Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 27, 2025 |
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Kind regards, Hideto Sano Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In the current study the authors explored the role of serum lysophosphatidylcholine acyltransferase 3 (LPCAT3) in glucose and lipid metabolism and investigated its association with type 2 diabetes mellitus. They underlined that lower serum LPCAT3 levels may be associated with an elevated risk of developing T2DM and that there is a tendency for serum LPCAT3 levels to negatively correlate with BMI, HDL, and fasting blood glucose. Some suggestions: 1. In my opinion “glycolipid metabolism” is not suitable for a keyword. 2. Inclusion criteria, line 101 – 102: please check the statement “The study enrolled adults aged 18 to 80 years who had not used any medication in the preceding month”. Any medication for a 80 year patient? 3. Table 1: For a part of the biochemical parameters the reference values are not presented. Please complete. 4. Add please some details concerning the serum lysophosphatidylcholine acyltransferase 3 determination using ELISA method. 5. At discussion section are presented a lot of aspects taken from the literature but the results of the present study are insufficiently discussed. 6. In my opinion, incorporating prediabetic patients into the study enhanced the study's significance. Reviewer #2: I would like to thank the editor for inviting me to review this article as this paper raises a very interesting question that will benefit clinical practice. However, I have to acknowledge some recommendations and comments throughout the manuscript. The Title Title need to be rewritten to be more indicative about the aim of the study. The introduction: -“The authors conduct very relevant research but fail to emphasize the relevance in their introduction and need to be more clarified in the introduction section. The exact cause of trying to assess if Serum Lysophosphatidylcholine Acyltransferase 3 Levels Correlated with Metabolic Variables and Predictive Value for Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Risk is not clear enough, and need to be more clarified in the introduction section. -Clarify primary and secondary outcome of your study at the end of introduction. In method: • Clarify the type of study design used, duration of the study and inclusion and exclusion criteria. • If this study was approved by the ethics committee write the registration date and numbers. • Also, please mention which international code of ethics are you adhering to? • Add CONSORT flow chart for the study. In Statistical Analysis: -How did they control confounding? Did they assess for multicollinearity? - How was sample size calculated? In Results: -Table 1 &2: Some abbreviations not elaborated under the table, Revise. --Author should mention how data is presented, and the Statistical tests used for comparison and the level of significance below each table and figure. -ROC-CURVE: authors should mention the cutting off points and 95 % confidence interval and the detailed table for area under the curve. Discussion - Lack of discussion regarding the effect of age, sex, and comorbidities can have within this study. Limitations and conclusion: - This study had limitations, primarily the issue of referral bias and possible confounding." -Controlling for confounding variables is a critical step in conducting observational studies. The authors should use potential confounding variables as covariates in a regression model. - the conclusion should be rewritten based on the above point. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rehab H. Werida ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Hideto Sano Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript, "Association of serum lysophosphatidylcholine acyltransferase 3 levels with metabolic variables and risk of type 2 diabetes mellitus: a cross-sectional study." The study addresses an interesting and important question regarding the role of serum LPCAT3 in metabolic health. The manuscript is well-structured, and I commend your efforts in responding to the previous round of reviews. While the study is promising, there are several major areas that require significant revision before the manuscript can be considered for publication. My comments are intended to be constructive and to help you strengthen the manuscript. Major Points: 1. Overarching Interpretation and the Confounding Effect of Obesity: This is the most critical issue with the manuscript. Your logistic regression analysis in Table 4 is the centerpiece of the study's primary outcome. While Models 1-4 show a significant association between the highest LPCAT3 tertile and lower T2DM risk, this association becomes non-significant (p=0.115) in Model 5 after adjusting for anthropometric indicators (BMI, WC, WHR). o Conclusion: This result does not support the conclusion that "low serum LPCAT3 levels may be associated with an increased risk of developing T2DM." A more accurate conclusion is that the association between serum LPCAT3 and T2DM is not independent of adiposity and is likely confounded or mediated by it. o Required Action: The