Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 16, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Pürzel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I am returning your manuscript with two reviews. The reviewers came to different conclusions about the paper, as you will see. After reading the reviews and looking at the manuscript, I concur with the suggestions made by reviewer #1 and the concerns of reviewer #2 regarding validation of the model in deep flexion. I am sorry I cannot be more positive at the moment. Note that it will have to go through a second round of review. Please especially note the following suggestions and give them due consideration. You must provide more details on the modifications made to the model to incorporate three degrees of freedom at the knee joint or provide a citation to an existing model if used, otherwise your paper cannot be accepted. Please discuss the limitations in validating your work using an older population of people of knee joint replacement subjects. You cited a study [ref 19], line 52, p. 3, that showed that in deep flexion the JCF values were overpredicted by up to 60% in deep flexion (flexion beyond 60 deg.). Please discuss the implications of that study for the high values found in your work on powerlifters. I find the wording in line 52 to be confusing since “lower” flexion angles can be interpreted differently depending on how flexion angle is reported. Ref [19] found an approximate linear dependence in predicted JCF error with flexion angle for squats done by subject with implants, reaching 60% error in deep flexion of around 80 deg. Given these limitations you should at minimum address these concerns in the Discussion and rephrase the conclusions to qualify your statements about finding high JCF values in terms of the increasing potential errors in deeper flexion. Please discuss other possible means of providing validation of the model in deeper flexion that could be undertaken in future studies. Please discuss the use of Static Optimization and its limitations and concerns regarding errors in computing the JCF. We encourage you to submit your revision within sixty days of the date of this decision. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match. When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors conducted an excellent study analyzing joint contact forces in the hip, knee, and ankle during squats performed by elite powerlifters at 70% to 90% of their 1-RM. Using 3D motion capture, force plates, musculoskeletal modeling, and MRI, they found that joint contact forces increased with intensity, peaking at over 20 times BW in some cases. These findings offer valuable insights into squat mechanics, performance optimization, and potential injury risks. The following suggestions may enhance the study and improve clarity for readers: 1. Strengthen the study implications: While the motivation, aim, methods, and results are clearly presented in the abstract, the implications section is brief and lacks impact. Including key points on training adaptations, injury risk, and rehabilitation would help engage readers. 2. Clarify model modification (Page 8, Line 150): The authors mention modifying the musculoskeletal model by incorporating three degrees of freedom at the knee joint. If the modifications were made by the authors, a detailed explanation is needed. Otherwise, a citation should be provided if an existing model was used. 3. Expand MRI volume calculation details: Additional details on the MRI procedure, along with images, would help readers replicate the study and validate the methodology. 4. Validation limitations: Joint contact forces and muscle forces cannot be directly validated, but the authors attempted to validate them using OrthoLoad data. However, OrthoLoad represents an older population with implanted knees, which may affect contact force estimates. An alternative validation method could involve comparing predicted muscle activations from OpenSim with measured EMG signals. Although EMG data was not collected in this study, discussing this limitation and future research directions in the discussion would be beneficial. 5. High joint contact forces and cartilage adaptation: The reported joint contact forces exceeding 20x BW are extreme and could increase cartilage damage risk. The study already discusses possible reasons, but it would be valuable to reference studies that support the idea of cartilage adaptation in powerlifters. Are there any findings suggesting that powerlifters develop stronger cartilage or that training modifications could help protect joint health? 6. Consider discussing the force-length-velocity relationship of muscles to explain why joint contact forces are higher in the concentric phase. This would provide a stronger biomechanical basis for the observed trends. 7. Expand on training implications: Consider elaborating on how these findings impact training optimization, injury prevention, and rehabilitation, especially regarding load management and long-term joint health. 8. Future research scope: Finite element analysis could be used to analyze tissue-level mechanical response, and EMG-informed neuromusculoskeletal modeling in OpenSim may improve force estimations. Discussing these as potential future directions would add value to the study. 