Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 23, 2024 |
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You also have the option of uploading the data as Supporting Information files, but we would recommend depositing data directly to a data repository if possible. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. 3. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please move it to the Methods section and delete it from any other section. Please ensure that your ethics statement is included in your manuscript, as the ethics statement entered into the online submission form will not be published alongside your manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have presented an important analysis looking at the changing distributions of different NTS serovars in South Africa, and the associated AMR. However, I believe that the manuscript needs complete revision in order to really contribute to knowledge in this area. General comments 1. The manuscript goes into extreme detail regarding the predominant serotypes and AMR and much of this can be combined into a single argument, including the tables of resistance, resistant genes and serotypes, shortening the manuscript, especially as much of the data can be presented in figures/tables. 2. The authors have alluded to the source of the isolates - but have not provided any information on source attribution. Given the importance of this in NTS management, the authors should analyse which serotypes are associated with which food animals and include these data in the manuscript. 3. The authors refer to "Group OMD as the 8th most common serotype. This is incorrect. S. Gallinarum is the 8th most common serotype - the data needs to be reanalyzed with this in mind because OMD represents a collection of different serotypes, that agglutinate in group specific antisera. 4. Figure 1 - 3 are presented separately, but can be collapsed into a single figure reflecting the 8 most common serotypes (excluding OMD); the same applies to figures 4 and 5. 5. Table 3 should be revised to exclude OMD as a serotype. 6. The authors, for convenience I suspect, divided their data into 13-year periods. I find this artificial and it obstructs from comparing these data to similar data that may be published elsewhere. They should rather use 5 - year or at least 10-year periods, and highlight that before 1960 and after 2020, the data are not representative of a full five years/decade. Specific comments 1. The authors need to completely revise the referencing. The numbers in the text do not correspond with the references which are presented alphabetically. 2. The authors should ensure that they have correctly italicised the genes referred to in the text. 3. Line 76 to 77: BETA-lactamase is not an antibiotic - it is an enzyme that breaks down BETA-lactam antibiotics. 4. Lines 119 - 121: this does not make sense and should be revised. 5. Please include the correct website address at line 158 - 159, instead of this version? 6. The PCR methodology does not need to be described in full - the authors can state "as previously described and provide a reference. 7. Line 473 ssspH1 should be corrected to sspH. 8. Line 546 & 565 - State the name of the author of each publication, not just the (incorrect) reference numbers [27] and [31]. This rule applies throughout. 9. Line 654. Delete the comma after patterns to give this sense. 10. Line 661 - 662. Serotype severity does not differ between hosts, the severity of disease due to different serotypes does. 11. Lines 676 - 681 refer to antimicrobial use in chickens, but what is the potential role of environmental contamination in selecting for resistance? 12. Lines 701 - 708. Some of the isolates analysed go back to the 1950s. Can the authors be confident that their isolates did not lose virulence characteristics over the time period? Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, You have done a great job and I learned a lot from your manuscript. However, I have a few revisions to ask of you. Line 562 states “… in an earlier study by [27].” Please add the name(s) of the author(s) being cited. Line 564 says “[31] provided the evidence …” Please edit it as requested above. Line 588 should start as a new sentence i.e. “On the grounds of these findings, …”. Lines 631 to 632 are incomplete. “The resistance of piperacillin-tazobactam and ceftriaxone reported in this study was surprising since these antibiotics are registered in SA for human.” Human what? Well done! Reviewer #3: The manuscript addresses an important global issue, focusing on the monitoring, surveillance, antimicrobial resistance, and genetic diversity analysis of non-typhoidal Salmonella (NTS) in South Africa from 1959 to 2023, specifically from animals and animal products. A few comments: Materials and Methods While the total number of NTS isolates (1,028) is mentioned in the abstract, this detail is missing from the Materials and Methods section. It would be beneficial for the authors to specify how many isolates were obtained from animals, the environment, and food products, respectively. Additionally, it is unclear if there are differences in the types of Salmonella serovars detected across these sources. Including this information in a table would greatly enhance clarity and provide readers with a more comprehensive understanding of the study's findings. Although the association among antibiotic resistance, antibiotic resistance genes, and the sample source was mentioned. