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PONE-D-24-44814Interpersonal brain synchronization during sensorimotor synchronization in people with different aerobic fitness levels: A fNIRS-Based hyperscanning StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Sorry for the long delay. It has been difficult to secure reviewers. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address reviewers comments such as justification of participants groups, terminologies used, many issues in data analysis. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study examines the differences in inter-brain synchrony signals during a sensorimotor synchronization (SMS) task in individuals with varying levels of aerobic fitness. The study recruited long-distance runners and non-athletes as the experimental and control groups, respectively, and recorded their brain activity while performing a finger-tapping synchronization task using functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS). The results revealed that the experimental group, with higher aerobic fitness, demonstrated superior synchronization abilities and greater inter-brain synchrony, particularly in the right prefrontal cortex. These findings provide new evidence for the relationship between aerobic exercise, cognitive function, and the underlying neural mechanisms. However, several aspects of the study require further clarification. Introduction 1. The term “sensorimotor synchronization” is misspelled (e.g., “Sensoriotor synchronization”). Please review the manuscript for consistency and correct this error throughout. 2. There is a lack of discussion on the relationship between aerobic exercise and SMS. How did the authors arrive at the conclusion “it is still unclear whether good aerobic fitness is associated with enhanced SMS ability and its potential mechanisms”? Why were these two variables linked? Is there a debate in the existing literature on this topic, or are theoretical concepts in this area yet to be verified? Please consider expanding on this point. 3. The concept of ROI (Region of Interest) is not clearly defined. The manuscript only discusses the relationship between synchronized movement and the prefrontal or sensory-motor cortex, but it does not explain whether aerobic exercise and different rhythms also influence the prefrontal cortex. Further discussion on this is recommended. 4. The study hypothesis is not included. Please add a research hypothesis grounded in theoretical or empirical evidence to address the research question. Methods 1. Why were long-distance runners specifically chosen for this study? What role do these subjects play in addressing the research question? Could other types of aerobic exercise groups also be applicable? 2. Please clarify which irrelevant variables were controlled for in both the experimental and control groups. Did the control group assess aerobic fitness levels, and were subjects with expertise in rhythm control (e.g., pianists) or extensive aerobic exercise experience (e.g., regular gym-goers) excluded? 3. The rationale for using 1000m run time as an indicator of aerobic fitness is unclear. Please provide supporting references. 4. Please verify the consistency of channel placements across subjects. What is the variability in channel location data (MNI coordinates) between the two groups, and how do these differ? 5. In the data analysis section, the manuscript mentions that "HbO is more sensitive to blood flow changes." Please include supporting references for this claim. 6. In Figure 2, is the data presented from a single subject or is it the average of all subjects? Results 1. Please include an analysis of the validity of the subjects’ behavioral responses, specifically comparing the MITI between the two groups and their corresponding control rhythms. 2. Is there a correlation between the aerobic fitness level of the experimental group and IBS? 3. Does the relationship between MA/ITIV and IBS differ between the experimental and control groups? Discussion 1. Under the 500ms condition, there were no differences in MA between the two groups, but significant differences in inter-brain synchrony were observed. What explains this discrepancy between the behavioral and brain activity results? Please discuss in detail. Reviewer #2: The manuscript reports findings regarding the beneficial effects of good physical fitness on the ability to perform synchronized actions. The study presents the results of original research. Results reported have not been published elsewhere. Experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail. Conclusions are presented in an appropriate fashion and are supported by the data. The article is presented in an intelligible fashion and is written in standard English. The research meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability. There is only one point that the authors should consider The manuscript title names as "interpersonal synchronization" the correspondence between physiological variables of two individuals responding to the same external sytimuli. This is not interpersonal synchronization,that is usually referred to the similar behavioral and physiological activities observable in two persons looking at each other and reflecting each other. Thus, I suggest to change the title, erasing the "interpersonal synchronization" , and focus the descrpition of results and discussion on fi effect of fitness on the individual ability to follow the external stimuli Reviewer #3: General comments. This is a paper studying the influence of aerobic fitness on sensorimotor synchronization and interpersonal brain synchronization. In general, the experimental methodology used was appropriate. Two experimental groups, differing in the degree of aerobic fitness were compared. Methodological technics using on one side, behavioral evaluation parameters, and on the other functional near-infrared spectroscopy were consistent to determine the possible changes. Although the two functional properties addressed in the paper (Interpersonal Brain Synchronization and Sensorimotor Synchronization), are explicitly defined in the text, some confusing research aim is detected during the exposition of the work, were the reader navigates between the Interpersonal Brain Synchronization or the Sensorimotor Synchronization, as the main point of study. Specific comments. 