Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 28, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-10513Intensive vital signs monitoring reduces 30-day mortality among stroke patients: A cohort study from TanzaniaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tumaini, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Title: Ok Abstract: OK, provided the concerns in the methodology section below are addressed and reflected in the abstract in the corrected version Introduction: OK Methodology: Ethics: OK Study design: A randomized clinical trial would have been a better study design in this case. In fact, according to the descriptions given by the authors of the randomization and allocation of various study arms, it seems that a trial has indeed been conducted. Why the authors are calling it a cohort study is still unclear. The authors need to justify why this is a cohort study, and if that is the case, then why a randomized trial was not conducted. Study population: ok Sample size: please elaborate how the sample size was calculated and what formula was used. It seems the formula used is also that of an RCT Data collection: At what point were patients captured? Were they captured in the emergency department upon admission? were they captured once admitted in the ward? for those in the intervention arm, how soon after being captured did the intensive monitoring start? Was there a difference in care whether a patient who was allocated intensive vs conventional arm eg admission in ICU for any of the groups? is there any justification for excluding other vital paramters from the monitoring eg GCS, NIHSS. Were assessors trained in the assessment of these vital signs? Outcome assessment: Ok Statistical analysis: was the chi squared test used in the analysis? Results: Sociodempgraphic and clinical characteristics: Baseline sociodemographic and clinical characteristics were NOT comparable between the two groups for cigarette smoking, DM status. any explanation for this? It is also interesting to note that ALL patients in this study were CKD patients. This deserves a special mention and explanation vital signs at 72 hrs: the observable statistical difference in diastolic BP between the 2 groups may reflect a mere numeric relationship. clinically a diastolic blood pressure of 88mmHg and 90mmHg may have not have a significant biological affect on the outcomes. So it may be statistically significant but with no practical clinical implications. Stroke severity at 72 hrs; Ok Outcomes at 14 days: ok 30 day mortality : ok Discussion: quite brief. conclusion: ok Recommendations: OK referenecs: Ok the figshare link provided at the end of the manuscript that contains all the raw data is not accessible. Generally an important topic but important methodological concerns need to be addressed Reviewer #2: This is a very well written and compelling study that supports the establishment of stroke units with advanced monitoring capabilities in resource-limited settings. Abstract: - In the background, there are a lot of parenthesis which is distracting to the reader. Consider removing the parentheses with outcomes as you can list them below in the methods. - No need to say 306 patients twice, put in results only. - In the results you mention diastolic blood pressure variability at 72 hours as a main finding but above say you are reporting on outcomes at 30 days. Also, you go beyond simply listing the result and interpret it when you say “underscoring its role in clinical stabilization”; consider removing the interpretation and putting this in the Conclusion instead. - First sentence of the Conclusion restates the results almost verbatim. - Excellent final sentence that makes a compelling argument and summarizes the study findings. Introduction: - This is extremely well written, concise, and beautifully organized. Well done! Just a few comments to improve it: - One addition that could be helpful to this section would be listing the vital signs you are referring to. Is it heart rate, blood pressure, oxygen saturation? More? - Lines 66-68 are basically restating what is above and I don’t think they are needed at all. The introduction ended beautifully at line 65 on the previous page. If you really wanted a final sentence remove the repeated info and leave only “…Hospital. The results of this study will contribute evidence-based recommendations for optimizing stroke care in LMICs.” Methods: - Was ethical approval obtained from NIMR, the National IRB of Tanzania, in addition to the Research and Publication Committee of Muhimbili? I believe studies in Tanzania need NIMR approval, too. - Were the abnormal vitals reported to clinicians in real time? (line 77-78) Consider adding this detail. - Lines 84-85. You do not need to re-state that studies indicated improved stroke outcomes as you already built the case well in the Introduction. Please remove. - Line 85. Do not say “we wanted to evaluate” but rather say “we evaluated” as it is more direct, crisp writing. - Line 91-92. Perhaps define stroke mimics and also reliable informant when describing exclusion criteria. - In Sample Size, why was 35% relative reduction chosen? - For the randomization section, why was it opened by the participant? In order to take the vital signs, I’m assuming a healthcare provider had to know if they were randomized to one group vs the other so they could take the vital signs on time, so how was it blinded? - Line 161. How was follow-up performed? By calling participants or home visits or clinic follow-up visits? Results: - Overall excellent job summarizing the pertinent findings from the tables. - Vitals signs at 72 hours by monitoring strategy – Was the intensive monitoring group just sicker, and that is why they had increased mortality? This should be discussed in Limitations or Discussion. - There are so many tables and figures. Consider removing Table 5 that talks about outcomes at 14 days, or including it as a supplemental table, since there was nothing significant anyway. The more important results are the 30 day outcomes tables. - Another way to cut down on the number of tables would be to combine tables 6 and 7 into an outcomes table to include both disability and mortality. Discussion: - I haven’t seen title headings for sections of this Discussion before, and don’t really like them. I’ll leave it up to the editor to decide if they will allow the authors to do this or not, but would advise against it. - Lines 271-272. I think the interpretation here as the vital signs monitoring reduced diastolic blood pressure is incorrect. The monitoring didn’t reduce the blood pressure, but rather it just was that patients that had more intensive monitoring had lower BP. Please reword this inaccurate sentence. This is also where you can discuss if perhaps the intensive monitoring group were just sicker since they had lower diastolic BP. Also consider adding this to the Limitations. - The whole vital signs monitoring paragraph needs to be re-thought as per above. - The discussion of functional disability at 72 hours is good, but it doesn’t seem to be highlighted in the Intro/outcomes as a main outcome. Perhaps add it above. Also, consider discussing functional disability at 30 days. - In the Conclusion paragraph, consider a sentence like that in the abstract that calls for the establishment of stroke units – this was very strong. Reviewer #3: This study examines the impact of intensive blood pressure (BP) monitoring in LMICs, particularly in settings with limited stroke care resources and without access to a dedicated stroke unit. There are few clarifications and comments are needed: 1. Please consider performing an adjusted analysis to account for potential confounding factors that could influence the main outcome—30-day mortality. This will help determine whether other variables may have affected the results. 2. It would be helpful to present the trend of BP readings over the 72-hour monitoring period (e.g., every 6 or 12 hours). Reporting this can provide insight into BP variability between groups, which is known to be an important factor in stroke complications. 3. If any abnormal BP readings or clinical issues were detected during the monitoring period, please clarify how they were managed. How many patients in each group experienced these issues, and what treatments, if any, were given? what cut-off point value of BP set to start treatment (if needed) 4. Kindly clarify whether BP readings were taken every 6 hours for the full 72 hours or until the patient was discharged, whichever came first. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the methods section: The reason why this is a cohort study has been justified to the reviewer in the reviewer comments section, and I am happy with that justification. This justification does not need to appear on the methods section of the paper (line 93 to 97 can be removed). All other comments have been reasonably answered. congratulations to the team. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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