Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 26, 2025 |
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Well prepared manuscript This is an understudied topic area and the reviewers provide helpful, relevant and new data which somewhat surprised this reviewer who had assumed that the use of CFTR modulator therapy would have some impact upon DIOS and perhaps constipation The topic area is difficult to study as DIOS increases with age, and therefore there is a possibility that some modest benefit is being derived but the findings are, in my view, an important addition to the literature and will be helpful in discussions with patients The authors acknowledge the most important limitation of the study; namely that ‘the subset of individuals referred to the CF-GI clinic represent a difficult-to-treat population with more severe disease’ In the abstract the provision of nonsignificant p values greater than 0.05 is not required or, in the opinion of this reviewer helpful: they are simply nonsignificant. It would be more helpful to see the number of episodes reported (median). Whilst they conclude that referral to a CF-GI clinic does not result in better outcomes for patients there are two important considerations: 1. Would the natural history be worse for those never referred? i.e. is there an inexorable increase in gut symptoms that is slowed or halted with optimal treatment. 2. Does this simply confirm the results of the systematic reviews showing that no treatments that are currently available for use are effective. My biggest grumble about the proposed paper is that I find the presentation of the results very difficult to follow. Surely the number of ED visits for DIOS over 3 years before and 3 years after initiation of CFTR modulator therapy is a number, which could be summarized as a median and IQR. There are other concerns about the figures. For instance: what does ‘similar number’ mean. Does it mean ‘same number’? They are of low quality They have grammatical errors i.e. Number of admission for DIOS rather than Number of admissions for DIOS Some revision of these and careful thought about how to present the data is required. Minor typographical error on line 183 with no space between the words identified and 16 Minor typo line 203, of these t1`25 should be 125 (51.7%) Minor typo line 280: ‘aeruginosa’ needs to be in italics Minor typo line 282: no space between DIOS and (20) Reviewer #2: This retrospective study by Wongjarupong N, et al. looking at the impact of CF-GI clinics and HEMT on the incidence of DIOS and constipation in PwCF adds significant insight to our current understanding of this issue. This study raises further questions regarding proper identification of DIOS and constipation patients, long-term effects of HEMT on GI symptoms, proper treatment of constipation, and utility of specialized CF-GI clinics. These questions build a framework for future studies on the subject. Comments: 1. The aim stated in the introduction (characterizing DIOS/constipation burden, healthcare utilization) seems to vary from that which is described in the title and conclusion (impact of CF-GI clinics and HEMT on DIOS/constipation). 2. I think the 3-year timepoint before and after intervention is very reasonable, and should give enough time to see differences in the stated outcomes. 3. While prior lung transplant may be important for DIOS, particularly immediately post-transplant, there are no data in this study regarding timing of the prior transplant. It might be better to note how many of those patients had lung transplant within the 6-year timeframe of the study. 4. It sounds as if only patients who were referred to or seen by CF-GI were included in the study. Do you have data regarding incidence of DIOS before and after HEMT in patients who may not have been referred to GI? 5. Timing of initiation of HEMT and first visit to CF-GI could have confounded the results. It may be worth including data regarding initiation of HEMT in relation to CF-GI visit. With the current data, it is difficult to tease out the impact of HEMT vs. CF-GI on your reported outcomes. 6. Your study defined constipation based only on daily laxative use for > 3 years. The standard definition of constipation is typically symptom-based. Your stringent definition may not be the best to look at differences in constipation outcomes with your interventions. While constipation symptoms may have been significantly better with CF-GI intervention (i.e. being started on effective medications), the patient would be defined as still having constipation if they continued their constipation meds even though their symptoms could have resolved. 7. Do you have enough numbers of patients to break improvement with intervention down by type of HEMT? The more effective modulators may be more of less beneficial for GI symptoms. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Effect of Cystic Fibrosis Transmembrane Conductance Regulator Modulator and Dedicated Cystic Fibrosis Gastrointestinal Clinic Visits on the Incidence of Distal Intestinal Obstructive Syndrome in Persons with Cystic Fibrosis PONE-D-25-14674R1 Dear Dr. Wongjarupong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alyssa Kriegermeier Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for carefully addressing the comments. The paper addresses an important clinical issue and the results are somewhat surprising. They should act as a stimulus for other centres to carefully address whether CFTR modulators have an impact upon GI symptoms. And if so, to what extent. Reviewer #2: From my standpoint, all reviewer critiques have been adequately addressed. I am comfortable with this manuscript being accepted for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: W D CARROLL Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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