Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 4, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Manuscript Number PONE-D-25-05613 Thank you for your submission. After reviewing the comments from the reviewers, we require a major revision. Please address the reviewers' concerns and include a detailed response with your revised manuscript. We look forward to your revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Minh Le Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: What were the other covariates considered for full adjustment outside those listed in the results? Was the nullification of the effect of HBVAb more pronounced with certain "other" covariates, if so which ones and to what extent? Was the effect due to a full combination of all covariates or just a combination of some and if so what combination(s)? What is the unit of time measurement on the x-axes of the graphs? months, years, age? The conclusion is misleading, should state that the correlation of HBVAb with mortality was not apparent when fully adjusted for by other factors. Reviewer #2: 1. Page 11: I suggest a minor edit on the statement of years (2010 years to 2020 years) 2. Page 11: BMI should be written in full. 3. Page 11: Why was data on alcohol intake omitted? 4. Statistical analysis: Was a bivariate analysis done? If yes, please include the results. The dietary factors and health behaviors assessed should be clearly stated. 5. Page 12: The respective proportions of the four groups of patients should be included. 6. Page 12: The spelling of "included" should be corrected 7. No table was sighted. Could you kindly make available all the tables listed in the body of the manuscript so that the review process can be completed. 8. Also make available the standard deviation value for age and BMI Reviewer #3: 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Partly. The manuscript utilizes a reliable NHANES dataset, the Cox regression is appropriate and adequately adjusts for confounders. However, the author should pay attention to this to make the manuscript more complete: Some conclusions weaken after adjustment and the manuscript does not provide sufficient explanation for the biological mechanisms underlying these changes. The author should clarify the reproducibility of the study and consider providing additional explanations or sensitivity analysis to strengthen the interpretation of results. 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Yes The statistical analysis uses appropriate methods (Cox proportional hazards model and the adjustments for confounding factors are reasonable). The use of NHANES datasets is highly reliable, ensuring objectivity. Besides, the adjustment variables are reasonable including age, sex, BMI and comorbidities. To further improve the manuscript, I suggest the following points: - Need to explain more clearly the criteria for classifying high/low SII, and how to stratify based on clinical risk groups. - Need to include a sensitivity analysis by changing the criteria for classifying SII or excluding specific disease groups to assess the robustness of the findings. 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? Yes. The authors have provided the data fully requested from PLOS ONE. However, the authors may consider providing more details about the specific NHANES datasets and variables used to enhance the reproducibility of the study. 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? Yes Basically, the language in the manuscript is presented clearly, easy to understand, and free of serious errors. I suggest editing the Discussion section as follows: - Write concisely, avoid redundancy. Some sentences are lengthy and repeat ideas from the Results section. The author should focus on the key findings of the research instead of explaining each numerical detail. - Clearly state the biological mechanisms and clinical significance behind the observed reduction in the protective effect of HbsAb after adjusting for confounders. - Compare findings with previous studies to clarify how the results on SII and HbsAb in this manuscript complement or differ from existing literature? Additionally, the authors may consider collaborating with a biomedical editor to further refine the language and enhance clarity. Reviewer #4: This is an intriguing and essential topic that provides new insights into the role of the Systemic Immune-Inflammation Index (SII) and hepatitis B antibody status in predicting outcomes. However, I have a few comments: 1/ I suggest that the authors review the existing literature on the SII in hepatitis B-related outcomes. Several published papers have assessed the prediction of SII in patients with hepatitis B (e.g., DOI: 10.1007/s12094-024-03596-0, DOI: 10.1097/MEG.0000000000002737, DOI: https://doi.org/10.3855/jidc.19636), and emphasizing the novel contributions of your study. 2/ To better align with the authors' statement, I suggest replacing reference number 8 with another source, such as this one (DOI: 10.4103/tjem.tjem_198_23). 3/ I suggest that the authors clarify how they categorized the SII quartile from Q1 to Q4 in the method section to improve readers' comprehension. 4/ I think it would be more comprehensive to provide proposed explanations based on existing literature or the authors' insights into why the protective effect of HBV surface antibody positivity decreased after adjusting for other factors in their study. 5/ References numbered 18, 23, and 24 are not relevant to the authors' discussion in the text. The authors should review these references to ensure they are cited appropriately in relation to their discussion. 6/ I do not see any result tables (Table 1 to Table 4) in the submitted manuscript; therefore, I could not review and comment thoroughly on these results. Reviewer #5: The authors explored the combined impact of Hepatitis B antibody status and Systemic Immune-Inflammation Index on Mortality Risk. The author categorised the participants into groups based on the presence or absence of HBs antibodies and analysed the resulting data. As the author states, the HBs antibody-positive group includes both those who have previously been infected with hepatitis B and those who have received vaccination. The inability to distinguish between these two groups is a limitation of the study. This is a limitation that should be stated explicitly. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Trang Diep Thanh Le Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes: Yutaro Akiyama ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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Dear Dr. Lu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for addressing most of the comments in this revision. I have read your manuscript and found that it has improved significantly. However, there are still some minor comments from Reviewer #2 that need to be addressed. Could you please revise the manuscript to address these remaining comments and submit the revision? Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Minh Le Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Kindly refer to Table 1, the first variable "Age". The mean age for the four groups are presented. The proportion of participants in each of the 4 groups is also presented. The proportions add up to 1.11 which translates to 111%. Kindly cross-check the proportion and effect correction. The proportions should add up to 1. Reviewer #3: Thank you for your submission. This is a well-designed and meaningful study that investigates the combined impact of hepatitis B surface antibody (HBsAb) status and the systemic immune-inflammation index (SII) on mortality. The use of NHANES data is appropriate and the statistical analysis is robust. The topic is timely and adds valuable insight into public health risk stratification. However, several minor revisions are recommended to improve the clarity and completeness of the manuscript: (1) Please clarify that the proposed mechanisms linking elevated SII and the attenuation of HBsAb's protective effect are speculative, and clearly state the need for future mechanistic studies. (2) Discuss more thoroughly how the inability to distinguish vaccine-induced from infection-induced HBsAb may influence the interpretation of findings. (3) Provide more detail on how missing data were handled or discuss whether sensitivity analyses were considered. (4) Minor grammatical and stylistic revisions are advised to improve the overall clarity and flow of the manuscript. With these minor improvements, the manuscript will be strengthened and ready for publication. Reviewer #4: The authors' revisions and responses adequately address my comments. The manuscript is now suitable for publication. Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes: Yurao Akiyama ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Exploring the Combined Impact of Hepatitis B Antibody Status and Systemic Immune-Inflammation Index on Mortality Risk: A Population-Based Study PONE-D-25-05613R2 Dear Dr. Lu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Minh Huu Nhat Le Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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