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Oluwafolayemi Doyeni Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Matle, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 31 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Mabel Kamweli Aworh, DVM, MPH, PhD. FCVSN Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: In addition to addressing the reviewers' comments, kindly fix the following issues: 1. Please ignore reviewer 2's comment to change "virulence" to "virulent" and also in line 494 "virulence genes" to "virulent genes." 2. The pages of the revised manuscript should be numbered. 3. Kindly reduce the introduction section significantly to a maximum of two pages. 4. Summarize the text in lines 371-427 with appropriate tables. If this has been done already, kindly delete the text to avoid redundancy, as this manuscript is way too long. The information in lines 429-460 has been represented in figure 2'. Please reduce the text to a few sentences highlighting key results to avoid duplication of information already captured and redundancy. 5. Summarize the text in lines 521-553 with a table and reduce the text significantly, highlighting only important results in a few sentences. 6. Please reduce the discussion section significantly to a maximum of 3 pages discussing only major study results. Move the limitations to the last paragraph of the discussion section. Please delete the subheading "Study limitations". [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: While the authors have addressed all the comments, I believe that they should still add information in the text and in table 2 on source attribution. Rather than say that Salmonella was isolated from meat, they should specify the type of meat (i.e. chicken, pork beef etc) as this has implications for disease control. If these data were not captured they should address this in the text and the limitations. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Your efforts on this manuscript are acknowledged and commended. I’ll start by agreeing with Reviewer#1 that this manuscript could have been more compact and easier to follow without losing relevant details if you had used tables and graphs instead of lengthy prose. What is the rationale behind the years you chose to review, especially 1959? I expected to read that in your methodology but may have missed it. Line 41 - 87% of the virulent (not virulence) genes screened … Line 43 -... resistance, driven by misuse (of what), … Lines 43 to 44 -... could alter serotype dynamics (remove the comma) and change (not changing) disease epidemiology. Line 54 -... cause cross-infection between animals and humans [3]. (end your sentence here and begin another) 99% of human serotypes belong to … Line 73 -... along with at least (why “at least”) amoxicillin clavulanic acid ... Line 77 - … towards fluoroquinolones (remove the comma) and third-generation cephalosporins. Line 97 -... operational in SA (write in full at first mention with the abbreviation in parentheses) … Line 103 - delete “virology” as it is already included in “microbiology”. Line 113 - “… in the 1930s from …” not from the 1930’s. Line 494 - “virulent genes” not “virulence genes” I read your response to Reviewer#1. My topmost recommendation is that you should take their advice to improve the quality of your work. Think of presenting this on a global platform. How will you make a great impression on your audience without losing their attention? Thank you! ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Oluwafolayemi Doyeni ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Matle, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Mabel Kamweli Aworh, DVM, MPH, PhD. FCVSN Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: In addition to addressing the reviewers' comments, please move the limitations to the last paragraph of the Discussion and remove the subtitle "Study Limitations." [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: I have one small comment - DALRRD is now Department of Agriculture. While I accept the work was probably done before the name change, I think it is worthwhile mentioning this under the financial support, for readers who are unaware of this. The manuscript need not go out to review again but this small addition can be made to the editor's satisfaction. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Oluwafolayemi Doyeni ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org |
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Monitoring, surveillance, antimicrobial resistance and genetic diversity analysis of non-typhoidal Salmonella in South Africa from 1959-2023 from animal and animal products. PONE-D-24-42273R3 Dear Dr. Matle, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mabel Kamweli Aworh, DVM, MPH, PhD. FCVSN Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: I have no further comments or suggestions. The authors have met all the reviewers' recommendations. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Oluwafolayemi Doyeni ********** |
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