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| Original SubmissionFebruary 4, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript has scientific significance and is well-composed. However, some minor revisions are required to improve its standard for publication as rightly recommended by the reviewers. The authors need to address these appropriately. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Assessment This study presents a bioinformatics-based investigation of differentially expressed genes (DEGs) in diabetic kidney disease (DKD), incorporating machine learning, immune infiltration analysis, and experimental validation in a mouse model. While the study is well-structured and employs appropriate computational techniques, there are several methodological and statistical concerns that need to be addressed before publication. Below is a summary of the key critiques, along with recommendations for improvement. 1. Data Availability and Transparency Strengths: The study utilizes publicly available datasets (GSE96804, GSE104948-GPL22945, GSE30528) from GEO, ensuring reproducibility. Glycosylation-related gene sets are obtained from MSigDB. Concerns & Recommendations: No mention of processed dataset availability: The study should explicitly state whether batch-corrected, normalized data is accessible in a public repository (e.g., Zenodo, Figshare). qPCR and mouse model data should be made available: Raw Ct values, fold changes, and histology data should be uploaded. A formal Data Availability Statement (DAS) is missing. 2. Statistical Rigor in Differential Gene Expression Analysis Strengths: The study appropriately applies "limma" for DEG identification and adjusted p-value < 0.05 to correct for multiple testing. Volcano plots and heatmaps provide clear visualization. Concerns & Recommendations: Batch effect correction validation is unclear: PCA plots are mentioned but should include variance explained before and after correction. DEG selection criteria (|logFC| > 1) should be justified further to balance sensitivity and specificity. 3. Enrichment Analysis (GO & KEGG Pathways) Strengths: Uses clusterProfiler, a widely accepted tool for functional enrichment analysis. Concerns & Recommendations: False Discovery Rate (FDR) correction should be explicitly stated to address multiple hypothesis testing. Gene Set Enrichment Analysis (GSEA) should be conducted alongside overrepresentation analysis to validate findings. 4. Machine Learning-Based Hub Gene Selection Strengths: The study applies LASSO, Random Forest, and SVM, which enhances feature selection reliability. Concerns & Recommendations: No cross-validation (CV) is reported. The models should include 10-fold CV to assess generalizability and prevent overfitting. ROC analysis lacks confidence intervals (CIs). Reporting 95% CIs for AUC values is necessary to evaluate statistical robustness. An independent validation dataset is missing. Using an external dataset would confirm the diagnostic value of hub genes. 5. Immune Cell Infiltration Analysis (ssGSEA) Strengths: Uses ssGSEA to estimate immune infiltration and correlates it with hub gene expression. Concerns & Recommendations: No cross-validation with alternative methods (e.g., CIBERSORT, xCell, TIMER). Different immune cell estimation techniques should be compared. Multiple testing correction for immune cell correlations is missing. Applying FDR correction to correlation p-values is necessary. 6. Experimental Validation (qPCR & Mouse Model) Strengths: qPCR validation provides biological relevance to computational predictions. The use of C57BKS db/db mice is appropriate for studying DKD pathology. Concerns & Recommendations: Sample size is too small (n=3 per group). Increasing to at least n=5-6 per group would improve statistical power. Raw qPCR data should be made available. Revisions Required The study provides a well-organized bioinformatics pipeline for identifying DKD-related hub genes, but several statistical and methodological issues need to be addressed before publication: 1. Data Availability: Ensure all processed datasets, qPCR results, and mouse model data are publicly available. 2. Statistical Rigor: Apply cross-validation in machine learning models. Report confidence intervals for ROC AUC values. Validate findings with independent datasets. Provide batch correction validation (PCA variance explained before/after correction). 3. Experimental Validation: Increase qPCR and animal study sample sizes. 4. Immune Infiltration Analysis: Validate ssGSEA results with alternative deconvolution methods. Apply multiple hypothesis correction for immune correlations. Recommendation: Minor Revisions Required Before publication, the authors should address the statistical concerns, improve data transparency, and validate their findings using additional datasets and cross-validation methods. Reviewer #2: Paper review comments General overview and strengths: The paper by Liu et al is a detailed study using bioinformatics and machine learning approaches to identify hub-genes involved in protein glycosylation in DKD. The integration of bioinformatics methods provides a broad and in-depth understanding of the molecular mechanisms of DKD. The authors used the least absolute shrinkage and selection operator (LASSO), support vector machine (SVM), and random forests (RF) as the machine learning algorithms. The identification of the 6 hub-genes, some of which had not been extensively studied in DKD is a significant strength of the study as they present potential biomarkers for diagnosis and personalized therapeutic targets. Application of the ROC curve gives further support to them as potential biomarkers. The molecular subtyping and Immune infiltration analysis done are well conducted and add credibility to the study, further strengthening the study. There are, however, some observations from the paper that need to be addressed. Clarity and terminologies: The title is a reasonable representation of the study, but it could be adjusted to make it more precise by reflecting that this study was largely a gene-based study. The study showed a primary focus on glycosylation-related genes i.e. genes involved in (or influencing) glycosylation in DKD rather than Protein glycosylation itself. These genes influence glycosylation modification. Studies on “Protein glycosylation” are focused on the glycans but the hub genes (gly-DEG) were studied in this case. The authors put it better here: “The present study utilized bioinformatics integrated with machine learning to identify the genes and their regulatory networks associated with protein glycosylation modification, which plays a pivotal role in DKD.” [line 83-85]. So, they could adjust the title and the study aim written in the abstract. The use of the phrases, “progression of DKD” and “pathogenesis of DKD” could create some ambiguity since the terminologies are different entities and may not be interchangeable. It would be helpful to clarify the focus of the study, then use the correct terminologies to ensure clarity. Studies on “progression” often focus on identification of the different stages of DKD and establish quantitative or qualitative changes across the different stages of DKD. This study appears to primarily address “pathogenesis”. Therefore, the authors need to clarify correctly and state whether the study is focused on progression (worsening) rather than pathogenesis (cause) or both. See this statement in the abstract for example: “This study aimed to investigate the role of protein glycosylation modification in DKD progression and its association with gene expression changes, with the goal of identifying diagnostic biomarkers and personalized therapeutic targets.” If the study did not entertain the different DKD stages, it may be more appropriate to rephrase to “…in DKD pathogenesis…” It would be beneficial if the paper clarifies that the study focuses on “abnormal or aberrant Protein glycosylation” as it concerns the pathogenesis of DKD. This will help the readers to better understand the pathogenesis as different from the normal process. In some places the authors wrote the role of Protein glycosylation modification implicated in DKD. Protein glycosylation modification (a form of post-translational modification) is known to be a normal/physiological process, hence an abnormality of the process may likely bring about DKD. Additionally, the use of “modification” as in Protein glycosylation modification appears redundant and advised to be removed, because, although correct, it may create confusion to suggest an abnormality. “Protein glycosylation” may present a simple and clearer picture. For example, refer to conclusion in the abstract: 1. “This study highlights protein glycosylation as a key player in DKD and identifies six hub genes with potential as diagnostic biomarkers.” For instance, this might be better written as “This study highlights abnormal protein glycosylation as a key player in DKD and identifies six hub genes with potential as diagnostic biomarkers”. This ensures clarity 2. The present study utilized bioinformatics integrated with machine learning to identify the genes and their regulatory networks associated with protein glycosylation modification, which plays a pivotal role in DKD. [Line 83-85] 3. This study investigates the key role of protein glycosylation modification in the pathogenesis of DKD by integrating bioinformatics and machine learning techniques. The results suggest that glycosylation modification plays a crucial role in the occurrence and progression of DKD. [Line 672-675] In a bid to improve clarity, some sentences may need to be simplified/ rewritten: 1. “Then, we analyzed the ROC curve and evaluated the AUC values for their diagnostic efficiency in DKD, EXT1, SPTB, ADAMTS1, FMOD showed high diagnostic accuracy, while S100A12 and SBSPON, which is lower, still indicated certain diagnostic performance”. [Line 647-650] 2. “And O-linked glycosylation-SP1 modulating ENTPD5 expression through a negative feedback mechanism” [Line 46-47]. Methods: The authors did feature selection using LASSO, RF, SVM which is appropriate. The authors, however, should clearly state whether the data was split into training and testing sets since these are relevant in machine learning models (RF and SVM) to ensure generalizability of the models and strengthen the methodology. It’s also important to mention whether cross validation was done to ensure model robustness which strengthens that the result is biologically significant rather than dataset-dependent. If these were not and cannot be addressed, they should be considered as limitations. The result section could be revised to focus on the direct observations by presenting and explaining only the results with further discussion of the implications of the results reserved for the discussion section. 