limitation to the study? The inverted U-shaped relationship depicted in the figures seems to be heavily influenced by the outlier regions. I suggest removing the smoothed lines unless they are model based. Can the authors elaborate on the effects beyond SDI that may influence these outliers (North Africa and Middle East has the highest prevalence and incidence and Central and Andean Latin America have highest death rate and DALYs)? Minor points Abstract Results line 32 & Results line 129: it is unclear what “this age group” refers to. Abstract Results line 35: SDI needs to be defined. The fonts of texts and legends in figures 4 and 5 should be increased. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Global burden of NAFLD 1990-2021 and projections to 2035: results from the global burden of disease study 2021 PONE-D-24-57511R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hamidreza Karimi-Sari Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for thoroughly addressing all my comments. I believe the manuscript has greater clarity and have no further questions. Reviewer #2: Thank you to the authors for their thorough responses to the feedback and efforts to address them. I commend the authors for this rigorous, impactful and novel research. Its findings have important implications in addressing NAFLD worldwide. I just have minor comments: Abstract: The abstract was well-written. I have a few suggestions: 1) Add predicting the projection of NAFLD in the aims sentence (“This study used...”). 2) Remove repetition in the Background and Methods. For example, the time period was repeated three times and the data source twice. 3) Briefly introduce the socio-demographic index and its source. Figures/Tables: As mentioned by a previous reviewer, it remains unclear what the ribbons in Figure 3 represent based on the figure alone. It could be informative to add 95% UI and 95% CI in the legendary or a footnote. Similarly, Tables 1 and 2 specify either 95% UI or 95% CI for ASPR and EAPC, but not incident or prevalent cases. What do the intervals for these mean? I couldn’t find it in the methods. Results: There was a tendency in some subsections, such as Age and sex patterns and Risk factors attributable to NAFLD burden, to interpret the results in the Results rather than the Discussion. For example, the authors wrote in lines 194-196: “...which may mean that younger men are more likely to develop NAFLD.” Additionally, in lines 213-214: “These suggested the importance of fasting plasma glucose management for NAFLD control (Fig 6A, 6B).” The Results section should report findings objectively, while interpretation of findings be reported in the Discussion. Overall, I commend the authors for their wonderful work. I look forward to seeing the research through. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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