Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2024 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** Reviewer #1: This paper is not standard and rigorous enough for publication. 1-The introduction of the paper was very descriptive, it did not situate the current study in literature or highlight what the gap in the literature is that this study is trying to address. In this sense, authors must provide better connections between variables under analysis. 2-In relation to the contribution of the study to the literature, I did not get a sense from the article that the findings revealed anything other than what we already know. The introduction of the paper was very descriptive, it did not situate the current study in literature or highlight what the gap in the literature is that this study is trying to address. Another concern is related with the literature gap. It is unclear what the gap that you intend to fill is?; 3-The Subjects and Methods are also too simple. The author should provide detailed descriptions on the scales and statistical analysis methods. 4-The results section did not show any information on the sensitivity and specificity of the models, but in Discussion section the authors said "The sensitivity of the logistic regression model is higher than that of the decision tree model" 5-Overall, the discussion is very descriptive and any statements about the contribution and conclusions of the study are not new. What is the contribution to the literature, what is interesting about your results? The practical implications need to be further explored, as well as the limitations of the study. Sometimes the discussion gives the impression that it is not very fluid and very descriptive, perhaps because there are few theoretical and empirical links about what is being analysed. In this sense, I suggest to the authors to make the discussion more fluid, organized into sub-topics and highlighting questions such as: why are your results important? What do you bring back to the literature? Generally, the paper needs to be reviewed for spelling; grammar and punctuation could be improved in terms of the flow of the read. Reviewer #2: Overall Evaluation: This manuscript addresses an important and timely public health issue: the mental health and perceived social support of MSM populations, a group that is often underrepresented and stigmatized. The dual use of logistic regression and decision tree analysis provides complementary insights into predictors of anxiety and low social support. The study is commendable in scope, sample size, and relevance. However, several areas require clarification, refinement, and improvement to meet the standards of a high-impact journal. The writing is not very good. But considering that the important of this issue, I'll give you a chance to major revise. 1.The introduction is a bit too brief. Could you please elaborate on the relevant background? 2.Clarity and Grammar The manuscript is marred by numerous grammatical issues, awkward sentence constructions, and inconsistencies in tense and word choice. Professional language editing is essential before publication. Examples: “respondents who was conscious” should be “respondents who were conscious”; “If patients was not willing…” should be “If patients were not willing…” 3.Study Design and Methodology Cross-sectional design limitation: The authors acknowledge this in the limitations section, but stronger emphasis is needed throughout the discussion when making causal statements. Sampling and bias: The use of a convenience sample via online platforms may introduce selection bias. More discussion on this limitation is warranted, especially regarding generalizability. And, to whom did you distribute the questionnaire links online? Specifically, which groups of people did you send them to? Who filled out these questionnaires were those people from those groups? This question is rather vague. You must clarify this issue. Age range discrepancy: Inclusion criteria mention ≥18 years, yet the reported ages go down to 14. This contradiction must be clarified and ethically addressed. 4.Statistical Analysis The rationale for combining logistic regression and CHAID decision trees is conceptually sound but underexplained. The paper would benefit from a brief paragraph comparing the strengths and limitations of each method and why both were used. The description of the CHAID model lacks clarity and should include model performance metrics (e.g., classification accuracy, sensitivity/specificity). Multicollinearity: There is no mention of checking for multicollinearity in the logistic regression model, which should be addressed. 5.Results Presentation Tables and figures need clearer labeling and formatting. Table 1, for instance, is difficult to interpret due to clutter and misalignment. Figures 1 and 2 (CHAID trees) are not visible in the manuscript; it is crucial these be embedded for peer review with legible text and nodes. 6.Interpretation of Findings The paper sometimes overstates associations as if they are causal (e.g., "income had an independent influence on anxiety"). This should be rephrased throughout. The authors suggest that HIV testing directly improves mental health, but this may be more reflective of reverse causality (i.e., those with less anxiety are more willing to get tested). A more nuanced interpretation is needed. 7.Ethical Concerns The mention of 14-year-old participants contradicts ethical requirements for adult consent and conflicts with the stated inclusion criteria (≥18 years). This could jeopardize the study’s ethical approval status if not clarified or corrected. 8.Literature Integration While many relevant studies are cited, the manuscript could benefit from stronger integration of recent high-impact studies on MSM mental health and use of machine learning in public health. Reviewer #3: This study, conducted by Yi-Wei Zhou et al., aimed to assess the anxiety status, social support level, and associated factors among men who have sex with men (MSM) in China. The research utilized an Internet service platform for MSM between March and June 2024, employing decision tree models and binary logistic regression to analyze the factors related to anxiety and perceived social support. The study found that 19.6% of the 1070 MSM respondents had anxiety symptoms, with higher proportions among HIV-positive subjects (30.6%) compared to HIV-negative cases (17.7%). Furthermore, 12.9% of MSM had lower levels of perceived social support. Logistic regression analyses and decision tree model revealed that income and HIV testing, as well as marriage and work status, were independent factors influencing anxiety symptoms in the MSM population, while education level and HIV testing were independent predictors of low social support. One significant limitation of this study is the potential for selection bias, as the sample was recruited through an Internet service platform, which may not be representative of the entire MSM population. Secondly, the cross-sectional design of the study limits the ability to establish causality between the variables. Thirdly, the use of self-reported data may also introduce recall and other bias, as participants might not accurately report their anxiety symptoms or social support levels. Fourthly, in the title and elsewhere of this paper, the term “anxiety status” is not accurate, which should be anxiety symptoms, because GAD-7 was used. I do not agree to indicate the statistical methods in the title, please clarify the research design of this study here, i.e., a cross-sectional study. Fifthly, in the introduction of the main text, the authors did not review what has been known on the anxiety symptoms in MSM population and what the limitations and current knowledge gaps are. Therefore, rationale for this study is inadequate. The use of decision tree is novel but it seems that the authors knew little about its strengths such as the identification of interactions and ranking the importance of related factors of anxiety. The decision tree figures are also very crude and not standardized. I suggest the authors to review two prior studies in the statistics, and re-analyze and re-draw the figures accordingly (PMID: 36277764 and PMID: 35245996). Sixth, in the methods, please describe GAD-7 and PSSS in detail including their psychometric properties and widely use in Chinese populations (i.e., PMID: 33313137,PMID: 40309591, PMID: 40194485). Lastly, the study's focus on a specific time frame (March to June 2024) may not capture the dynamic nature of anxiety and social support, which could vary across different periods. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Assessment of anxiety symptoms with low social support and associated factors among men who have sex with men (MSM): A cross-sectional study PONE-D-24-48458R1 Dear Dr. zumu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yan-Min Xu Guest Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The manuscript is substantially improved. The authors have undertaken a major revision that has successfully addressed all the critical issues regarding methodological clarity, statistical reporting, interpretation, and ethical concerns. Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed my concerns. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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