Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 31, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-60630Development and performance research of nickel-based alloy thin-film thermocouple sensor for aero enginePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 16 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We advise the authors to address all the concerns raised by the reviewer so that the manuscript can be evaluated based on its merit. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have gone through the manuscript and the topic is good. I have some recommendations that would help to improve the quality of the manuscript. 1. A graphical abstract should be included in the manuscript to make it more appealing. 2. In the Introduction section, the authors have written just a small 1st paragraph and switched to other researcher’s work. The introduction of the topic and its applications should be discussed in more detail. 3. More details could be added in the Figure 1. 4. In Figure 2, the schematic structure is overly simplified. The aesthetics could be improved. 5. “2. For the thin-film thermocouple preparation” => the preparation parameters should be represented in a Table for the ease of users. 6. All the headings should be revised and made more TO THE POINT and brief. 7. All the figures need revision. All the figures have the potential that a lot of information may be included in them. They should be made more informatically appealing with more attention to detail. 8. More SEM images with different magnifications should be included. 9. The design of experiments (DOE) should be more clearly explained. 10. The conclusion section should be more robust and clearly state the findings of the results obtained. Future scope and work should be included. 11. The Results and Discussion section should be added and populated as necessary. 12. The limitations of the study are not sufficiently addressed or acknowledged. Reviewer #2: The manuscript "Development and Performance Research of Nickel-Based Alloy Thin-Film Thermocouple Sensor for Aero Engine" presents a study on the design, fabrication, and performance evaluation of a thin-film thermocouple (TFTC) directly deposited on nickel-based superalloy substrates for high-temperature aerospace applications. The study is well-structured and provides a clear experimental approach, but several areas require improvement to enhance scientific rigor, reproducibility, and clarity. One of the major concerns is the lack of a strong novelty statement in the introduction (Page 2, Lines 30–55). While the introduction effectively outlines the significance of high-temperature measurements in aero engines and summarizes previous research on TFTCs, it does not clearly define what specific advancements this study contributes beyond prior works. The manuscript would benefit from an explicit statement detailing how the proposed sensor differs from existing TFTC designs, whether through material selection, fabrication techniques, or performance enhancements. Additionally, the comparison with prior studies (Page 3, Lines 10–35) is extensive but lacks a clear gap analysis that justifies this work. The methodology is comprehensive but lacks some critical details needed for experimental reproducibility. The preparation of the NiCrAlY transition layer (Page 5, Lines 90–110) and the Al₂O₃ insulation/protective layers (Page 6, Lines 120–135) is well described, but the manuscript does not explain why specific deposition parameters were chosen (e.g., sputtering power, target-substrate distance, annealing conditions). Given that these parameters significantly influence film adhesion, uniformity, and thermal stability, the authors should provide a clear justification or reference prior optimization studies. Furthermore, in Table 1 (Page 10, Lines 210–215), the functional layer thicknesses of PtRh and Pt films are given as 3.5 μm and 3 μm, respectively, but the rationale behind these thicknesses is not provided. A discussion on how thickness impacts sensor sensitivity and durability would enhance the study’s depth. The discussion section should be expanded to better contextualize the practical implications of the study. While the manuscript emphasizes that the sensor can withstand extreme conditions up to 1100°C, there is little discussion on how the design could be further optimized for real-world aerospace applications. Additionally, the protective layer's role in oxidation resistance and durability (Page 6, Lines 140–150) is mentioned briefly, but it would be useful to compare this protective strategy to alternative coating methods (e.g., YSZ coatings or SiO₂ barriers) used in high-temperature sensors. The figures and tables are well-structured, but some figure legends lack essential information. For example, Figure 3 (Page 7, Lines 160–170) presents SEM images of the NiCrAlY transition layer, but there is no scale bar or magnification information. Similarly, in Figure 5 (Page 13, Lines 290–310), the number of independent experimental replicates is not specified, which is critical for assessing reproducibility. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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PONE-D-24-60630R1High-Temperature Thin-Film Thermocouple for Aero-EnginesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Anand Pal Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting the article. We advise the authors to address all the concerns raised by the reviewer so that the manuscript can be evaluated based on its merit. