Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 17, 2025 |
|---|
|
Dear Dr. Wang, Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 20 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Barry Kweh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: 1. When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements.-->--> -->-->Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at -->-->https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and -->-->https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=ba62/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_title_authors_affiliations.pdf-->--> -->-->2. In the ethics statement in the Methods, you have specified that verbal consent was obtained. Please provide additional details regarding how this consent was documented and witnessed, and state whether this was approved by the IRB.-->--> -->-->3. We suggest you thoroughly copyedit your manuscript for language usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not know anyone who can help you do this, you may wish to consider employing a professional scientific editing service. -->--> -->-->The American Journal Experts (AJE) (https://www.aje.com/) is one such service that has extensive experience helping authors meet PLOS guidelines and can provide language editing, translation, manuscript formatting, and figure formatting to ensure your manuscript meets our submission guidelines. Please note that having the manuscript copyedited by AJE or any other editing services does not guarantee selection for peer review or acceptance for publication. -->--> -->-->Upon resubmission, please provide the following:-->--> -->-->The name of the colleague or the details of the professional service that edited your manuscript-->--> -->-->A copy of your manuscript showing your changes by either highlighting them or using track changes (uploaded as a *supporting information* file)-->--> -->-->A clean copy of the edited manuscript (uploaded as the new *manuscript* file)-->--> -->-->4. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: -->-->The authors would like to thank Xuanwu Hospital, Capital Medical University doctors and nurses for their contributions to this research and the Beijing Science and Technology Commission for providing financial support. We appreciated the patients participated in the study for their assistance.-->--> -->-->We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. -->-->Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: -->-->The author(s) received no specific funding for this work. -->--> -->-->Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.-->--> -->-->5. We note that your Data Availability Statement is currently as follows: All relevant data are within the manuscript and its Supporting Information files.-->--> -->-->Please confirm at this time whether or not your submission contains all raw data required to replicate the results of your study. Authors must share the “minimal data set” for their submission. PLOS defines the minimal data set to consist of the data required to replicate all study findings reported in the article, as well as related metadata and methods (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-minimal-data-set-definition).-->--> -->-->For example, authors should submit the following data:-->--> -->-->- The values behind the means, standard deviations and other measures reported;-->-->- The values used to build graphs;-->-->- The points extracted from images for analysis.-->--> -->-->Authors do not need to submit their entire data set if only a portion of the data was used in the reported study.-->--> -->-->If your submission does not contain these data, please either upload them as Supporting Information files or deposit them to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of recommended repositories, please see https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/recommended-repositories.-->--> -->-->If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. If data are owned by a third party, please indicate how others may request data access.-->--> -->-->6. Please upload a new copy of Figures 3, 4 and 5 as the detail is not clear. Please follow the link for more information: https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/-->--> -->-->7. Please remove your figures from within your manuscript file, leaving only the individual TIFF/EPS image files, uploaded separately. These will be automatically included in the reviewers’ PDF.--> Additional Editor Comments: The authors need to justify their methodology and presentation of results given table subheadings are often unclear. The decision to define older patients as > 60 years rather than the traditional WHO or UN definition needs to be discussed. Reviewers have also raised concerns regarding internal consistency and the multivariate models which need addressing. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Reviewer Comments General Comments This study presents a highly original and clinically relevant analysis of dynamic changes in frailty status among older adults undergoing abdominal surgery. The use of latent class growth modeling (LCGM) to classify postoperative frailty trajectories is novel and valuable. Identifying four distinct frailty patterns provides meaningful insight that may support tailored perioperative care strategies. The authors are to be commended for addressing this important and underexplored topic. However, there are several methodological and presentation-related issues that need to be addressed to improve the clarity, clinical applicability, and transparency of the study. Major Concerns 1. Study Population Age Definition (Why ≥60 years?) The rationale for setting the inclusion criterion at age 60 rather than the more commonly used threshold of 65 years is unclear. A justification should be provided, especially given that frailty-related literature often focuses on populations ≥65 years. 