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| Original SubmissionJuly 29, 2024 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors aim to evaluate the cost-effectiveness of using Coronary Artery Calcium (CAC) screening as an alternative to the current screening guidelines in Thailand. However, I recommend that this study be rejected for publication in PLOS ONE. The primary concern is that the relative effect between CAC screening and the current guidelines has not been appropriately estimated. There are two key issues: Initial Incidence Data: The initial incidence of LDL-C and CAC levels is derived from only 112 patients at a single hospital. This small, non-representative sample cannot adequately reflect the Thai population. Additionally, the inclusion of patients who must have CAC testing introduces selection bias. Long-Term Effect Estimation: The long-term effect of CAC screening is based on the estimated progression of CAC by age, derived from a retrospective study without a direct comparator. The progression data for comparator is sourced from another trial, making the relative effect unreliable. This flaw is fundamental to the cost-effectiveness analysis and cannot be resolved through revision; substantial additional data on the relative effect is required. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the thoughtful research. Here are some specific and general comments: Abstract: -The statement in the methods “Different potencies of statin were initiated based on CAC score and ACC/AHA guidelines 2019 recommendation” is not clear to me. From the introduction my understanding is that this was comparing CAC screening plus treatment to standard treatment as directed by guidelines. Without reading the body of the paper, it’s confusing how many different interventions are being compared. -Stating that the old practice has a 29% of being cost-effective compared to the CAC intervention having a probability of 71% is redundant; in a comparison of two interventions the probability that the other is cost-effective is going to be 100-(probability other is cost-effective). This could be removed for space and replaced with other information. -Recommend rounding all dollar figures, including ICERs, to the nearest whole number (i.e. no decimal places). What is the Thai WTP threshold? It might be useful to provide a conversion to USD in the abstract for international readers. Introduction: -Perhaps provide a short definition in lay terms of dyslipidemia and atherosclerosis. -What is meant by “subclinical” -Suggest modifying the sentence: “This study aims to evaluate the cost-effectiveness of CAC screening for primary prevention in Thai patients with intermediate ASCVD risk, compared to the current guidelines according to the ACC/AHA guidelines 2019 recommendation” to be clearer. Propose something like: “This study aims to evaluate the cost-effectiveness of including CAC screening for primary prevention in Thai patients with intermediate ASCVD risk as per the ACC/AHA guidelines 2019 recommendation, compared to the current Thai guidelines which do not advise screening in this population.” Model Overview: -Revise first sentence “A hybrid model combining a decision tree and a hybrid model combining a decision tree and Markov model was constructed (Fig 1 and 2)” – sounds like “hybrid model combining a decision tree” is repeated? - “Quality-adjusted life-years (QALYs) were used as the outcome utility measure.” I think you can delete “utility” and just say outcome measure. -Can a reference be provided for the Thai guidelines? Data Sources -“Patient identity was access only during the data collection and was not collected.” Suggest “viewed only during data collection and was not recorded” Table 1: since all have the same distribution and source, these columns could be combined/moved to a footnote of the table. Table 2: Personally I think five decimal places is a lot, I think displaying four in the table would be OK. As commented for the abstract rounding costs to whole number is advised. What is the utility for the “No CVD” health state? Sensitivity Analysis: -What about a scenario analysis where the discount rate is varied (or set to zero)? -“MESA” acronym – needs to be defined and described Results Table 4: suggest revising the title, it is currently not clear/grammatically correct. I don’t think stating something is “more dominant” or “less dominant” is appropriate. CAC is not dominant in the base case. I think just stating whether it is or is not dominant is appropriate. Discussion -Using “dominant” to describe the results is not appropriate. To me this terminology is only used when an intervention is both less costly and more effective. The CAC strategy is cost-effective but not dominant. If it becomes dominant in a scenario analysis that can be stated, but stating “more dominant” or “less dominant”, does not align with my understanding of the base case findings. -It's interesting to me that the cost of the statins seems to be driving the higher cost of the CAC strategy. The way the discussion phrases it, it doesn’t seem like there is a benefit to the higher dose of statins, that it is simply an extra cost to be rationalized but doesn’t lead to avoidance of downstream costs or increase in utility. Is this the intention of the discussion section on statin costs? -Is there any research on cost-effectiveness of CAC screening from other settings where this has already been included in guidelines? Other comments: Figure 4 needs abbreviations added. Also, the maximum and minimum ICER bars all being to one side of the base case does not make sense to me. How can this be correct? I’ve never seen a tornado diagram do that. