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PONE-D-24-57615Improving pediatric care in Uganda with a digital platform and quality improvement initiative: a retrospective review of Smart Triage + QIPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Goertzen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title: Improving pediatric care in Uganda with a digital platform and quality improvement initiative: a retrospective review of Smart Triage + QI. General comment: The smart Triage and QI were implemented in the OPD. The results on mortality reduction observed in inpatients may not not necessarily be accounted for solely by interventions in the OPD. Abstract: Ordinarily discussion is not acccommodated in the abstract instead a conclusion is more appropriate. Introduction: Smart Triage is mentioned briefly wheraas QI is ommitted in the introduction. Results: Figures ought to have legends/titles on the bottom. Discussion: Whereas there was an observed reduction of mortality during the review perod my concern is to link it directly to the interventions in OPD unless if the QI was hospitalwide. The Authors should first focus on traige rates and time to antimicrobials and can only state that the interventions could have contributed to the reductions in mortality seen. Conclusion: Authors are expected to write concise statements in the conclusion section. References are not expected in this section. Reviewer #2: The study was focused on the feasibility and implementation of the Smart Triage, within the Quality Improvement initiative in the outpatient department (OPD) of a pediatric hospital in Uganda, over a 5-year period (2018-2023). Smart Triage joins a risk prediction algorithm and a digital platform to enable healthcare workers to triage patients and track treatments effectively. The authors stated that “the aim of QI initiative was to improve triaging rates and to reduce time-to antimicrobials in the hospital’s outpatient department (OPD)”. Moreover, in the section “QI intervention” they declared: “QI efforts were aimed at increasing the triaging rate to 100% in the OPD and reducing the time-to-antimicrobials to below a median of 45 minutes to reduce the number of patients waiting for longer periods”. Finally, at the end of the “Introduction”, the authors affirm: “This paper reports the most significant system-level changes that contributed to sustained improvements in these metrics”. The study is interesting, but there are some critical issues that would be important to clarify. • Smart Triage is described in the Introduction (lines 69-77) and in the Smart Triage Platform section (lines 107-129) as a digital platform that consists of three components: 1) a smart triage mobile application; 2) a smart spot bluetooth low energy system; 3) a clinical dashboard. All the Smart Triage system is summarized in figure 1. However, can the authors better clarify how exactly beacons work? • In the figure 2 “Key Driver Diagram for HICH” is shown the diagram summarizing the Smart Triage QI Team identification of three key drivers of triaging rates and wait time-to antimicrobials in the OPD. However, in the box “Aim” only the triaging rate objective is reported. Furthermore, the conceptual and graphical relationships between aim, key drivers, secondary drivers, and change ideas, should be better explained. • In the figure 3 “HICH Smart Triage QI Interventions Timeline October 2018 - October 2023” is shown the time schedule of the activities implemented. It would appear that the implementation of the smart triage mobile application took place between March 2022 and October 2023. However, further on in the manuscript (lines 228-229) it says: “November 1, 2018, the start of the first full month with the triage platform”. Since the smart triage mobile application would seem indispensable to the triage platform, would it be possible to clarify this apparent time contradiction? • A more relevant issue is about “Data sources”. The authors affirm (lines 214-218): “For this analysis, data was collected from HICH’s monthly reports (aggregate data), the Smart Triage platform (deidentified data) and the Electronic Medical Records (deidentified data). HICH is mandated to provide monthly reports to the Ugandan Ministry of Health, including reports of mortality rates and admission rates”. Can the authors clarify what deidentified data are? If they were individual data, why were all analyses instead conducted on aggregate data derived from the hospital's monthly reports? Was it conceivable to construct an individual-based dataset from the Electronic Medical Records, which would have allowed analytically, not ecologically, to assess associations between certain risk factors and the outcomes studied? Evaluation and analysis • Lines 220-222: “HICH’s primary outcomes were the triaging rates within the OPD, the median time from triage to initiation of antimicrobials (minutes), and the mortality rates of admitted patients at HICH”. Why was the evaluation of mortality rates not stated early on as one of the objectives of the study? • Lines 224-226: “We began collecting baseline data with the initial launch of PocketDoc in August 2018; therefore, we have included this data when possible, to establish a strong baseline for our data analysis”. What do the authors mean by “therefore, we have included this data when possible”? What data might not have been included? • Lines 243-245: The overall trajectories of change of OPD attendance, triaging rates, illness acuity (independent ED-PEWS urgency categories), time-to-antimicrobials, and mortality rates were assessed using simple linear regression with time as the explanatory variable”. Has the linearity of the