2. Albumin and Other Nutritional Markers The study discusses nutritional status, yet serum albumin, total protein, and prealbumin—commonly used clinical markers—are not included as explanatory variables. Were these data unavailable, or were they excluded for another reason? Please clarify. 3. Surgical Approach Misrepresentation Table 1 lists “laparoscopy: 100%, laparotomy: 0%,” which is inconsistent with the types of procedures included (e.g., gastrectomy, pancreaticoduodenectomy), many of which are still commonly performed via open surgery. This discrepancy must be clarified. Actual surgical approach data (laparoscopic vs open) should be accurately reported. 4. Poor Table Design and Lack of Definitions Many of the tables are difficult to interpret. Variable names are inconsistently labeled or undefined (e.g., “income,” “gastric tube”). Some variables appear more than once (e.g., “preoperative gastric tube”), and the definitions of categorical cutoffs (e.g., “bed time,” “drainage”) are not provided. Without clear definitions, clinical interpretation is impaired. Please reformat the tables for clarity and include a variable definitions table or footnotes. Minor Concerns 1. Placement of Table 3 (Model Fitting Table) Table 3 presents technical statistics (AIC, BIC, entropy, BLRT) that may not be accessible or meaningful to general surgical readers. Since it does not contribute directly to the clinical narrative, I suggest moving Table 3 to the supplementary material and focusing the main text on clinically interpretable content such as Figure 2–5. 2. “One in Ten” Rule in Multivariable Models The multivariable analyses shown in Figures 3–5 include many predictors relative to the group sizes (e.g., 9 predictors in the improvement group with only 21 patients). This may violate the "one-in-ten rule" and lead to overfitting. The authors should clarify how variables were selected and consider model simplification or penalized regression techniques if appropriate. 3. Typographical and Formatting Issues There are minor inconsistencies in table formatting (e.g., alignment, repeated rows) that reduce readability and should be addressed during revision. Reviewer #2: Dear Editor, This article explores the trajectory and influencing factors of frailty in patients undergoing gastrointestinal surgery, with a particular focus on the effects of BMI, Charlson comorbidity index score, type of surgery, intraoperative drainage tube retention time, first time to get out of bed after surgery, the time of the first oral feed after surgery, postoperative complications, mobility, nutritional risk, and anxiety on postoperative frailty. This study provides a contribution to the literature on this topic, offering detailed data and short-term follow-up of a population that has been digestive tract surgery. However, I still have some questions and suggestions: 1. Whether or not chemotherapy is administered after surgery can significantly impact the manifestation of frailty, as certain chemotherapy drugs can adversely affect physical condition and lead to frailty. Why did the author fail to include chemotherapy as an associated factor? 2. The surgical spot will influence the timing of the first postoperative meal and the placement of a peritoneal drainage tube. In other words, there is multicollinearity among these three factors. If the authors include all three factors in the multivariate analysis simultaneously, it will lead to greater errors and increase the instability of parameter estimation. How do the authors explain or avoid this influence? 3. In Figs. 3 and 4, the OR value of ADL is less than 0, while that of NRS2002 and STAI is are greater than 0. In Fig. 5, the above three values are reversed, while other factors such as bed time and complications are all greater than 0. The authors should provide an explanation for these discrepancies in the discussion section. 4. Many of the data presented in the manuscript are inconsistent and confusing: 1) In table 1, the number of smokers, education level, monthly income, and CCI are not equal to the total number (155). 2) In Table 3, the BIC of four-category model is higher than that of three-category model, however the description indicates the opposite. 3) The content described in the results shows “There were 41 patients in class 3, accounting for 26.7% of the total.” However, in Table 2, the frailty was only 33 before surgery (T1). 4) The numbers for the "no frailty" and "frailty improvement" in Table 4 are inconsistent with those presented in the preceding text. Additionally, there is a typographical error in the male column* frailty improvement" in Table 4. Furthermore, there are problems with the data of BMI*frailty exacerbation, Age*persistent frailty, Drinking status*frailty exacerbation, Habitation status*frailty exacerbation, persistent frailty, frailty improvement, Education level*no frailty, Monthly income*persistent frailty, frailty improvement. 5) The data of Surgical spot* frailty exacerbation, frailty improvement�Preoperative pain* frailty exacerbation, frailty improvement�Preoperative urinary catheter* persistent frailty�Postoperative complications* no frailty, persistent frailty in Table 5 are problematic. 6) In the results section, should the second line of the "Frailty trajectories" section have "table2" instead of "table3"? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Shokei Matsumoto Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Frailty trajectory and its associated factors in older patients undergoing abdominal surgery involving the digestive system:A longitudinal study PONE-D-25-12651R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Barry Kweh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have clarified the difference between their univariate and multivariate analysis, updated their tables and provided a more nuanced discussion of the relevant literature. Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-25-12651R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Barry Kweh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .