Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 29, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-35231Enhanced machine learning and hybrid ensemble approaches for coronary heart disease predictionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wanyonyi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The author used an enhanced machine learning and hybrid ensemble approaches for coronary heart disease prediction. This is a very clear, easy to read and understand work. However, my comments are as fellows. 1. The Abstract was apt and improvement made from this work is empirical obvious. 2. The introduction and related work need to be made more robust because there are very good literatures that this papers did not capture. This studies will make this paper capture wider audience for instance the author shold look at these article for instance. a) Obaido G, Ogbuokiri B, Swart TG, Ayawei N, Kasongo SM, Aruleba K, Mienye ID, Aruleba I, Chukwu W, Osaye F, Egbelowo O. F, Simphiwe S, E. Esenogho. “An Interpretable Machine Learning Approach for Hepatitis B Diagnosis” Applied Sciences. 2022; 12(21):11127. https://doi.org/10.3390/app122111127. b) Sarah Alexandria Nabofa-Ebiaredoh, E. Esenogho, Theo G. Swart, et al “A Machine Learning Method with Filter-Based Feature Selection for Improved Detection of Chronic Kidney Disease” Bioengineering 2022, vol. 9, no. 8, 350; https://doi.org/10.3390/bioengineering9080350, Switzerland. c) Sarah Alexandria Nabofa-Ebiaredoh, E. Esenogho., Theo G. Swart “Improved machine learning methods for classification of imbalanced data” https://hdl.handle.net/10210/481973 d) Sarah Alexandria Nabofa-Ebiaredoh, E. Esenogho, T. G. Swart “Integrating Enhanced Sparse Autoencoder Based Artificial Neural Network Technique and SoftMax Regression for Medical Diagnosis Published MDPI Electronics Journal, 2020, 9(11), 1963; https://doi.org/10.3390/electronics9111963. e) Sarah Alexandria Nabofa-Ebiaredoh, E. Esenogho., Theo G. Swart “Artificial Neural Network Technique for Improving Prediction of Credit Card Default: A Stacked Sparse Autoencoder Approach” International Journal of Electrical and Computer Engineering, Vol. 11, No. 5, October 2021, pp. 4392~4402, v11i5.pp4392-4402. and many more Good work great well done Reviewer #2: 1-The dataset was sourced from a U.S.-based survey (BRFSS) and may not have fully captured region-specific risk factors, genetic predispositions, or healthcare access patterns prevalent in LMICs like Kenya, potentially limiting the immediate generalizability of the models. 2-The reliance on self-reported data for CHD diagnosis and risk factors introduced the potential for recall bias and misclassification, as clinical verification was not available. 3-The computational complexity of some advanced ensemble techniques, such as stacking and Bayesian Model Averaging, was high, which could pose implementation challenges in real-world, resource-constrained healthcare environments with limited computing infrastructure. 4-Despite the incorporation of explainability techniques like SHAP, certain elements of the ensemble models remained inherently complex ("black-box"), which could potentially limit clinician trust and adoption without further integration of explainable AI (XAI) frameworks. 5-The study did not formally evaluate scalability metrics such as training time, inference latency, memory usage, or model size, which are critical for assessing deployment feasibility in low-resource settings. Reviewer #3: The paper presents a hybrid ensemble approach for the prediction of coronary heart disease (CHD) using models such as Adaptive Noise–Resistant Decision Trees (ANRDT), Hybrid Imbalanced Random Forest (HIRF), and Pruned Gradient Boosting Machines (PGBM). The authors use SMOTE to address class imbalance and evaluate model performance on several metrics, including AUC, accuracy, and sensitivity. The ensemble models consistently outperform baseline classifiers, and achieve strong generalizability and robust calibration, especially the stacking ensemble model. The use of SMOTE addresses the imbalance between the classes, but the paper does not assess whether the synthetic samples have realistic clinical relationships. The hybrid models, including ANRDT and HIRF, offer performance improvements, but ablation studies that isolate the contribution of each component to overall performance are lacking. While the evaluation focuses on accuracy, AUC, and sensitivity, additional metrics such as fairness or model calibration across demographic groups would provide more depth, especially for healthcare applications. The study compares ensemble methods, but more recent techniques such as AutoML or deep ensemble methods could be considered for further performance benchmarking. Although time complexity is discussed, there is no comparison with state-of-the-art scalable models or real-world applications in LMICs. Interpretability is limited to feature importance; using techniques such as SHAP for individual-level explanations would improve clinical applicability. Consider the following studies: https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-024-73570-x https://doi.org/10.3390/app13085188 https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-025-07350-6 ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Enhanced Machine Learning and Hybrid Ensemble Approaches for Coronary Heart Disease Prediction PONE-D-25-35231R1 Dear Dr. Wanyonyi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vijayalakshmi Kakulapati, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #1: The author has taken time to address all the comments I raised. as such I do not have any reservation against the work Reviewer #3: The authors have addressed all previous comments carefully, and the revised manuscript shows clear improvement in clarity, completeness, and technical soundness. The methodology is now better justified, the experimental discussion is more detailed, and the figures and tables have been improved for readability. The added explanations and updated related work strengthen the overall contribution. The revisions resolve the earlier concerns, and I did not find any remaining issues that would hinder publication. The paper now presents a coherent and well-supported study that fits the scope of the journal. I recommend acceptance, pending minor editorial adjustments for grammar and formatting. |
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