9. Improve the conclusion: The conclusion lacks strong recommendations for powerlifters and does not fully address the practical implications of the findings. Consider adding: • Key findings summary (e.g., higher joint contact forces during the concentric phase). • Training recommendations (e.g., squat variations, eccentric loading benefits). • Injury risk considerations (e.g., potential cartilage damage, adaptation strategies). • Broader application (e.g., relevance to non-elite athletes or rehabilitation). Reviewer #2: General Comments: This study used musculoskeletal models to estimate joint contact forces (JCF) at the hip, tibiofemoral, patellofemoral, and ankle joints during squatting with sub-maximum weights in elite powerlifters. The authors found that model-estimated JCF increased with increasing weight for most (but not all) joints and JCF components. Adding weight increased JCF during most parts of the squat except the early-concentric “sticking” phase. They also found JCF to be higher during the concentric (rising) than the eccentric (lowering) phase. These results may be interesting and useful to some in rehabilitation and athletic training settings, because JCF under high external weights may be associated with athletic performance and injury-related joint and tissue stress. I think the writing quality of this manuscript is fair. Methods were described in detail, statistical analyses appear appropriate, goals, rationales, and logic of the study are clear, discussion of the results are reasonable, and study data are made fully available either in the manuscript or Supporting Information. However, some major concerns regarding soundness of the approach – especially model validation and justification – diminished my confidence in the validity of the results and conclusions. The reported JCF are of much higher magnitudes than prior studies, but model validation only included waveform comparison to sparse cases from a very different population. The use of Static Optimization, which directly govern JCF estimates, was not well justified. Yet despite considerable uncertainties on the validity of these JCF estimates, a large amount of study findings was directly drawn upon the JCF magnitudes. Due to these concerns, I am hesitant to endorse the validity of the study conclusions, thus regretfully recommend against publishing this work in the PLoS ONE journal. I acknowledge that validating JCF in this athletic population may be difficult. However, the authors should at least collect concurrent experimental information like EMG for participant-specific validation. They may also look for in-vitro testing data on JCF under high external loads, with muscle co-contraction considerations in mind. Despite recommending against publication, I provide additional comments to specific contexts that may help the authors improve their work and a potential future paper. Please see below. Abstract: [P2/L24 (Page 2, Line 24)]: No significant change relative to what? Introduction: [P3/L52]: Is this accurate? The cited study highlighted that JCF errors tend to be larger at deep knee flexion. Is it known that common musculoskeletal models are often not suited to simulate deep flexions due to less accurate muscle-tendon paths and properties. [P4/L66]: What movement specifically? Knee rotation, which is essential for knee function, is also a “movement” of the tibia relative to the femur. Did the authors mean anterior translation? [P4/L74]: I did not understand this. How does quantifying the JCF address the adaptation and health of passive joint structures? Material and methods: [P6/L121]: Please clarify that maximum muscle force scaling here was based on MRI data from 6 participants, but the resulting scale factor was applied to all participants. Until later in the Methods, I thought that muscle force was MRI-based for 6 participants, but generic for others. [P6/L122]: Would the results be confounded by not controlling for equipment types? I think the equipment differences would influence the powerlifting performance of the athletes. [P7/L131]: Are these 20 markers included in the caption above? If not, where were they placed? [P8/L170]: Please provide the specific muscle tension value here. [P9/L174]: Avoid the term “actual value” because MRI-based maximum force is still an estimate. [P9/L177]: So, all 29 models were scaled using Equation 1 with S = 3 even for the 6 participants with MRI – meaning the F-iso/ss values in Equation 2 were ultimately not used in any model? [P9/L180]: Can you justify the use of Static Optimization for estimating muscle activation? I am concerned that the squat movement, especially when performed with extreme external weights during powerlifting, would require substantial leg muscle co-contractions that can be poorly represented by static optimization. [P9/L184]: How did you define a squat cycle (i.e., start and end of squat motion) from your data? [P9/L188]: Although the JCF waveforms matched instrumented implant data, the reference data had n = 1 from a very different population, and JCF magnitudes were quite different. Because most of the current study findings directly depend upon JCF magnitudes, I question whether this validation is adequate for supporting the results and conclusions of this study. Results: [P11/L224]: What was “the observed behavior”? [P11/L228]: Both Figure 2 and Abstract [P2/L22] noted that the medio-lateral ankle JCF was not higher during the concentric phase than eccentric, which seem to contradict the statement here. [P12/L235]: I do not see p-values or effect sizes presented anywhere in Table 2. Are they cropped out on the right side of the Table? [P14/L248]: Do you have an objective definition of the “early concentric phase”, e.g., ##-##% of the movement? [P14/L258]: I am still confused what these lines represent. For example, why 4 lines for 70% and 1 line for 90%? [P14/L277]: My observation of Figure 3 differs from this statement – the two peaks appear to be at the mid-eccentric phase (~25-30%) and the end of concentric (~90%). Discussion: [P18/L322]: Simply state “differences were <10%”. The authors should be aware that relevance of the small differences may not be ascertained if it fails to exceed the margin of uncertainty. [P18/L335]: The barbell weight, or the 1-RM, for each participant should probably be reported as study data. The JCF data points presented