Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 30, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-23439-->-->Filling Gaps in PM2.5 Time Series: A Broad Evaluation from Statistical to Advanced Neural Network Models-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Safarov, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 02 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript addresses the problem of missing data imputation in PM2.5 time series and systematically evaluates a wide range of models, from traditional statistical approaches to advanced neural networks. Overall, the study is well-designed, methodologically comprehensive, and yields practically valuable results. It offers meaningful insights for environmental monitoring and air quality data processing. I recommend minor revision before acceptance. The following suggestions are provided: 1. Refine language for conciseness Some sections (e.g., “Scientific Novelty”) are overly verbose. The authors are encouraged to streamline the writing to improve logical flow and help readers better grasp the key contributions. 2. Improve figure clarity and visualization While the figures are comprehensive, some legends (e.g., in missing data heatmaps) are not intuitive. It is recommended to use consistent color schemes and highlight key time periods to enhance readability. 3. Method variety slightly overwhelming The manuscript evaluates 46 methods in total, which is thorough. However, the authors should clearly emphasize the most recommended models and their practical significance to help readers focus on the main findings. 4. Add uncertainty or error propagation analysis For long-duration data gaps, the authors are encouraged to include an analysis of error propagation or uncertainty to reinforce the reliability of the models in real-world applications. 5. Quantify policy implications in the conclusion While the exceedance rate of pollution levels is reported, the conclusion would benefit from further quantifying the potential impact on public health or policy-making to enhance its practical relevance. Reviewer #2: This study systematically evaluated 46 methods for filling gaps in PM2.5 time series, and pioneered a dynamic model to handle gaps of variable length, among which the tree model performed best. The multivariate model combined with meteorological variables had significant advantages in long gaps (48-72 hours) (increased by 16-18%), and the model successfully handled real gaps of 1-191 hours. The data after filling showed that 61.2% of the time exceeded the WHO standard (15μg/m³). The method is comprehensive and statistically includes neural networks; the dynamic model breaks through the limitation of fixed gaps and can quantify the gain of meteorological data for long gaps, and has strong practical applicability. However, the manuscript did not explore the differences in filling errors under different pollution concentrations, and geographical limitations may limit its scope of application (only Kazakhstan data). The content of the manuscript is within the scope of the journal and can be of broad interest to readers. However, in terms of specific content, there is still room for improvement. Therefore, I decided to give the decision of minor revision. It is recommended that the author properly absorb the reviewers' comments and make corresponding improvements and enhancements. 1. Line 170, 'However, neural networks require large datasets for training and careful tuning –otherwise they may underperform simpler models.' I consider some basic neural networks should be introduced briefly. For example, the common adopted neural networks include long short-term memory (LSTM) neural network, gated recurrent unit (GRU) neural network, convolutional neural network (CNN), and echo state network (ESN), and some references should be added for supporting (10.3390/en17123050). Moreover, the differences between various neural network should be explained briefly. For example, LSTM is a type of recurrent neural network (RNN) architecture designed to capture long-term dependencies in sequential data [41]. Unlike traditional RNNs, LSTM introduces gating mechanisms to retain or discard specific features of the data, effectively addressing the vanishing and exploding gradient problems. This enables LSTM networks to learn and remember information over longer periods, making them well suited for tasks involving sequential or time-series data, see https://doi.org/10.3390/s24144451. 2. The study emphasizes the innovation of the "dynamic model", but does not conduct quantitative comparisons with existing dynamic filling methods (such as RNN variants and state-space models). It is recommended to supplement comparative experiments with 3-5 cutting-edge dynamic filling models to objectively demonstrate the superiority of the proposed method. 3. The manuscript lacks year-by-year cross-validation. Specifically, the authors only used data from the same period for split validation, without considering the impact of annual meteorological variability. Extrapolation validation of data from different years (e.g., drought years/rainy years) is needed to prove the robustness of the method. 4. The attribution of seasonal advantage is vague: "strong seasonality" is mentioned but the internal mechanism is not analyzed. The influence of winter coal burning sources and summer dust sources on filling the accuracy difference should be analyzed in combination with the backward trajectory model (such as HYSPLIT). 5. Model selection rationale missing: The criteria used to select the final model from the 46 methods (e.g., cross-validation strategy) were not explained. 6. The manuscript does not adequately verify the filling of extreme events, especially the failure to demonstrate the filling effect of the model in sudden pollution events such as sandstorms and industrial accidents. 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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The authors have comprehensively and meticulously responded to and improved the manuscript in accordance with the revision suggestions put forward earlier. After rechecking, the current manuscript has a clear logic, reliable data, and reasonable conclusions, which meet the publication standards. It is recommended to accept it for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed well the comments proposed by the reviewers and have made corresponding modifications on the old version of the manuscript. I consider the current manuscript can be accepted and no further comments will be proposed from my side. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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