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: 1.The paragraph following Equation (2) contains some typographical and formatting issues, including garbled characters and incorrect punctuation. A careful proofreading is recommended to improve clarity and presentation quality. 2.The manuscript mentions the formation of a 50 nm thermal growth layer on the NiCrAlY surface after high-temperature oxidation. However, no experimental characterization is presented to support this claim. It is recommended to provide direct evidence—such as cross-sectional imaging or thickness measurements—to substantiate this statement. 3.In Section 2.1, the description of the NiCrAlY coating preparation process includes multiple parameters and procedural steps. To improve clarity and readability, it is recommended to present these process parameters in a structured table format rather than in continuous text. 4.The manuscript briefly mentions that the Al₂O₃ insulation and protective layers are fabricated using electron beam evaporation and RF magnetron sputtering. However, it lacks critical details regarding the deposition parameters, such as substrate temperature, deposition rate, duration, and ambient conditions. These parameters have a significant impact on film quality, adhesion, and thermal stability. A more comprehensive description of the Al₂O₃ fabrication process is necessary to ensure reproducibility and evaluate the reliability of the proposed sensor. 5.The manuscript highlights fast response as a key objective (target response time <1 ms) and references this feature again in the conclusion. However, no experimental methodology or data is presented to demonstrate or quantify the sensor's temporal response. Given the importance of response time for high-temperature, dynamic environments such as aero-engines, it is strongly recommended to include relevant response-time measurements or, at minimum, a discussion of how this performance claim is supported. 6.The manuscript states that a Taguchi design of experiments (DOE) approach was used to optimize process parameters for the thin-film thermocouple. However, the actual experimental matrix, such as the orthogonal array configuration, parameter levels, and control factors, is not included. Moreover, there is no presentation of response data (e.g., Seebeck coefficient trends, film adhesion results) or analysis outputs (e.g., signal-to-noise ratio or main effects plots) derived from the DOE. To ensure transparency and reproducibility, the authors should provide detailed documentation of the Taguchi design and clearly connect it to the experimental results. 7.In Section 3.2.1, the manuscript attributes the enhanced sensitivity of the thermocouple in part to the “optimized interfacial bonding” between the PtRh/Pt sensitive layer and the Al₂O₃ insulation layer, as evidenced by the crack-free surface morphology in the SEM image. However, interfacial bonding strength cannot be reliably assessed from surface SEM alone. Direct evaluation typically requires cross-sectional imaging (e.g., TEM or cross-sectional SEM) or mechanical adhesion testing (e.g., scratch or pull-off tests). It is recommended that the authors either provide such interfacial characterization or acknowledge the limitation of using surface morphology to infer interfacial adhesion. 8.The study lacks a clear description of the experimental setup used to measure the Seebeck coefficient. Key details such as the type and control mechanism of the heat source, the data acquisition system (including sampling rate, resolution, and synchronization method), and the cold-junction temperature control are missing. These components are essential to assess the accuracy, response fidelity, and reproducibility of the calibration results. Additionally, a photo of the fabricated sensor is absent, which would help validate its form factor, integration quality, and practical implementation. Providing these elements would greatly strengthen the experimental transparency and completeness of the study. 9.There appears to be a discrepancy between the numerical error data in Table 2 and the graphical representation in Figure 6. Specifically, the error at 1100 °C is listed as 0.43%, while the error at 980 °C is 0.91%. However, in Figure 6, the error bar or deviation for 1100 °C visually appears larger than at 900 °C or 980 °C, which is inconsistent with the tabulated values. This inconsistency raises concerns about the accuracy or plotting of the calibration data and should be carefully reviewed and corrected for consistency. 10.The manuscript would benefit from a thorough language polishing. Reviewer #4: The authors deposited the NiCrAlY transition layer, Al2O3 insulation layer, and Pt10Rh/Pt thin-film thermocouple sensor on nickel-based superalloys, which could be used in the aero-engine. The results could provide the support to aero-engine applications. Besides, the authors have revised the manuscript based on the reviewers' comments. So, I think it could be published. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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