Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 10, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Qiu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you are unable to adhere to our open data policy, please kindly revise your statement to explain your reasoning and we will seek the editor's input on an exemption. Please be assured that, once you have provided your new statement, the assessment of your exemption will not hold up the peer review process.\ Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The manuscript shows a protocol of a systematic review and meta-analysis on the association between exposure to Cadmium and Lung Cancer. The review and meta-analysis is well planned and it actually is registered at PROSPERO. The definitive review will abide by PRISMA guidelines, a widespread standard for review reporting, the research question is clear and the search strategy is consistent with that question. I only have two minor questions which perhaps could help improving this protocol. 1. The manuscript says that the review will include studies reporting at least one of the following: OR, RR, or hazard ratio. Perhaps the authos could include studies which provided indirect sources to obtain these OR, such as the raw data. 2. In the sub-group analyses section, the manuscript says that it will assess whether population difference, among other variables, could influence the results. Perhaps the authors could clarify what do they mean more specifically with population difference. Last, the manuscript says that the record screening is expected to be completed by the end of April. Have the authors completed the screening? Regardless the answer, updating the state of the research is not a bad idea. Reviewer #2: Minor concerns. Minor revisions required: 1) The authors need to reorganize the flow of the Background and Discussion paragraphs. 2) Provide the missing methodological details in the Methods section. 3) Add current prevalence data for lung cancer in the Background. 5) Please correct the typo in Figure 1. 6) For other minor concerns, please refer to the attached Word file. Reviewer #3: Dear authors, you will find comments and suggestions below. I hope they will be useful to you. Title: - Adequate. Abstract: - The PRISMA statement does not contain recommendations for preparing an SR with MA, but for reporting it. Correct this. - The manual or guideline on which this protocol was based should be reported. In addition, they should be guided by the PRISMA-P statement for reporting. - Be sure to write the entire abstract in the future tense. There are some sentences written in the past tense, such as the one in rows 42-3. - In the results section, I suggest reporting that the findings of your review will be reported following the PRISMA statement. Introduction: - The introduction is somewhat confusing. In the first paragraph it is reported that Cd is associated with lung cancer, but in the last paragraph it is mentioned that the evidence is uncertain. I suggest being clearer on this issue. - Is this the first SR and MA that would answer this research question? If so, I suggest reporting it explicitly in the introduction to justify its conduct. - I suggest that you review the Cochrane manual for SR and MA of interventions and the JBIde manual so that you can more robustly justify the need to conduct this SR. - The objective of this study should be rephrased. The purpose of publishing study protocols is to make transparent the methods that will be used to conduct a specific study. Methods: - Follow the PRISMA-P statement to report your protocol. Cite. - Remove the link that appears on line 95. - The search should not be performed independently by two investigators. Performing could introduce unintentional errors. Review the Cochrane and JBI handbook for the correct way to develop a search strategy. - The information provided in the search strategy is insufficient to reproduce it. Please review the PRISMA-S statement for detailed reporting. - I suggest deleting the dates when the different stages of your RS would be carried out. These could be modified for various reasons. - In the abstract it is reported that the NOS scale will be used for risk of bias assessment of studies. First, this information does not appear in the main text. Second, I would submited to change it to the ROBINS-E tool. Discussion: - The information stated in the discussion about the 3 previous MAs answering your same research question should be added in the introduction. The analysis carried out based on this aspect is a clear justification of why a new SR and MA should be carried out. - The discussion should be based on the potential implications of negative or positive results regarding the association between Cd and lung cancer. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Ruvistay Gutierrez-Arias ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Qiu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 21 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Zypher Jude G. Regencia, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The authors addressed all my comments and greatly improved what was a good manuscript in the first place. I have no further comments. Reviewer #3: Dear Authors. I appreciate that you have addressed each of my comments and suggestions. However, there are still two areas for improvement: - The PRISMA-P statement provides recommendations for adequate reporting of a systematic review protocol. It is often mistaken for a guide for developing a protocol, which is incorrect. For example, the statistical methods you have chosen to perform meta-analyses appear in manuals such as the Cochrane Handbook or the JBI manual. These documents correspond to methodological guides to orient the elaboration of protocols. Please correct this. - The information describing your search strategy is still insufficient to be reproducible. The protocol of a systematic review is the point at which aspects such as these are explained in detail. Please revisit the PRISMA-S statement, and report aspects such as: limits and filters used in your strategy (e.g., language and publication status), other search resources (e.g., gray literature, hand searching, searching clinical trial registries), and process how the search strategy was constructed. Be detailed. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Ruvistay Gutierrez-Arias ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. ********** |
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The Association Between Cadmium Exposure and Lung Cancer Risk: A Protocol for Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis PONE-D-25-15012R2 Dear Dr. Qiu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zypher Jude G. Regencia, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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