abstract, discussion, and conclusion must be substantially rewritten to reflect this finding. The narrative should shift from "LPCAT3 as a risk factor" to "LPCAT3 as a potential marker of a metabolic state related to obesity, which itself is a risk factor for T2DM." This is a more nuanced and scientifically accurate interpretation of your data. 2. Weak Explanatory and Predictive Power of Models: o In your stepwise linear regression (Table 3), the final model has an R-squared value of 0.049. This indicates that your independent variables (BMI, HDL, FBG) explain only 4.9% of the variance in serum LPCAT3 levels. This is extremely low and suggests that other, unmeasured factors are the primary determinants of LPCAT3 levels. o Similarly, the ROC curve analysis (Fig 2) yields an AUC of 0.580. This represents very poor discriminatory power, barely better than a coin toss (AUC=0.5). o Required Action: While you report these numbers, their implications must be stated more explicitly in the Discussion and Limitations sections. You must acknowledge that, based on your data, the clinical utility of serum LPCAT3 as a predictive or explanatory biomarker appears to be minimal. 3. Omission of Age and Sex-Specific Analyses: In your response to Reviewer B, you state that you opted not to delve into age and sex analyses "to preserve the conciseness and flow of our manuscript." For a study on metabolic disease, this is a major omission, not a matter of conciseness. Age and sex are fundamental modifiers of metabolism, adiposity, and T2DM risk. o Required Action: You must perform and present analyses stratified by sex. For example, do the correlations between LPCAT3 and BMI/HDL/FBG hold for both men and women? You should also test for an interaction between LPCAT3 and sex/age on T2DM risk. These analyses are standard practice and essential for a rigorous study. Section-Specific Comments: • Abstract: o The conclusion needs to be revised to reflect the non-significance of the association after adjusting for obesity. Example: "Conclusion: In this cohort, the association between lower serum LPCAT3 levels and T2DM was not independent of obesity. While LPCAT3 correlates with measures of adiposity and glycemic control, its predictive power for T2DM is limited." o Introduction o "With the progress in metabolomics and lipidomics research, the critical role of lipid metabolism dysregulation in the onset and progression of T2DM has gained increasing recognition " add this reference to this sentence DOI: 10.18502/aacc.v10is2.17213 • Methods: o The exclusion of individuals with pre-diabetes is a major design choice that should be justified more robustly in the main manuscript's Discussion/Limitations, not just in the reviewer response. It fundamentally limits your ability to discuss LPCAT3's role in the progression from normoglycemia to T2DM. • Results: o Your reporting of the complex collinearity analyses (S3-S14 Tables) is commendable. However, the key takeaway from this—that the relationships are unstable and dependent on which correlated variable is included in the model—should be summarized in the main text of the results to give the reader a clearer sense of the data's complexity. o The reporting of the PLS analysis is honest about the large standard errors. This reinforces the conclusion that the observed correlations are weak and unreliable. • Discussion: o The discussion should be restructured. A significant portion should be dedicated to exploring why the association between LPCAT3 and T2DM is attenuated by obesity. You could hypothesize that LPCAT3 is more directly involved in adipocyte biology or lipid storage regulation, and its link to T2DM is therefore indirect. o You rightly contrast your findings with tissue-specific studies. This is a strong part of the discussion. You can strengthen it further by discussing the potential sources of serum LPCAT3 (e.g., liver, adipose tissue) and how systemic levels might not reflect the biology of a single tissue. o Remove speculative phrasing that is not supported by your weak data. Focus on what your data clearly show and what they do not. I believe that addressing these points will significantly improve the quality and impact of your manuscript. The research topic is of high interest, and a more cautious and deeply analyzed interpretation of your findings will make a valuable contribution to the field. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . 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Association of serum lysophosphatidylcholine acyltransferase 3 levels with metabolic variables and risk of type 2 diabetes mellitus: a cross-sectional study PONE-D-25-16090R2 Dear Dr. Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hideto Sano Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all my concerns. I consider the manuscript is now acceptable for publication. Reviewer #3: I read the new version of manuscript and authors could answer all of my comments. So, I do not have additional comments. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Rehab H. Werida, Faculty of Pharmacy, Damanhour University, Egypt. Reviewer #3: Yes: Mehran Rahimlou ********** |
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