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You also have the option of uploading the data as Supporting Information files, but we would recommend depositing data directly to a data repository if possible. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript contributes to the extensively researched topic of knapping techniques and the question of whether these can be identified archaeologically based on features of the knapped blanks. The originality of this work lies in the authors' approach, which envisions the combined use of a wide range of macroscopic and microscopic features for technique identification. This is particularly relevant since, thus far, only a few works have explored the microscopic traces left by different techniques, despite their informative potential. However, there are significant flaws in both the conceptualisation of the work and the presentation of results that must be addressed before the paper can be published. Major Issues Experimental Design and Conceptualisation: One major issue is the lack of a theoretical framework that connects the features observed on the blades to the MFAs and CTs, particularly concerning the microtraces. This aspect is crucial because the experiment is conducted under “realistic” conditions, and many variables, such as those related to body behaviour, are uncontrolled. This lack of control prevents isolating correlations arising from factors not directly related to the techniques from causal ones. The authors should clarify why they chose this approach and outline any measures taken to mitigate the impact of confounding variables. Features that may be influenced by uncontrolled variables should not be included in the analysis. There are several examples demonstrating how this approach might have affected the experimental results and introduced confusion in data treatment and discussion. One example concerns the number and type of cracks (network cracks). As suggested by the authors in lines 766-767, 808-810, and 1120-1122, these features appear to be associated with the number of removal attempts and/or the shape of the CT active area, rather than the CT type. Consequently, the observed correlation between CT type and these features is merely apparent and should not be regarded as significant. I see similar problems with post-fracture traces, such as spontaneous scars on the edges. The development of these traces seems linked to how the core was held or supported, not to the knapping technique used, as also noted by the authors on Page 49. In this case, there is a risk of emphasising a connection between scars and CTs when what we are observing is the knapper adjusting his body behaviour according to different shapes and sizes of cores and punches, as is also visible in Supplementary Information 7. Why, indeed, should the knapper adopt a different position when using an antler or boxwood CT? A similar reasoning applies to lines 1021-1026 and lines 1046-1054: the orientation of linear polishes and the location of the residues, respectively. In all these cases, there is no causal relationship between the observed features and CT type. All of these features seem related to body behaviour or other factors that were not controlled for and were not considered in the experimental design, rather than CT or MFA. Nevertheless, they are included in the analysis. The authors should focus solely on attributes that can be unequivocally linked to CT and/or MFA. Experiment description: Some additional details on how the experiment was conducted would also be useful, such as the number of strikes for each blank removal, the position of the knapper, and a description of the hammers, punches, and crutches used to extract the blades (how many hammers of each type were involved? What were their sizes and shapes? etc.) Statistics: I am not an expert in multivariate statistics, but I think there are a few points where the authors should double-check the methods and/or provide a more extensive explanation of their choices. It is unclear to me why the attributes considered in the hierarchical cluster analysis are selected based on the analysis of single variables (ANOVA and Chi-square tests). Is it not circular to perform the cluster analysis only on significantly different attributes? Furthermore, I have some concerns regarding the tests conducted on single variables. In many cases, especially when crossing CTs and MFAs, the samples are small, falling below the recommended threshold for the Chi-square test. For these small samples, a Fisher's exact test would be better suited. Similarly, for testing the variability between groups of values that the authors have no reason to assume are sampled from distributions with similar shape and scale and (possibly) only different medians, the non-parametrical Kruskal-Wallis test is more appropriate than ANOVA. Another issue pertains to the coding of nominal attributes. From what I understand, cluster analysis can be used with continuous, ordered, or binary variables. When using nominal values, they should be transformed in a way that allows the algorithm to compute the distances between the observations. Here, however, nominal categorical variables are converted into ordered ones, even though there is no established order among the states of every attribute. For example, the lateralization of oblique cracks could be “left, " “right, " “both sides,” or “N/A." These states are coded 1-2-3-0, but, in this way, the result is that the distance between “right” (2) and “both” (3) is 1, and the distance between “left” (1) and “both” (3) is 2. But the case “left” is not more different than “right” from the case “both”. This should be checked and, if necessary, corrected. Results: In many cases, the authors claim to observe a correlation between the CT type and the examined features. However, these claims are