1) Authors use to much abbreviations, which does not facilitate the understanding of the text. Perhaps it should be convenient and if authors agree, the use of a table with all the abbreviations used in the text at the end of the manuscript. This is one of the difficulties in following authors ‘arguments. 2) Discrepant definitions between declarations of variables in Methods and their presentations in the figures (“Synchrony Performance, Average asynchrony identified as “AS”, pp. 16, and in Figure 4, as “MA”; Inter-Brain synchronization identified as “IBS”, pp. 9, and Interpersonal Brain Synchronization with the same abbreviation [IBS] Figure 6). Declarations of variables with the same meaning or the same abbreviations should be consistent along the paper to avoid confusing the reader. 3) Paper is focalized into Interpersonal Brain Synchronization and Sensorimotor Synchronization. However, no explicit declaration about how these variables are experimentally measured and its meaning when values of variables changes in its range is given in Material and Methods. It will be very helpful to general readers if authors give an additional complementary explanation. 4) There is some technically problem with the correlation-regression analysis performed in figures 4-7. In page 8, it is declared that MA in the IOI= 1000 ms is 79.50 ± 19.1. This means that for 79.5 ms the most higher value is 98.6 ms, and the most lower value is 60.4 ms. Statistically, this range represent one population with a mean value of 79.50 ms. In Figure 6 B, as an example, the range of values for the independent variable (MA), 60.4 -98.6 ms, represent just only one value for the dependent variable IBS. Thus, the cluster of points of IBS between 60.4 – 98.6 ms are not really different covariant values of MA. They represent only an estimate of the covariant IBS, when MA = 79.50. This is so, because authors decided to use the statistical Model 2 for the regression analysis. My suggestion is that the correlation-regression analysis should be eliminated, since authors have enough evidence supporting the hypothesis that the condition of aerobic fitness is influencing the parameters under study. A similar comment for the rest is valid. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Qihan Zhang Reviewer #2: Yes: Enrica Laura SANTARCANGELO Reviewer #3: Yes: Edgardo O. Alvarez ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-24-44814R1Interpersonal brain synchronization during sensorimotor synchronization in people with different aerobic fitness levels: A fNIRS-based hyperscanning studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please refer to Reviewer 1's comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Regarding the introduction section, it seems the author may have misunderstood my original question. The second paragraph of the introduction emphasizes two main points. First, that sensorimotor synchronization (SMS) training can enhance motor performance. Second, that motor experience influences SMS. Based on these two points, the author concludes that there is a bidirectional relationship between SMS and physical activity. However, the focus of the present study is aerobic fitness. What is the relationship between aerobic fitness and physical activity? Can aerobic fitness be equated with physical activity? The core concepts in these two paragraphs are inconsistent. Moreover, based on the main research content of this study, the independent variables are aerobic fitness level and IOI (inter-onset interval, i.e., rhythm), while the dependent variables include measures of synchronization performance and neural signals reflecting inter-brain synchronization. Therefore, the introduction should primarily address how the independent variables influence the dependent variables and their possible neural underpinnings—in other words, how aerobic fitness and rhythm affect synchronization, particularly the underlying inter-brain mechanisms. Specifically, the emphasis should be on how aerobic fitness modulates SMS under different rhythmic conditions. For example, rhythm affects the difficulty of synchronization. According to the forward prediction model, individuals form predictions in advance about the sensory consequences of their actions and compare these predictions with actual sensory feedback to make corrections. Aerobic exercise continuously trains this “prediction–execution–feedback–adjustment” loop, thereby enhancing motor performance. Thus, the higher the individual’s aerobic fitness level, the more robust their forward prediction model becomes, leading to better motor performance across varying levels of difficulty. Additionally, based on dynamic systems theory, aerobic exercise strengthens the dynamic regulation of perception–action–environment coupling, which in turn enhances synchronization performance. Furthermore, the discussion of neuroimaging in the introduction is insufficient. For instance, in the third paragraph, what specific brain regions are affected by aerobic exercise-induced plasticity? What roles do these regions play in SMS? The second-to-last paragraph of the introduction only mentions that the prefrontal cortex is involved in SMS, but what is its relationship with aerobic exercise? A more coherent line of reasoning might be: aerobic exercise enhances the forward prediction model, which is associated with the prefrontal cortex and premotor cortex. SMS under different IOI conditions involves the prefrontal cortex and sensorimotor cortex. Both mechanisms implicate the prefrontal and sensorimotor cortices. The more synchronized individuals’ behavioral performance is, the more accurate their prediction of each other’s movements, which is reflected in more synchronized neural activity—in other words, higher inter-brain synchrony. Reviewer #2: My points have been addressed. The study is methodologically sound and the results are clearly reported and discussed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Enrica Laura SANTARCANGELO Reviewer #3: Yes: Edgardo O. 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