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They have provided detailed feedback and raised several important points that we believe, if addressed, will significantly enhance the quality and clarity of your manuscript. The reviewers’ comments are included below for your consideration. We encourage you to submit a thoroughly revised version of your manuscript that fully addresses the reviewers' concerns. Please ensure that your resubmission is received within the timeframe indicated. We appreciate your contribution to the field and look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Best regards, Dr. Donovan McGrowder [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: I Don't Know Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: It is an interesting article about the Disparities in chronic kidney disease burden estimates. I recommend below changes - - correct definition of ckd - page 14- UACR is NOT always high in CKD and could be normal too - Explain the rationale and importance ( for non nephrologist) behind age quartile egfr for 40 years old, 40-65 and > 65 . Reviewer #2: This article aims to show the discrepancies in estimating renal function using different types of equations, and demographic details like sex, age and race. This is an important article as policy making is often based on epidemiological studies. The methodology is complex as it looks at data over a 20 year period from different databases. It is unclear to me what actual numbers of data were extracted and what numbers were excluded due to insufficient data. Perhaps this can be clarified so that the statistics can be easier to understand. Overall, it is an important study that shows that epidemiological data must be critically analyzed before accepting the results as 'hard truths' Reviewer #3: Ma Y et al described disparity of estimation on CKD by different source, definition and equation. They used data of GBD study 2021 and NHANES from 1999 to 2018 to analyze the prevalence of CKD in USA adults. They used formula of CKD-EPI 2009, CKD-EPI 2021 and EKFCRF. They calculated estimated annual percentage change of prevalence of CKD. They found difference across databases and estimating equations. These results are interesting but the following points are needed to be addressed. 1. In Table 2, the authors show the annual averages of the CKD prevalence. They should show the data in each year, as shown in Fig. 1. 2. In Table 3, the prevalence of CKD was dramatically decreased to 5.71 to 7.60% in fixed threshold (Definition of CKD <60 mL/min/1.73m2). As mentioned in Results section, the prevalence of CKD reduced by 50% compared with fixed threshold. In Table 2, however, the prevalence of CKD 2017-2018 was 14.1% to 15.6%. I do not understand this description. 3. The similar inconsistency was observed in the prevalence of CKD of NHANES 2017-2018 defined by age-adapted thresholds between Table 2 and Table 3. 4. Excellent performance of EKFC equation in US cohorts was extensively demonstrated by Delanaye P et al in Kidney International 2024 ( Ref 15). The authors could show the prevalence of CKD by EKFCPS. Q value was provide by NHANES, (Black men and women were 1.03 and 0.72mg/dl, respectively. The non-Black men and women were 0.99 and 0.71mg/dL, respectively). Reviewer #4: The authors compared the epidemiological descriptions of CKD between different database, CKD definitions and eGFR equations. Although the findings were meaningful, there are several comments. I completely agree with the idea that accurate estimates of the spatiotemporal patterns and trends in CKD prevalence are crucial for understanding the disease burden and improving CKD prevention and management. Additionally, they concluded that they emphasize the importance of appropriate use and respect for local data rather than defaulting to GBD estimates without consideration. Please propose an optimal method for accurately assessing the CKD burden. Since there are huge results in the present study, I recommend showing the summary of results in the Discussion. Especially, please present briefly the findings that support the disparities of long-term trends between different databases in the Discussion. Please explain database structure of GBD study including extracting methods of clinical data, management institution or type of participants. Do all participants in the GBD study have data on urine albumin, because CKD was defined as lower eGFR or higher ACR? The terms "end-stage renal disease" and "end-stage kidney disease" are used inconsistently. Reviewer #5: This manuscript presents a comprehensive analysis of the disparities in chronic kidney disease (CKD) prevalence estimates derived from different data sources (GBD vs. NHANES), GFR estimating equations (CKD-EPI 2009, CKD-EPI 2021, EKFC), and definitional thresholds (fixed vs. age-adapted). The topic is highly relevant in the context of increasing global reliance on epidemiological models for disease burden assessment. The manuscript is well-structured and methodologically sound. It highlights important implications for both public health surveillance and clinical nephrology, particularly regarding the potential for over- or underestimation of CKD prevalence depending on the choice of equation and threshold. I recommend minor revision prior to acceptance. The authors are encouraged to strengthen the discussion of (1) clinical implications of reclassification, (2) relevance for aging East Asian populations, and (3) the need for stage-specific burden assessment in future work. This is a timely and valuable contribution to global nephrology and public health research. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Disparities in chronic kidney disease burden estimates: from different sources, definitions, and equations PONE-D-25-24676R1 Dear Dr. Zhao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Donovan Anthony McGrowder, PhD., MA., MSc Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Dr. Zhao, The manuscript entitled “Disparities in chronic kidney disease burden estimates: from different sources, definitions, and equations” was revised in accordance with the reviewers’ comments and is provisionally accepted pending final checks for formatting and technical requirements. Regards, Prof. Donovan McGrowder (Academic Editor) |
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