1. Significant enrichment in cellular components such as extracellular matrix containing collagen suggests abnormal changes during renal tissue remodeling. [Line 292-294] 2. These pathways may be related to abnormalities in glycosylation-modified protein functions, affecting the pathological progression of DKD. [Line 302-304] 3. These results not only reveal the potential mechanism of gly-DEGs in DKD but also provide possible research directions for future clinical applications, especially in the screening of therapeutic targets and diagnostic markers. [Line 306-309] 4. These results indicate that our classification method can effectively identify the DKD heterogeneity in patients at the molecular level, revealing significant biological differences between the different subtypes. [Line 346-349] 5. This molecular subtyping not only helps deepen our understanding of the pathogenesis of DKD but also provides important clues for the future development of targeted diagnostic and therapeutic strategies.[Line 357-360] Discussion section: the authors need to emphasize the novelty of the study findings as well as their clinical significance. What aspects of the study are current or novel?. Highlight new things that were not known, if any and compare/contrast with existing literature. How have these findings changed our understanding of DKD?. Suggested Reference: I advise that the authors refer to this article as it is similar to the paper under review: Fu, S., Cheng, Y., Wang, X., Huang, J., Su, S., Wu, H., Yu, J., & Xu, Z. (2022). Identification of diagnostic gene biomarkers and immune infiltration in patients with diabetic kidney disease using machine learning strategies and bioinformatic analysis. Frontiers in Medicine, 9. https://doi.org/10.3389/fmed.2022.918657 Reviewer #3: The submitted manuscript by Ziyang et al. utilized bioinformatic tools, machine learning, and gene expression analysis and identified 6 important hub genes implicated in DKD pathogenesis. This study shows the important role of glycosylation modification in (DKD) progression and will aid in increasing and improving personalized therapeutic targets. The findings of this study still need to be validated to unravel the molecular mechanism of the identified genes in DKD. However, minor revisions should be made before consideration. The authors should spell out all abbreviations utilized in the study. In the abstract Under “results”, there is a repeated full stop in one of the sentences. In the introduction Some sentences in the introduction are not clear. Some combined sentences should be broken down for clarity. See lines 36 to 42, page 5; line 46, page 5 starts with “and”. This should be corrected, and the sentence should be reworded. Lines 47 to 50, page 6, are also not clear. Also, page 7. The claim that protein glycosylation affects DKD progression through inflammatory response and oxidative stress should be properly cited by referring to the primary sources. The cited papers 15 and 16 are reviews. In the materials and methods, The sources for all kits and materials used should be included. The versions of the software packages used should also be reported. Methods 1.8 Immunohistochemistry and 1.9 Enrichment analysis should be rewritten in reported form. The specific antibodies used for all the assays should also be reported. A list of the primers used should also be provided. In the Results A workflow of the processes as a figure is granted The points of each replicate for the qPCR results should be included in Figure 8. Also, “Con” should be spelled in full as control. The statistical differences for the target genes between DKD and controls should also be indicated in the figure Although ADAMTS1 and S100A12 showed no significant difference in the gene expression analysis, the results should still be included in Figure 8. In the discussion, Although the gene expression analysis from this study showed no significant difference in S100A12 expression, the authors discussed its upregulation in other studies without stating any justification or rationale for the difference observed in their study. This should also be addressed in the discussion. The same is true for ADAMTS1 Since EXT1 is highly upregulated in DKD with potential diagnostic properties, further studies on this gene should be proposed as part of further studies. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Integrating Bioinformatics and Machine Learning to Elucidate the Role of Protein Glycosylation-Related Genes in the Pathogenesis of Diabetic Kidney Disease PONE-D-25-05847R2 Dear Dr. Liu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yusuf Oloruntoyin Ayipo, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The submission meets the level of scientific rigour required for publication in this title and all the concerns raised by the respective reviewers have been addressed satisfactorily. I hereby recommend the manuscript for publication in the current version. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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