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| Original SubmissionFebruary 19, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a well-structured study with a clear methodology. DiabetesXpertNet, an attention-based CNN model, improves Type 2 diabetes prediction with strong performance metrics, including 89.98% accuracy and 91.95% AUC. The results are well-supported, but adding statistical significance tests, such as p-values or confidence intervals, would strengthen the claims. The statistical analysis is rigorous, incorporating cross-validation, GridSearchCV, and LASSO regression. However, including tests like t-tests or ANOVA for model comparison would provide more robust validation. The dataset used, the Pima Indians Diabetes Dataset, is publicly available, which aligns with open data policies. If any preprocessing steps modified the dataset, sharing those versions would improve reproducibility. The manuscript is generally clear but could benefit from minor grammar and formatting improvements. Some technical terms might need simpler explanations for broader readability. A quick proofreading pass would enhance clarity. A discussion on potential clinical applications and ethical considerations, such as biases in AI-driven medical predictions, would add depth. Testing the model on an external dataset would also help validate its generalizability. Overall, this study makes a valuable contribution to diabetes prediction research. With improvements in language clarity, statistical reporting, and data transparency, it has strong potential for publication. Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a novel and well-structured approach to Type 2 diabetes prediction using DiabetesXpertNet. The combination of dynamic channel attention modules and context-aware feature enhancers adds depth to the model's capabilities. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Lamiaa Mohammed Salem Akoosh Reviewer #2: Yes: Ruchika Sharma ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Farnoosh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sameena Naaz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: Please address the concerns raised by the reviewers [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** Reviewer #1: The revised manuscript has improved substantially. Statistical significance testing, external dataset validation, and improved computational reporting have addressed the previous concerns. The manuscript is now scientifically sound, conclusions are well-supported, and it is clearly written. Minor revisions are recommended for completeness, including a comparative architectural discussion and an optional ablation study. Suggested citations have also been provided to improve literature context. Reviewer #3: 1. The authors claim the architecture is novel, but fail to clearly contrast it with existing attention-based CNNs or explain how their model is suited specifically to tabular data. 2. Although comparisons are made with “standard CNNs” and traditional ML models, the state-of-the-art in medical prediction includes transformer-based models, gradient-boosted trees (like XGBoost), and ensemble techniques, none of which are considered. 3. The authors introduced several architectural components and preprocessing steps, yet did not perform an individual contribution of each. Deferment of ablation studies to future work undermines the rigor of the current manuscript. These are fundamental validations, not optional extensions. 4. Although the authors added the Frankfurt Hospital Germany Diabetes Dataset (FHGDD), it is not sufficiently described. 5. Clinical applications demand interpretability. Despite using attention mechanisms, no effort is made to visualize or analyze which features the model attends to. To demonstrate how predictions are formed, it is suggested to add SHAP, LIME, or attention heatmaps. 6. It is unclear how the model handles missing data in real-time clinical environments (e.g., in situations where features like insulin level may not be routinely available). 7. The use of logistic regression-based class weighting is unclear. Is this just for baseline models or also used within the deep learning pipeline? 8. The manuscript is excessively long and verbose (25+ pages) and filled with redundant descriptions (especially of preprocessing). Eliminating the redundant information is highly advised. 9. Author must cite relevant studies such as (https://doi.org/10.1109/UBMYK48245.2019.8965556). The manuscript is full of irrelevant references, such as below. Authors must remove all irrelevant references. Only cite studies related to the subject in question. a. Ref [61] (Tugrul, B., E. Elfatimi, and R. Eryigit, Convolutional neural networks in detection of plant leaf diseases: A review. Agriculture, 2022. 12(8): p. 1192.) b. Ref [58] (Huang, X. and W. Pan, Linear regression and two-class classification with gene expression data. Bioinformatics, 2003. 19(16): p. 2072-2078) c. Ref [56] (ERDOĞAN, İ., FIBER OPTIC SENSORS AND ANALYSIS OF SENSOR PARAMETERS WITH ARTIFICIAL NEURAL NETWORK BASED OPTIMIZATION ALGORITHM. 2023.) d. Ref [52] (Farnoosh, R. and K. Abnoosian, A robust innovative pipeline-based machine learning framework for predicting COVID-19 in Mexican Patients. International Journal of System Assurance Engineering and Management, 2024: p.1-19.) e. Ref [48] (Nyitrai, T. and M. Virág, The effects of handling outliers on the performance of bankruptcy prediction models. Socio-Economic Planning Sciences, 2019. 67: p. 34-42.) f. Ref [36] (Alneamy, J.S.M., et al., Utilizing hybrid functional fuzzy wavelet neural networks with a teaching learning-based optimization algorithm for medical disease diagnosis. Computers in biology and medicine, 2019. 112: p. 103348). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Lamiaa Mohsmmed Salem Akoosh Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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DiabetesXpertNet: An Innovative Attention-Based CNN for Accurate Type 2 Diabetes Prediction PONE-D-25-08923R2 Dear Dr. Farnoosh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sameena Naaz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Paper can be accepted in its current form Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for the substantial improvements made in this revision. The manuscript now presents a well-structured, rigorous, and scientifically sound contribution. I particularly appreciate the enhancements in this version: clearer architectural comparisons, statistical significance testing, external validation with the Frankfurt dataset, SHAP-based interpretability, and improved clarity in methodology and related work. These additions address all previously raised concerns. The study now reads clearly and demonstrates strong potential for real-world application in AI-based diabetes prediction. I find no issues related to ethics or dual publication. Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed all the concerns. Thank you no more concerns. The authors have addressed all the concerns. Thank you no more concerns. The authors have addressed all the concerns. Thank you no more concerns. The authors have addressed all the concerns. Thank you no more concerns. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: lamiaa mohammed salem akoosh Reviewer #3: No **********
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