Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 7, 2022 |
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When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This paper examines the association between COVID-19 stimulus checks and family health status. The authors collected approximately 500 data points and studies whether receiving full three stimulus checks is linked with better family health status and the heterogeneous effect across income groups. Major revision: (a) The authors described the sample collected through MTurk. It would help the readers to understand the MTurk sample by adding comparison with the representative census sample. (b) The survey asked about the stimulus check spendings. However, participants may not have a clear mental accounting of daily spending between the stimulus checks and their regular income. Thus adding a total spending question as an extra control will improve the result interpretation. (c) The authors did not clearly explain the exploratory factor analysis process. The methods were not clearly specified. And there lacks robustness check on how the variables changes with different selection rules or pre-specified number of variables. Additionally, the authors did not show the correlation across selected variables, thus hard to judge if the models would suffer from multicollinearity problem. (d) The authors fail to provide informative summary statistics. The paper aims to understand the difference between participants that receive three stimulus checks and those who did not receive all three. But the authors did not provide the difference of these two groups in the descriptive statistics section. (e) The main models in the paper use whether three checks received as the key varibles. It is worthy to discretize the key variable of interest into groups that receive one/two/three checks. Minor revision: (a) The paper did literature review in the introduction section. However, the authors did not fully specify how the paper relates to the existing literature until the final discussion. It would be helpful to make it clear in the introduction part. (b) Tables lack enough explanations. The authors should add more table notes. Reviewer #2: The authors aimed to determine the impact of U.S. government stimulus payments on family health during the COVID-19 the pandemic. This study can help to understand the impact of government assistance on overall family health. Considering the limitations mentioned by the authors, the study is well designed and the manuscript is by and large well developed. Here are just a few structural flaws, which are as follows: 1- It is suggested that in the background part of the Abstract, the objectives of the study should be expressed in the form of a brief statement rather than in the form of numbered hypotheses. 2- The introduction section is very long. Most of the content provided is related to the discussion section. It is necessary to review and summarize this part. 3- According to the guidelines of the journal, it is suggested that the objectives of the study should be expressed in a brief statement at the end of the Introduction section. 4- The final conclusion of the study should only be developed based on the main results of the study and content from other studies should not be presented and cited. Therefore, this section should be revised based on the results of the study and their implications. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Considering the changes made in the text based on the comments of the first round of review, it seems that the authors have put enough effort to improve the the manuscript. Therefore, there is no more comment. Reviewer #3: 1. Perhaps I did not see, or my ignorance, but mTurk is unfamiliar to me ...if possible pls. add something from "Amazon Mechanical Turk (MTurk) is a crowdsourcing marketplace that makes it easier for individuals and businesses to outsource their processes and jobs to a distributed workforce who can perform these tasks virtually. This could include anything from conducting simple data validation and research to more subjective tasks like survey participation, content moderation, and more. MTurk enables companies to harness the collective intelligence, skills, and insights from a global workforce to streamline business processes, augment data collection and analysis, and accelerate machine learning development." 2."147 known as active response rate [2432]. The 500-participant sample size would allow sufficient 1" I see 456=n, please fix this minor item. 3. The paper defines income categories differently in various sections. For example, it mentions "<$25,000" as low income in one part, but later uses "<$40,000" as the low-income threshold. or perhaps it is on the cut-off, if possible please make it clearer. 4. The explanation of factor analysis mentions six factors, but Eigenvalues only exceed 1.0 for five factors. The text acknowledges this discrepancy without resolving it, raising doubts about whether the six-factor solution is valid (lines 226-229). A non-zero vector v is an eigenvector of A if Av = λv for some number λ, called the corresponding eigenvalue. The eigenvector with the largest eigenvalue is the direction with most variability, this eigenvector is the first principle component. It may be possible there is some factor instability drift and heteroscedasticity (which is fine), "Agrrawal and Clark. "ETF Betas: A Study of their Estimation Sensitivity to Varying Time Intervals." ETFs and Indexing (2007)", attribute factor/coefficient instability to heterogenous variance discontinuities and note their impact on multiple orthogonal factors for an overall ranking scale. A similar effect could slightly be at play here. Additionally data driven methods to identify spatial patterns by optimizing euclidean distances is utilized in "Heumann et al. Data-Driven Algorithm to Redefine the US Rural Landscape: Affinity Propagation as a Mixed-Data/Mixed-Method Tool. Economic Development Quarterly (2022)." 5. "Figure 1 Legend" section, where the explanation appears without proper figure presentation/title (lines 308-317), an appendix perhaps? 6. [line 84-86] Most U.S. research points to economic and employment constraints [10-12-14], interruptions to family routines [135], reduced quality of life and family well-being [810, 146], psychological distress [810, 157-179]. A recent large scale study using 2 million non-natural deaths using CDC and NVDRS data establishes a lagged link between finance induced stress and subsequent period suicides. (Sandweiss et al. "Suicides as a response to adverse market sentiment. PLoS One, 2017." A very good and robustly researched paper, a few clarifications and edits would increase its clarity and visibility. Best. Reviewer #4: Your data sources are complex, it may be difficult for researcher students to provide such data. You can mention an early stage AI knowledge paper that shows that the utilization of automated web-harvesting algorithms can easily provide the researcher with zero-cost machine readable datasets for further analysis. Some ambiguity wrt your eigenvector decomposition < 1 seems to exist. PCA modeling could be tightened. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Yaser Sarikhani Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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