outcomes over time been assessed? Results • Are the results in Table 1 derived from data already aggregated monthly? In any case, why did the authors not use the variables shown in the table to calculate specific rates (for age, sex, nutrition status, presenting complaints)? • Lines 259-261: “The number of high-urgency patients increased by 6.2 patients per month (95% CI: 3.37 to 8.94, p-value <0.01); keeping pace with the increase in patients at an overall average of 19% (95% CI: 18-20) of total patients (no significant change in the percent). • Lines 271-273: There was a significant reduction in the median time-to-antimicrobials during the five-year intervention, from 77.6 to 53.6 minutes, with a slope of simple linear regression of -0.4 minutes (-24 seconds) per month (95% CI: -0.73 to -0.04, p- value <0.05)”. It would be helpful if graphs similar to those in Figures 4 and 5 were also produced for these three outcomes, to enable the reader to assess trends over time. • Lines 261-263: “The OPD triaging rate increased to 91% by October 2023, with a sustained plateau above 90% since July 2022 The OPD triaging rate increased to 91% by October 2023, with a sustained -plateau of 90% since July 2022 (Fig 4)”. The triage rate at the end of the observation period is broadly similar to that in 2018, before the implementation of the Smart Triage platform. • Lines 274-277: “The mortality rate in admitted patients decreased from 5.1% in August 2018 to 2.6% in October 2023 (49% decrease) (Fig 5). The line of linear regression for the rate of mortality had a slope (95% CI) of -0.04% per month 277 (-0.068% to -0.02%. p-value <0.01)”. The mortality trend over time would appear to be nonlinear. Moreover, as mentioned above, it would be interesting to calculate specific rates for the available risk factors. Why has it not been done? Discussion • Lines 283-288: “This QI initiative was initiated to sustain triaging rates and reduce time-to-antimicrobials in the OPD of a pediatric hospital in Uganda, which demonstrated significant changes to both process and clinical outcomes. The initiative resulted in high triaging rates and a sustained reduction in time-to-antimicrobials”. If the goal was “to sustain” triage rates, it should be reiterated that they were at 90% even before the implementation of the Smart Triage platform, and that triage and access rates had declined and then rose again during the COVID-19 period, as expected. The authors should discuss this issue. • Lines 288-291: “Mortality of admitted patients decreased by almost half during this 5-year period, despite a sustained increase in patient numbers with comparable illness severity. Process improvements were the focus of this QI intervention; however, the ultimate purpose of all QI efforts was the improvement of clinical outcomes”. Association between severity and mortality is ecologically based. It would be important to know the causes of death to assess the plausibility of the proposed association between QI and outcome; are they the same, have they changed? Are they causes that might actually be affected by triage methodology? The authors themselves raise the question: “While decreased mortality rates due to sepsis have been linked to a decreased time-to antimicrobials, this is likely also related to changes in clinical awareness and other elements of the sepsis bundle of care, such as intravenous fluid resuscitation”. The authors should discuss this issue. • Lines 298-302: “This change is likely to be highly correlated to other simultaneous QI initiatives. For example, HICH prioritized the education of their nursing staff during this intervention timeframe and supported nurses in receiving diploma level training. HICH also mandated the consistent supply of medicines on their site, thereby eliminating treatment delays that were due to stockouts”. Would it be possible to have some more information about the organization and staff structure, as done, for example, by Onyango et al. in the cited article (reference 11)? • Lines 303-304: “A stable triage rate above 90 percent is indicative of staff adoption and adherence to the QI process”. The triage rate started from 90%. Anyway, why would the triage rate decrease without QI? • Lines 306-307: “The increased volume of patients is likely to be due to the efficient and effective service provided”. Do the authors mean that the hospital has become more attractive? do they attribute this to the implementation of smart triage or to the overall improvement? • Lines 308-310: “The QI interventions were sustained even with increasing OPD attendance. This may be attributable to an increase in funding at HICH to support additional staffing, expand infrastructure and improve workflow to accommodate the increased demands”. As mentioned earlier, can you get some more data about the organization and staff structure changes? In fact the authors stated “It is unlikely that the decrease in time to antibiotics of 24 minutes is solely responsible for better outcomes; better triage and attention to overall care may be responsible but difficult to prove”. • Lines 324-328: “Ideally, antimicrobial agents should be administered to those who are likely to benefit and withheld from those who do not need it. However, identification of groups likely to benefit is difficult in the absence of microbial and laboratory support. Lack of laboratory support also hampers antimicrobial stewardship programs. That there was a decrease in mortality rate despite less antimicrobial use is heartening, but difficult to explain”. Has the use of antimicrobials decreased? How come there is no laboratory support? Why are we not shown data on this? Could the reduction in administration time depend