Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-18695Clinical experience of genome-wide non-invasive prenatal testing as a first-tier screening test in a cohort of 59,771 pregnanciesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript explores the use of genome-wide non-invasive prenatal testing (NIPT) for the detection of chromosomal aneuploidies and copy number variations (CNVs). The study addresses a timely and clinically relevant topic and presents data from a sizable cohort. Genome-wide NIPT has the potential to improve prenatal screening by expanding the range of detectable genomic alterations beyond common trisomies. However, several important aspects require clarification and revision before the manuscript is suitable for publication. First, the manuscript does not report the test failure rate or the number of samples for which results were inconclusive or uninterpretable. This information is essential to assess the practical applicability and reliability of the test in a real-world clinical setting. Second, while the authors report performance metrics such as sensitivity and specificity, the methodology behind these calculations is not sufficiently explained. It is unclear how true positives were defined and whether confirmation was based on invasive diagnostic testing, postnatal outcomes, or clinical evaluation. A detailed description of the reference standard and classification criteria is necessary to validate the reported performance. Additionally, although the study employs a genome-wide approach, the discussion could better emphasize the advantages of this strategy. Specifically, the authors should elaborate on how genome-wide NIPT may increase diagnostic yield by detecting atypical, rare, or subchromosomal CNVs that would not be identified by targeted assays. This is a key strength of the approach and should be clearly articulated. Importantly, the manuscript does not specify the resolution limit for CNV detection (i.e., the minimum size of CNVs that can be reliably identified). This technical parameter is critical for interpreting the scope and limitations of the assay and for comparing its performance with other technologies such as array-CGH. The authors should clearly indicate this resolution threshold and how it was validated. Furthermore, a demographic summary of the study cohort—including maternal age, gestational age, and clinical indications for testing—would provide valuable context for the reader. The authors are also encouraged to include more detail on the bioinformatic workflow used for CNV calling, including the software tools, filtering criteria, and any validation methods applied. Sharing access to the analysis pipeline, when possible, would greatly enhance the study's transparency and reproducibility. Finally, some minor editorial improvements could enhance the clarity and flow of the text, particularly in the abstract and results sections. Reviewer #2: The study presents a total of 59,771 pregnancies who underwent NIPT from November 2017 to May 2021 where DNA extraction, concentration detection, and DNA library construction were performed on plasma samples using fetal chromosome aneuploidy detection kit package (BGI, Shenzhen, China) in the method of combinatorial probe-anchor synthesis. The study of 59,771 pregnant women in the general obstetric population substantiated a low specificity for fetal trisomy 21, 18, and 13 with PPV of 83.1%, 25.8%, and 10.3%, respectively. On the contrary the technical validation of the method (DOI: 10.1002/uog.16010) reported a high specificity with PPV of 99.98, 99.98, 99.9 for T21, T18, T13 respectively. We note that the analysis of the study performance shows good sensitivity while the specificity is particularly low both with respect to the technical validation of the method and to international data. This important difference raises a question of reliability that requires an answer. The authors compare the difference in specificity with an insufficient number of published case studies and suggest uncertain motivations. For example, the recent case study on approximately 72,000 consecutive cases from a single center in two years (DOI: 10.1002/pd.6580) performed with a different technique (no PCR, pair end sequencing) that reports PPV 99.3, 98.9, 82.22 for T21, T18, T13 respectively, was not considered. Since low specificity is one of the limiting parameters in the cost-benefit evaluation of NIPT use leading to the execution of an improper number of invasive controls, the authors are asked for a complete review of the case studies and a reassessment of the conclusions regarding the reliability of the method used in the study. Reviewer #3: The statistical data are generally comparable to those already reported in the existing literature. However, the manuscript does contribute by adding to the available dataset, particularly for rare autosomal aneuploidies (RAAs) and copy number variations (CNVs). The assessment for fetal mosaicism appears to be the most original and potentially valuable aspect of the study. The manuscript is complete and well presented. However, some points need to be reviewed: • It is not entirely clear whether follow-up results were available for all cases identified as high- or low-risk by NIPT. Clarifying the extent and completeness of follow-up data. • In some sections, the technical language is unclear. For example, in the cytogenetic analysis, 'karyotypes' are mentioned instead of 'metaphase' (in the paragraph titled Invasive prenatal diagnosis). • In the classification of results, 'No Calls' are not mentioned. • There is a lack of classification for the detected CNVs, distinguishing between pathogenic and non-pathogenic. • It is unclear how the false negative rate was calculated, given the absence of follow-up data. Additionally, there are several considerations that could be addressed to strengthen the findings: Long-Term Follow-Up: Although some follow-up results have been described, the study does not seem to include long-term data on how the NIPT results have actually impacted neonatal outcomes or the health of children in the long term. Lack of In-Depth Analysis on High-Risk Pregnancies: Data on outcomes for high-risk pregnancies, such as those with maternal morbidity or negative neonatal outcomes, are poorly addressed. These data could enhance the understanding of the usefulness of NIPT not only in normal pregnancies but also in high-risk situations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Clinical experience of genome-wide non-invasive prenatal testing as a first-tier screening test in a cohort of 59,771 pregnancies PONE-D-25-18695R1 Dear Dr. Jianxin Zhen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Giuseppe Novelli Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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