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rebecca Hancock-Howard ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Andreas Zirlik, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: There are numerous instances of incorrect grammar, it would be an enormous effort to correct them all as a reviewer. I note that the journal does not copyedit submissions but this should be done before proceeding with publication. Here are more substantive comments: Abstract: Should read “$160,00 BAHT per QALY” not QALYs The statement: “Probabilistic, and additional one-way sensitivity analyses were performed to account for the model’s important assumption and robustness” is not clear. Suggest revising to say it is assessing robustness and testing the impact of assumptions. Suggest rounding all monetary figures to the nearest whole value (i.e. remove decimals) throughout text. Introduction line 69 and Methods line 101: what are the Thai risk assessment tools? They are not described in detail so it is hard to know what they involve. Introduction line 79: Can a brief description of what CAC involves and what it assesses be provided? Methods line 116: I think the terminal nodes for the different strategies in the decision trees should be described. My understanding is that after screening, a patient can be on no statin, moderate potency statin, or high potency statin. This is clear in the figure but not described in the text. I think Table 1 could also be revised with a column added to show how these classifications relate to no/moderate/high potency statins. This will make it more clear for the reader. Methods: Can more details be provided about who the cardiologists and health economists were who reviewed the model, and what the review process involved? Table formatting looks off in my version. Will need to be revised to common font and layout in publication. Table 2: What was cost of CAC testing? I don’t think this is shown in the costs section? Table 2: Perhaps put non-medical costs in their own category so they are more obvious. Will also need to describe how these were gathered. Is it from a patient survey? There is very little detail on how these costs were obtained. Perhaps conducting a scenario analysis from the health system perspective would also be of interest. Table 2: Relative risk compared to placebo – I think placebo is what it was compared to in the source trials, but here shouldn’t it be compared to “no statin”? Table 2 and methods: reference 31 used for costs is from 2006. How were these costs inflated to present values? What year is the currency presented in? This is a requested item in the CHEERS list. Perhaps add a completed CHEERS checklist as an appendix. Discussion Line 288: “Based on our analysis, approximately one-third of patients who followed the CAC screening strategy received moderate- or high-potency statins at the beginning, while the majority of patients in the current practice received moderate-potency statins (76%).“ As discussed in the methods feedback, would it be possible to show how many patients are on the different therapies after the decision tree portion of the model? It would make the differences in the treatment of the two groups more obvious and understandable. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #2: There are numerous instances of incorrect grammar, it would be an enormous effort to correct them all as a reviewer. I note that the journal does not copyedit submissions but this should be done before proceeding with publication. Here are more substantive comments: Abstract: Should read “$160,00 BAHT per QALY” not QALYs The statement: “Probabilistic, and additional one-way sensitivity analyses were performed to account for the model’s important assumption and robustness” is not clear. Suggest revising to say it is assessing robustness and testing the impact of assumptions. Suggest rounding all monetary figures to the nearest whole value (i.e. remove decimals) throughout text. Introduction line 69 and Methods line 101: what are the Thai risk assessment tools? They are not described in detail so it is hard to know what they involve. Introduction line 79: Can a brief description of what CAC involves and what it assesses be provided? Methods line 116: I think the terminal nodes for the different strategies in the decision trees should be described. My understanding is that after screening, a patient can be on no statin, moderate potency statin, or high potency statin. This is clear in the figure but not described in the text. I think Table 1 could also be revised with a column added to show how these classifications relate to no/moderate/high potency statins. This will make it more clear for the reader. Methods: Can more details be provided about who the cardiologists and health economists were who reviewed the model, and what the review process involved? Table formatting looks off in my version. Will need to be revised to common font and layout in publication. Table 2: What was cost of CAC testing? I don’t think this is shown in the costs section? Table 2: Perhaps put non-medical costs in their own category so they are more obvious. Will also need to describe how these were gathered. Is it from a patient survey? There is very little detail on how these costs were obtained. Perhaps conducting a scenario analysis from the health system perspective would also be of interest. Table 2: Relative risk compared to placebo – I think placebo is what it was compared to in the source trials, but here shouldn’t it be compared to “no statin”? Table 2 and methods: reference 31 used for costs is from 2006. How were these costs inflated to present values? What year is the currency presented in? This is a requested item in the CHEERS list. Perhaps add a completed CHEERS checklist as an appendix. Discussion Line 288: “Based on our analysis, approximately one-third of patients who followed the CAC screening strategy received moderate- or high-potency statins at the beginning, while the majority of patients in the current practice received moderate-potency statins (76%).“ As discussed in the methods feedback, would it be possible to show how many patients are on the different therapies after the decision tree portion of the model? It would make the differences in the treatment of the two groups more obvious and understandable. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Cost-utility analysis of Coronary Artery Calcium screening to guide statin prescription among intermediate-risk patients in Thailand PONE-D-24-31252R3 Dear Dr. Phichayut Phinyo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Forgive Avorgbedor Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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