not clearly supported by the data. The experimental samples are small, and I'm uncertain whether the differences in the observed traces would be considered significant by a Fisher exact test. I recommend conducting such a statistical test before correlating traces with technical traits. Examples include (but are not limited to) lines 659-662, 682-684, 762-764, 787-788, 792-795, and 789-808. The results of the cluster analysis are described as effective. However, I think that the accuracy of the cluster analysis and its effectiveness in reconstructing aspects of knapping techniques would be more robust if evaluated statistically (e.g., Fisher's exact test or Chi-square test when the sample size permits). Following the cluster analysis, it would be important to discuss which combination of attributes proved to be the most relevant for tracking different aspects of knapping techniques. Suggestions: To strengthen the paper's results, I recommend developing a solid theoretical framework that justifies the choice of attributes used in the analysis, i.e. why and how do I expect a feature to change with a change in CT and MFA? Features that are clearly linked to body behaviour or other factors (e.g., number and specific types of cracks, edge scars, etc.) should be excluded from the analysis. Furthermore, the authors should use statistical tools appropriate to the experimental sample size (e.g., Fisher exact test instead of Chi-square) and clarify why selecting attributes for cluster analysis in advance through such tests would not be circular reasoning. The method for coding nominal attributes should also be checked. Lastly, the attributes that proved most useful in differentiating between clusters should be discussed, and statistics might also be applied to the clustering results. It appears that better results are obtained when comparing larger experimental samples, such as when different MFAs are compared independently by the CT used. Perhaps the authors could focus solely on such more specific aspects that could yield more robust results or seek to increase the sample size by grouping different types of CTs (e.g., comparing organic vs. inorganic CTs). Minor points As one of the paper's goals is to further characterise microscopic traces by building on the previous works of Rots, it would be beneficial to include a summary of those works, as not every reader may be familiar with them. The paper is already lengthy and rich in information. I believe some of the figures provided are not essential; for instance, Figures 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 can be omitted. Lines 468-473 can also be excluded, as this information is not pertinent to the current paper. It is unfortunate that the authors chose not to include the paper by Magnani et al. (2014) in their sample of studies. This work presents interesting results relevant to the topic at hand and would have contributed to enlarging the sample of papers based on controlled experiments. In Table 1, it would be helpful to see how many of the blades were complete. Lines 815-816: The text states that the grain of the flint can influence polish formation. Why is this discussed only in relation to polishes? Does this also pertain to other variables considered? Lines 1500-1506: In this instance, why is antler classified as a hard material (similar to copper), while in other cases, it is grouped with wood and bone (soft CTs)? Reviewer #2: Identification of knapping techniques has been an important issue in the study of lithic production technology since the definition by J. Tixier. As many researchers agree, it is clear that the criteria of identification must be clarified by experimental analysis. However, different views have been presented on how to experimentally determine the identification criteria. Some French researchers have argued that the identification of knapping techniques can be based on differences in the morphological features of lithic artifacts that can be observed with the naked eye. However, other researchers have pointed out that the identification criteria proposed there are vague and not necessarily valid indicators. There was a need to present a quantitative analysis method by focusing on traces that more directly reflect differences in knapping techniques. This paper is an attempt to find a useful indicator for identifying the knapping techniques, using the traces observed in macro- or micro-scorpics as a clue. The paper presents an extremely interesting argument from the following points. First, the experiment was conducted by setting up a comprehensive experimental procedure that combined two parameters: the mode of force application and the contact tool. The fact that it is now possible to discuss which parameters allow for more reliable identification is an important achievement. Second, the microscopic traces on the platforms of the blades such as residues, cracks, polishes, inclusions, and spontaneous scars represent direct consequences of the physical interaction between the contact tools and the striking/pressure platform. These provide important evidence that reflects directly the processes of contact. The results of the experiments presented here can be used by other researchers to disprove the issues. Third, the analytical results, including microscopic traces, are presented quantitatively, allowing a probabilistic evaluation of the validity of the identification criteria. Last, it is an important result of this paper to show that the observation of residues is also effective in identifying the knapping techniques. This paper can be evaluated as reaching the level required by the journal and will attract the attention of more researchers. Therefore, I recommend publication of this paper. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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