in Figure 2 are quite variable, which may be directly related to the variability of 1-RM. [P18/L339]: The 2 BW was for which joint? [P18/L343]: I cannot concur with this statement. There is no clear evidence that JCF waveforms during powerlifting squats with heavy weights should be the same as body-weight squats by individuals using endo-protheses. Even so, matched waveforms and fulfilling static optimization equations do not readily confirm that these estimated very high JCF magnitudes are valid. Also see my comment at [P9/L188]. [P19/L367]: I do not think n = 29 is a large sample size for this type of biomechanical studies. Conclusion: [P20/L378]: What does “decline in peak JCF” mean? What was the purpose of comparing JCF magnitudes across the joints? Figures and Tables: [Table 1] Where did the “relative squat performance” metric numbers come from, how were they measured, and what do they mean? [Figure 1]: If there are markers on the front side of the body, please also include a front view image. Which of these markers were static-only and which used for dynamic motion tracking? [Figure 2]: Possibly due to the low resolution of the embedded image, I could not visually locate the median values (white circles) and quartiles (darker areas), although they are not essential. 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Dear Dr. Pürzel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful responses to the comments. The revisions have significantly enhanced the manuscript’s clarity, scientific rigor, and practical relevance. I especially appreciate the expanded discussion on cartilage adaptation, the improved methodological transparency, and the strengthened implications for training and injury prevention. Including EMG-based cross-validation and providing a clear justification for using the validated Catelli model without modifications demonstrate strong scientific integrity. The additional details on MRI volume calculation and the explanation of the force-length-velocity relationship further enrich the manuscript. Your efforts to make the findings more accessible and applicable to both research and practice are commendable. Well done. Reviewer #2: The authors substantially revised this manuscript to address the prior concerns, and I command on their diligent efforts. My primary concern on the original paper was the validity of the models and their high-magnitude JCF estimates. In this revision, the authors added new validation data from one participant during bodyweight squats, compared the JCF estimates to a recent study on this same exercise, and included EMG data from one participant to compare with the model estimates. Even with n = 1, these data still increased my confidence in the models. The authors also emphasized in Discussion the limitations on validation and caution to the result data, which are important and necessary additions. With these, I have been convinced that the authors now have the minimum necessary evidence for the validity of their models to be deemed acceptable. Beyond model validation, the authors also greatly improved the clarity of their paper, and most of my previous concerns on clarity have been resolved. I also agree that the authors' additional discussions in response to the other reviewer will enhance the value of this work. Overall, I am satisfied with the quality of the revised work, and I have no other major concerns. Several minor points of ambiguity or confusion remains that I think should be corrected or explained – please see below. Page [P] and line numbers [L] refer to the revised manuscript with tracked changes. In the manuscript main text: [P4/L58]: For clarity, replace “the movement” with “anterior translation”. [P6/L108]: 73 and 55 do not subtract down to 20 calibration-only markers. [P9/L181]: While the new descriptions clarified that Equation 2 was used to determine the scale factor S, it is confusing that this is not represented in the equations, leaving Equation 1 and 2 disjointed. Would it be correct to formulate that S ~= mean (F_iso / F_scaled_equation_1) = 3 (with n = 6), then F_scaled_final = F_scaled_equation_1 * S (for n = 29)? Also, please add back the caption that “ss” means subject specific. [P10/L208]: Were EMG data also acquired from the unloaded squat, or from a sub-1-RM loaded squat? Were the EMG and JCF validation data from the same participant? Please clarify. [P18/L294]: In the updated Figure 3, it appears that hip JCF is now medial (-), not lateral. [P21/L358]: Why is the patellofemoral JCF described again here, with a different value from the previous sentence? Please double check, as citation [49] seems to be a study on hip JCF. [Table 1]: For clarity and consistency, can you simply replace “relative squat performance” with “one-repetition maximum (1-RM)”? [Figures 2 and 3]: I was able to access the original TIFF figures, and they are of good resolution. What do the shapes of the shaded areas represent? Are these violin plots? Also clarify what the shaded areas around the Figure 3 waveforms represent. In Supporting Information: [Figure S1]: Use black color on the right-side Y scale to match the correct data line. Change the yellow line label to “Squat 15kg”. [Figure S2]: Does each of these represent double- or single-legged squats? I would expect JCFs to approximately double when countering full versus half body weight. [Figure S3]: Please set all Y scales to 0–1. Model-estimated rectus femoris activation appears on this figure as if a large asymmetry existed, but the finding was that they were both near-zero. [Figure S4]: Update figure caption to clarify what the waveform shadings and SPM lines mean. [Table S2]: It may be useful to also report these values as normalized (xBM) in addition to kg. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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