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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Firstly, I would like to express my gratitude for the opportunity to collaborate on a research project of significant importance and relevance, particularly in light of the challenges posed by traditional teaching methods in the face of a technological surge that has the potential to distract many children and adolescents. The study emphasises that physical activity and more active learning methods are not yet accorded sufficient priority by many schools, with the focus remaining on curricular performance. It is not that the importance of curricular performance is diminished, but rather that a more active teaching method can contribute to the integral development of the individual. Consequently, I would like to offer some observations on subjects that could benefit from further elaboration. On line 153, page 7, the following assertion is made: As this exploratory study sought to establish a foundation for future research, the recruitment target was set at 75-150 survey respondents, with a subsample of 7-10 interviewees, based on the findings of previous similar studies [38, 50, 51, 52, 53, 54]. However, the text does not specify the number of participating schools or if a minimum number of schools was required for recruitment. It is to be posited herewith that, in the event of 25 teachers from each school participating, a total of 75 individuals would be required. Conversely, should only 8 teachers from 10 schools participate, the resultant sample would already comprise 80 individuals. The issue under discussion is that of the representativeness of the schools. It is posited that the inclusion of a greater number of teachers from a given unit could give rise to problems. It is acknowledged that further information can be found in other sources. The integration of a sentence could facilitate comprehension. Despite the implementation of a multifaceted sampling strategy, encompassing purposive, convenience, and snowball sampling techniques, this approach may potentially compromise the representativeness of the participant cohort. This particular recruitment strategy tends to appeal to teachers who have already demonstrated a high level of engagement or interest in the domain of PAL (Physical Activity in Learning), thereby introducing a form of self-selection bias. This may compromise the generalisability of the findings. Despite the recognition of such limitations in previous literature, it is imperative to articulate the notion of self-selection bias. Finally, it is imperative to emphasise the absence of validation for the employed measures, a subject that demands further attention. It is important to note that some of the questions in the questionnaire were created by the researcher himself. These were based on previous literature, but without undergoing a formal psychometric validation process. Moreover, the preliminary study was confined to a sample size of four participants, comprising one teacher and three peers. While this approach offers face validity, there is no guarantee that the items accurately capture the proposed constructs, such as acceptance, motivation, or perception of PAL. The adaptation of existing scales (for example, the Work Tasks Motivation Scale) involves changes in structure and items without revalidation, which may affect reliability and construct validity. Reviewer #2: Summary Thank you for the opportunity to review this work. The study investigates teachers’ perspectives regarding the acceptability and feasibility of implementing Physically Active Learning (PAL) in UK secondary schools. A mixed methods design was employed, with quantitative survey data (N=75), qualitative survey data (N=63) and semi-structured interviews (N=7). The authors conclude that teachers were generally positive about the idea of introducing PAL into their teaching practice, although viewpoints differed across subject areas and between males and females. Potential implementation challenges are discussed. This paper is an interesting read and has a lot of potential to contribute to the nascent body of research on this topic. I particularly commend the authors on their efforts to include a broad cross-section of teachers, representing different subject areas, school types and rural and urban settings, which enabled them to capture a wide range of viewpoints. My main points for consideration relate to aspects of the methods description, data presentation and clarity of the writing in some sections. With respect to the journal policies, I note that there are restrictions on public data availability due to consent issues, although data may be made available on request. Specific points to consider are provided below: Methods 1. As highlighted in the COREQ checklist, the authors have not included researcher credentials, experience/training or key characteristics (COREQ items (2, 5 & 8). It seems that these points would be simple to rectify, and showing how these issues were considered and/or mitigated would add rigour to the study. 2. Lines 133-140 (study design): The purpose of utilizing a mixed methods design is well described. For even greater clarity, it may be helpful to explicitly state whether the intention was to give greater weight to qual data (which seems to be implied) or equal weight to both quan & qual data. 3. Line 144 (study design): “… combined at the final stage” - Please provide more detail on the integration. How were quan and qual data combined and what is meant by the “final stage”? 4. Lines 184-244 (survey): Consider whether this whole section could be restructured or more concisely summarised for greater clarity. E.g. line 195 mentions “Two measures adapted from previous studies …” but these measures are not named or referenced until subsequent paragraphs. 5. Lines 286-316 (qualitative analysis): This section could benefit from a clearer overall structure and more detail in some areas. Consider utilising the 7 step process (lines 305-313) to describe was done at each stage. The transcription process described in an earlier section (lines 271-273) may be more appropriate here under step 1. 6. Line 297: Here the socio-ecological model is mentioned. However, it is not apparent how (or if) the final themes were mapped onto this model. Some clarification is needed. Describing what was done at each of the seven stages may help to resolve this. Results 7. Ensure numbers are consistently formatted. E.g. percentages are reported with a mix of 0 or 1 d.p. in Table 1 and in-text reporting. Similarly for p-values. 8. Figures 2, 3 and 6 are somewhat difficult to digest due to the number of colours/groups, questions, and pairwise comparisons. Consider whether this data could be presented more clearly in a table, which could allow for complete reporting of precise p-values for pairwise comparisons, both significant and non-significant. 9. Figure 5 is a little unclear as it uses tonally similar colours (blue and green). Consider using graded shades from dark to light to improve readability (considering that the article may sometimes be printed in black and white) or perhaps include this information concisely in the text without a figure. Discussion 10. lines 604-607: The argument is a little unclear regarding a whole-school approach vs. targeted to subject areas. Could these two approaches fit together or are they competing ideas? 11. lines 677-682 (limitations): could be expressed more clearly. It seems two separate limitations are highlighted here – i) use of a pro-PAL TEDx talk – which may have introduced bias, and ii) lack of adherence to the protocol - almost half did not watch the video, which may have limited their understanding of the topic (as mentioned earlier in the article). It would be helpful to separate these two points. The suggestion that lack of adherence to watching the video was a bonus as it reduced bias would seem to undermine the protocol. Instead, it may be better to simply state its limitations. 12. lines 684-697 (limitations): similar to the above point, the limitations mentioned in this paragraph could also be more clearly delineated. Perhaps consider whether it could help to use a transition chain such as first, second, … to distinguish the points being addressed throughout the limitations section. Supplementary materials 13. Ensure tables in supplementary materials have a header and any footnotes required to aid interpretation. 14. Ensure supplementary materials are referenced at relevant points throughout the text. 15. Line 418: (examples of quotes) references S1 file but seems to be referring to data in S3. General points 16. A final grammar check should pick up any minor grammatical errors – e.g. take care with use of “however”, which should not be used to join two sentences (l 604 and elsewhere). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Magno Conceição Garcia Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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