Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 10, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-25343 Optimizing pyramid distiller performance with rotational corrugated cylinders, reflectors, and PCM-fan integration for enhanced freshwater production PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Omara, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Omara (Author) Reviewer #1 1) The authors should follow the journal guidelines 2) Highlights are missing: each bullet should be 85 characters with spaces. 3) Avoid abbreviation in the title and abstract (if possible). 4) A comprehensive proofreading must be conducted for the text of the manuscript by a technical native person. 5) The introduction section warrants a more comprehensive treatment, incorporating recent literature to enhance its contextualization and relevance. 6) In Literature, The author should brought many irrelevant external modifications as PCM, reflectors or nanomaterials are not considered as the design parameters rather all of them are external modification. The authors should include recent studies such as - Performance assessment of a novel solar distiller with a fountain-shaped basin design embedded with phase change materials enriched with copper oxide nano-additives: A detailed experimental investigation, Journal of Energy Storage, 2024 - Predicting the yield of stepped corrugated solar distiller using kernel-based machine learning models, Applied Thermal Engineering, 2023. - Optimal size of spherical rock salt balls as low-cost thermal storage materials for performance augmentation of hemispherical solar distillers: Experimental investigation and thermo-economic analysis, Journal of Cleaner Production, 2022. - Improving the thermo-economic performance of hemispherical solar distiller using copper oxide nanofluids and phase change materials: Experimental and theoretical investigation, Solar Energy Materials and Solar Cells, 2022. 7) The distinctive aspects of novelty in the current study should be emphasized more prominently. 8) It is imperative to incorporate a detailed Table regarding the distiller geometrical details and properties of the utilized thermal energy storage material. 9) Elaborate on the performance degradation observed in the modifications of the study for a comprehensive analysis of patterns. 10) Strengthen the discussion section by delving into the mechanisms underlying the observed phenomena, thereby elevating the overall quality of the manuscript. 11) Extend the discussion to encompass water quality analyses of both seawater and distillate output, offering a more comprehensive perspective on the study's broader implications. 12) It is advisable to include the limitations of the study. Reviewer #2 Paper Title (Optimizing pyramid distiller performance with rotational corrugated cylinders, reflectors, and pcm-fan integration for enhanced freshwater production). The topic and novelty of the work is interesting and the topic aligns with the scope of Pols One Journal. I have some comments which I want the authors to work on before publishing it in the journal. 1- The title should be more descriptive. 2- The originality of this paper should be clarified in the introduction section. 3- Error analysis is mandatory for any experimental work. Please include. 4- The references do not follow the journal style. 5- Check the subscripts and superscripts through the entire context. 6- The manuscript's English has to be strengthened. The content is riddled with typos and syntactical flaws. 7- The rotating cylinders must by studied with wick materials 8- Used others type of cylinder surface such as half- barrel 9- What happens if the exterior mirrors are replaced with PV-cells to heat the water for the still? 10- Quantity of PCM material (in kgs) used in the Solar stills not specified. Also, properties of PCM and Ag-nano particles not specified. In addition, properties of PCM + Ag-nano particles together not specified. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1) The authors should follow the journal guidelines 2) Highlights are missing: each bullet should be 85 characters with spaces. 3) Avoid abbreviation in the title and abstract (if possible). 4) A comprehensive proofreading must be conducted for the text of the manuscript by a technical native person. 5) The introduction section warrants a more comprehensive treatment, incorporating recent literature to enhance its contextualization and relevance. 6) In Literature, The author should brought many irrelevant external modifications as PCM, reflectors or nanomaterials are not considered as the design parameters rather all of them are external modification. The authors should include recent studies such as - Performance assessment of a novel solar distiller with a fountain-shaped basin design embedded with phase change materials enriched with copper oxide nano-additives: A detailed experimental investigation, Journal of Energy Storage, 2024 - Predicting the yield of stepped corrugated solar distiller using kernel-based machine learning models, Applied Thermal Engineering, 2023. - Optimal size of spherical rock salt balls as low-cost thermal storage materials for performance augmentation of hemispherical solar distillers: Experimental investigation and thermo-economic analysis, Journal of Cleaner Production, 2022. - Improving the thermo-economic performance of hemispherical solar distiller using copper oxide nanofluids and phase change materials: Experimental and theoretical investigation, Solar Energy Materials and Solar Cells, 2022. 7) The distinctive aspects of novelty in the current study should be emphasized more prominently. 8) It is imperative to incorporate a detailed Table regarding the distiller geometrical details and properties of the utilized thermal energy storage material. 9) Elaborate on the performance degradation observed in the modifications of the study for a comprehensive analysis of patterns. 10) Strengthen the discussion section by delving into the mechanisms underlying the observed phenomena, thereby elevating the overall quality of the manuscript. 11) Extend the discussion to encompass water quality analyses of both seawater and distillate output, offering a more comprehensive perspective on the study's broader implications. 12) It is advisable to include the limitations of the study. Reviewer #2: Paper Title (Optimizing pyramid distiller performance with rotational corrugated cylinders, reflectors, and pcm-fan integration for enhanced freshwater production). The topic and novelty of the work is interesting and the topic aligns with the scope of Pols One Journal. I have some comments which I want the authors to work on before publishing it in the journal. 1- The title should be more descriptive. 2- The originality of this paper should be clarified in the introduction section. 3- Error analysis is mandatory for any experimental work. Please include. 4- The references do not follow the journal style. 5- Check the subscripts and superscripts through the entire context. 6- The manuscript's English has to be strengthened. The content is riddled with typos and syntactical flaws. 7- The rotating cylinders must by studied with wick materials 8- Used others type of cylinder surface such as half- barrel 9- What happens if the exterior mirrors are replaced with PV-cells to heat the water for the still? 10- Quantity of PCM material (in kgs) used in the Solar stills not specified. Also, properties of PCM and Ag-nano particles not specified. In addition, properties of PCM + Ag-nano particles together not specified. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Experimental Investigation of Shape-Enhanced Rotating Cylinders with Electric Heaters and Solar Panels for Augmented Pyramid Solar Still Performance PONE-D-25-25343R1 Dear Dr. Z. M. Omara, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, S. Shanmugan, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Accept Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: No further comments are required. It can be accepted for publication in the journal Reviewer #2: The researcher has responded to all questions satisfactorily, there are no further comments, and the research is accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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