Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 29, 2024 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is an extremely important and highly relevant topic. As the authors have noted, the use of seclusion and restraints in psychiatric settings raises significant concerns regarding the protection of patient rights and the trauma experienced by patients and staff involved in these measures. The longitudinal data used in this analysis is excellent for examining these issues in forensic mental healthcare. I found the article engaging and believe it contributes valuable insights, and I would like to see it published. However, several major revisions are needed prior to publication. Broadly, these revisions include providing a more detailed background and discussion of the literature. This should include a deeper analysis of why policies have been unsuccessful in reducing restraints, and a clearer description of the Canadian forensic psychiatric system for readers unfamiliar with it. There are also significant concerns with the methodological approach, particularly the failure to account for clustering effects given the data's collection from multiple hospitals. Lastly, there are some grammatical and stylistic concerns that should be addressed. 1. Abstract and Introduction The authors clearly summarize the main research question, identifying factors related to seclusion and restraints in forensic mental health care settings. The authors cite relevant literature, particularly highlighting previous work on coercive measures in psychiatric settings and forensic hospitals. However, the paper would benefit from a deeper discussion. Please consider incorporating an overview of the Canadian forensic hospital system and how individuals enter into the healthcare system. Discuss the rationale for restraints and seclusion, and why policies and practices to reduce restraints have not been uniformly successful. Are these failures system-related issues, staffing problems, patient mix/presentation, environmental challenges, etc.? 2. Methods Selection of method: More information on hospital-related factors would provide important context. A major methodological concern is that the data was collected from 10 different forensic psychiatric hospitals in Ontario, yet the authors do not account for the potential clustering of patients within these hospitals. Hospital-related characteristics could significantly influence the use of seclusion and restraints. Did the authors consider alternative statistical methods to account for clustering (e.g., GEE)? These models would account for both patient-level and hospital-level characteristics. Missing data: The authors do not provide a rationale for why missingness was not considered a concern. This should be addressed. Psychiatric Diagnoses and Substance Abuse: Substance abuse often co-occurs with other psychiatric conditions and can exacerbate aggressive behaviours, potentially increasing the likelihood of seclusion or restraint. Could the authors discuss the rationale for using only a primary diagnosis and not accounting for dual diagnosis? There is also no discussion of whether patients are screened for substances at admission which could affect their behaviour. If this information was unavailable in the data, the authors should indicate this in the paper. 4. Results The figures and tables are generally clear and readable, though there are some discrepancies between the text and the tables, such as missing numbers and percentages in the text (n=%) or the layout was inconsistent. 5. Discussion and Conclusions The study would benefit from a more detailed discussion of hospital characteristics that could influence the use of coercive measures. Additional context is needed to fully understand the Canadian system, particularly regarding fitness-level factors and how these translate to the wider context. I would also appreciate more discussion in the implications section about how to integrate these findings into practice. For instance, pharmacological treatments are an option, as noted, but this is a population that may be reluctant to take medication. A deeper discussion into possible interventions and their challenges would be valuable. Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents the results of a study investigating retrospectively risk factors for seclusion and restraint in forensic settings. The authors analyzed retrospectively a large sample of forensic admissions and found specific risk factors for both seclusion and restraint, mostly confirming existing data in general psychiatric settings, with added forensic specificities such as legal admission status. General comment: The study addresses an interesting and understudied topic. Issue of coercion in psychiatric forensic institutions is rarely investigated. However, some methodological issues greatly impair the quality of this work. Introduction: The introduction is too long. The writing style is very repetitive and thus difficult to read. Even with this long text, the authors fail to point to the specificities of the forensic context compared to general psychiatric settings. The project’s aims, even if described, are not sufficiently justified. It is unclear why the authors chose this two-step analysis design. Methods: The definition of restraint as both mechanical and manual restraint is questionable, as both kinds of restraint generally have different durations and are experienced very differently by patients. The exact content of the RAI-MH remains very obscure throughout the Methods section. It seems to comprise among other instruments unstandardized scales used to assess clinical characteristics such as insight or compliance. There is no clear explanation as to the content of the RAI-MH or the evaluation process. All used scales must be clearly described with appropriate references, and their items listed. The authors do not explain why they chose to categorize almost all of the independent variables, such as age, which clearly impairs the quality of the analysis. The categorization of diagnoses, although following international classifications, mixes bipolar disorders and other mood disorders, knowing that maniac states clearly represent an important risk factor for coercive measures. As to the analysis, authors should again clearly state the hypotheses instead of using numbers. The description of the multivariate logistic regression is insufficient. Authors should justify their decision to use two separate models and clearly describe all variables used in the models and the used method to enter independent variables in the model. Results: The Results section is, as the introduction, too long and difficult to read. There are way too many duplicates between text and tables. The authors keep comparing results of the bivariate analysis and of the multivariate regression, whereas only the multivariate analysis should be extensively considered for discussion. There is no clear added value of using both regression models, as this renders the interpretation of results very confuse. Discussion: As in the Results section, the authors systematically compare bivariate and multivariate analysis, which does not add any substantial information for the understanding of the study results. They also fail to clearly provide thorough explanation of the observed risk factors, and to draw clinical consequences of the analysis. The specificities of the forensic setting could be more clearly describe. The different legal statuses for example are difficult to understand for the non-expert reader. The limitations are insufficiently described and should include some of the elements pointed above. The implications are too vague and should also include clear clinical or organizational recommendations. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. Hilton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, <o:p></o:p> Thank you for the opportunity to act as the handling editor for this interesting study.<o:p></o:p> I have one comment regarding the use of secondary data sources. Existing literature documents inconsistencies in the terminologies and conceptual boundaries used to define coercive or restrictive practices e.g., (https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S1359178924000168 ) and (file:///C:/Users/Zmul0002/Downloads/s00127-024-02739-6%20(4).pdf ). <o:p></o:p> These definitional inconsistencies may lead to measurement bias, as interpretations of what constitutes a coercive can vary based on clinicians’ subjective judgments (https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/jocn.17588 ). For example, Savage et al (https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/38205597/ ) noted that variation in the types and numbers of practices reported across studies can significantly impact the reported prevalence rates of coercive practices Such inconsistencies could further confound the measurement outcomes given that you have utilized secondary data sources.<o:p></o:p> I suggest that you address these issues in the discussion section, particularly under limitations, to acknowledge how definitional and reporting variability might affect the interpretation of your findings.<o:p></o:p> Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The authors have made substantial changes to the manuscript. The readability has been improved. The new methodological approach has also improved the quality of the analysis and the results. The introduction is way more informative than before, and the discussion now addresses most of the relevant findings. Minor revisions: - Could the authors give information about the number of incomplete datasets that were excluded from analysis? - The aspect of elopement behaviour could be discussed some more, as the findings might seem surprising from a general psychiatric point of view. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Factors associated with seclusion and restraint on admission to forensic psychiatric hospitals: A 10-year retrospective study PONE-D-24-34524R2 Dear Dr. N. Zoe Hilton, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Zelalem Belayneh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed. I find the manuscript suitable for publication. Congratulations to the authors. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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