on the decreased use of therapy, rather than the Smart Triage platform implementation? Moreover, later in the text (lines 348-349) it says: “Lab personnel also began learning QI strategies and have initiated lab specific QI projects with the Smart Triage QI Team’s guidance”. Can the authors clarify whether or not there was laboratory support? • Lines 334-340: “Many QI initiatives are criticized because QI initiatives are often completed in siloes and do not lead to sustainable organizational-level change. Continuous QI (CQI) embeds itself into institutional culture in healthcare by fostering a culture of continuous learning, innovation, and improvement”. This QI initiative demonstrates that HICH’s commitment to continuous QI led to sustainable change and impacted long-term health outcomes”. The fact that these are isolated and unstructured initiatives may be an effective limitation. But above all, perhaps the use of the verb “to demonstrate” should be avoided, also in view of what is stated in the following paragraph “Challenges in implementation”. Challenges in implementation • Lines 367-372: “Healthcare workers and patients communicated concerns regarding the tracking of patient locations and concerns about the health effects of wireless energy waves. Multiple QI initiatives were aimed at reducing beacon loss, which occurred at the expense of other potential initiatives. Treatment tracking using the beacons was difficult to maintain and beacons were eventually phased out of HICH’s workflow with the implementation of a new electronic charting system”. So the hospital is abandoning the system they presented in the study? Can this point be clarified? • Lines 372-382: “While the automatic tracking of treatments is desirable and wireless technologies are widely used for tracking in many applications, the barriers to adoption in this context were significant and were not reliably overcome. Smart Triage can be implemented without the Smart Spot system. Smart Triage relies on the use of a phone or tablet with connected pulse oximeter for optimal functionality. Any loss or malfunction of the pulse oximeter impacts data quality and accuracy. Vital signs can be entered from other available devices; however, this may degrade reliability. Equipment maintenance and replacement due to theft and wear-and-tear must be considered to ensure sustainability. Disruptions to the local network also cause issues with uploading patient data and using the clinical dashboard, but the platform is not reliant on an outside Internet connection which can more frequently be unstable”. All these considerations undermine previous claims about the long-term success and sustainability of the initiative. The authors should discuss this issue. Conclusions • Lines 390-394: “Throughout the course of this initiative, we demonstrated a sustained improvement in triaging rates and time-to-antimicrobials in HICH’s OPD through multiple simultaneous PDSA cycles that targeted OPD staff training and OPD workflows while fostering a QI culture within the OPD. The decrease in mortality rates for admitted patients at HICH indicates the real impact of this initiative”. Such statements are too strong, because they are obtained through “ecological” associations without any possibility of analytically assessing (age, clinical conditions at access) other factors potentially associated with the outcomes. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-24-57615R1Improving pediatric care in Uganda with a digital platform and quality improvement initiative: a retrospective review of Smart Triage + QIPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ansermino, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The new version of the manuscript clarifies almost all the doubts we had raised. However, there are a couple of observations that we suggest to the authors that could further improve their manuscript. • The authors state that they cannot analyse specific mortality rates for patient characteristics, as they do not have a data source that allows linkage with the patients included in the study. However, in response to a question about a statement at the beginning of the paragraph Evaluatyon and analysis 'Lines 220-222: "HICH's primary outcomes were the triaging rates within the OPD, the median time from triage to initiation of antimicrobials (minutes), and the mortality rates of admitted patients at HICH”. Why was the evaluation of mortality rates not stated early on as one of the objectives of the study? the authors answer: “The individual studies' numbers were too small to expect a significant decrease in mortality, and the studies were not powered to demonstrate a reduction in mortality". It is therefore unclear whether mortality among the subjects studied was not calculated due to low numbers of observed events or whether it was not among the objectives of the study anyway, since the study was not sized to assess it. It would be interesting to understand this, since mortality rates of admitted patients at HICH is counted among the primary outcomes of the study. • The authors responded to the observation that “The OPD triage rate at the end of the observation period is broadly similar to that in 2018, before the implementation of the Smart Triage platform” (about 90%) that “The reason for the high triage rate at the start of the observation is that the triage was supported by the study team during the baseline period”. They modified the text accordingly. Would it be possible to have an estimate of the triage rate before the start of this support before the baseline period? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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