Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 30, 2025 |
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: GENERAL COMMENT This manuscript addresses an important topic in environmental toxicology: the combined effects of co-exposure to arsenic (As) and manganese (Mn) on blood-brain barrier (BBB) integrity and oxidative stress. Investigating joint toxicity is highly relevant, as humans are often exposed to metal mixtures (for example, arsenic and manganese frequently co-contaminate drinking water sources. While the subject matter is noteworthy, the manuscript requires substantial improvement in justification, methodology improvement and interpretation of data. Provided the authors address the issues outlined below, the study’s publication could be justified. MAJOR COMMENTS INTRODUCTION -The manuscript in its current form suffers from significant conceptual and presentation issues. The Introduction does not clearly justify the rationale for studying As–Mn joint toxicity: it omits key background information (e.g. both metals’ links to neurodegenerative disease) and fails to define the concept of joint toxic action. -The introduction fails to compellingly justify why examining the joint toxicity of arsenic and manganese is necessary. The authors mention an example of arsenic poisoning in South America, which is not aligned with the study’s context or focus, and thus feels out of place. Instead, the introduction should highlight scenarios where As and Mn co-exposure is a realistic concern (for instance, co-occurrence of As and Mn in groundwater affecting millions) PMID: 32786605 -More importantly, the text does not mention that both arsenic and manganese are individually known neurotoxicants associated with cognitive impairment and even Alzheimer’s disease risk. The authors should include this to strengthen the rationale. As reviewed somewhere else, chronic exposure to either As or Mn can induce oxidative stress and other neuropathological processes implicated in neurodegeneration. PMID: 40278152 -The introduction is ambiguous about the knowledge gap. It also fails to state whether co-exposure to arsenic and manganese leads to additive, synergistic, or antagonistic effects on the BBB and brain, given that each metal alone can disrupt neurological function. MATERIALS AND METHODS -The Materials and Methods lack critical details such as the rationale for dose selection and clarity on experimental controls, raising concerns about reproducibility and the environmental relevance of the findings. The manuscript does not explain how the chosen doses of arsenic and manganese were determined, which is a critical oversight. The authors must clarify whether the concentrations used in vitro (for both single and combined exposures) reflect environmentally relevant levels (e.g., comparable to concentrations found in blood or drinking water of exposed populations) or were chosen based on prior toxicological studies. RESULTS -The Results are described without sufficient critical analysis, for instance, manganese alone appears to have no significant effect on oxidative stress, yet the authors proceed to discuss “joint” effects without demonstrating a true interaction. -The interpretation of the results, specifically regarding the interaction between arsenic and manganese as reported in several paragraphs of the results section, is a point of major concern. It is not scientifically justified to infer a meaningful interaction if one component is essentially inert (at the tested dose) for the measured endpoints. If Mn alone caused no significant change, then any effect observed in the As+Mn co-exposure group is likely driven solely by arsenic. MINOR COMMENTS -The reference to “South American arsenic poisoning” in the Introduction appears misaligned with the study’s focus. If the authors are aiming to set a global context, they should either generalize this point or provide a clearer connection. Otherwise, this example could be removed to tighten the narrative. -As noted above, the authors should insert a brief definition of joint toxic actions (additivity, synergy, antagonism) for clarity -It’s suggested to mention in the Introduction (or Discussion) that both As and Mn have been implicated as risk factors in neurodegenerative diseases like Alzheimer’s. The authors allude to cognitive effects but don’t specifically cite evidence. Including a sentence such as, “Notably, epidemiological and mechanistic studies have linked chronic arsenic and manganese exposures to............." would help clarify this aspect. Reviewer #2: The investigation into the combined toxicity of arsenic and manganese presents an interesting and relevant approach. The study effectively demonstrates the cytotoxic effects of the combined exposure. However, several figures indicate minimal differences between the arsenic-only and the combined exposure groups. This suggests that the proposed pathways may not represent the primary mechanisms underlying the observed effects. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Interaction of coexposure to inorganic arsenic and manganese: Tight junction injury of the blood–brain barrier and the relationship between oxidative stress and inflammatory cytokines in glial cells PONE-D-25-22817R1 Dear Dr. Yamauchi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mária A. Deli, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Authors have addressed the concerns I raised in the first round of reviews. The updated report now includes how Mn and Arsenic exposures are individually linked to neurodegenerative diseases. The real-worlds relevance has also been highlighted and the ambiguity in the introduction has been addressed. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Temitope H Adebambo ********** |
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PONE-D-25-22817R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yamauchi, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Mária A. Deli Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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