Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-57396In vitro organ culture protocol for intact urogenital systems supporting gonadal differentiationPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Whiteley, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript report a protocol which is of utility to the research community and adds value to the published literature? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the protocol been described in sufficient detail? To answer this question, please click the link to protocols.io in the Materials and Methods section of the manuscript (if a link has been provided) or consult the step-by-step protocol in the Supporting Information files. The step-by-step protocol should contain sufficient detail for another researcher to be able to reproduce all experiments and analyses. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Does the protocol describe a validated method? The manuscript must demonstrate that the protocol achieves its intended purpose: either by containing appropriate validation data, or referencing at least one original research article in which the protocol was used to generate data. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. If the manuscript contains new data, have the authors made this data fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the article presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please highlight any specific errors that need correcting in the box below. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current article describes an in vitro organ culture protocol involving agar slab for intact urogenital systems in the reptile model, Pogona vitticeps supporting differentiation of biopotential gonads into either ovaries or testes. The protocol delivered superior results over the existing protocols with respect to integrity of gross organ morphology, showed sex specific gene expression and temperature induction of sex reversal during culture. Overall it is providing a reliable method for studying gonadal differentiation in non-model species. Reviewer #2: This In-vitro organ culture protocol for intact urogenital systems is significant. Unlike traditional genetic studies, which rely on whole-animal experiments, this method allows direct functional analysis of gene-environment interactions. It is substantial for reptiles, where temperature-dependent sex determination (TSD) is a key factor, enabling controlled studies. A step forward, but not without its challenges. These include species-specific adaptations, the need for external supplementation of systemic factors, and potential developmental deviations in vitro. However, the future is promising, with potential improvements such as integrating hormonal signaling, optimizing culture conditions for broader species applicability, and exploring co-culture systems to better mimic in vivo environments. The journey towards a more comprehensive understanding continues. The authors need to discuss the points below to mark. 1. In vivo, gonadal development is influenced by systemic factors such as hormones from the hypothalamus-pituitary-gonadal (HPG) axis. This in vitro system, while valuable, lacks these interactions, which may lead to incomplete or altered differentiation patterns. It's important to acknowledge these limitations and consider external supplementation with hormones or signaling molecules to mimic in vivo conditions fully. 2. Even though the gross morphology of the gonads is preserved, subtle changes in differentiation could still occur due to the artificial culture environment. The absence of vascularization and mechanical forces in vivo may affect the development of specific cell types or tissue organization. The impact of in vitro conditions on long-term gonadal function and reproductive potential remains unclear. 3. The study acknowledges that no in vitro system can fully replicate the biological complexity of in situ development. However, it does not sufficiently discuss the potential impact of missing systemic factors, such as endocrine signals or maternal influences, on gonadal differentiation and gene expression. The absence of these factors in the in vitro system may lead to incomplete or altered differentiation patterns, which could affect the expression of sex-specific genes and the overall reproductive potential of the cultured gonads. 4. The study highlights that Biopore membranes fail to maintain gonad morphology, but the agar slab method does not fully replicate in vivo development. The extent to which these morphological differences affect downstream analyses (e.g., gene expression) is not deeply explored. The expression of sex-specific genes in cultured gonads does not fully match that observed in in situ development, particularly in 36°C-induced sex-reversed females. The study suggests that high temperatures may mask sex-specific gene expression, but alternative explanations should be considered, such as differences in developmental timing or stress responses in vitro. These factors could potentially influence gene expression and should be further investigated. 5. While the study presents morphological and gene expression evidence of sex reversal, inconsistencies in gene expression trends (e.g., up regulation of some male genes in sex-reversed females) raise questions. Additional functional validation (e.g., hormonal assays or long-term differentiation studies) would strengthen the conclusions. 6. The inability to cleanly separate gonads from the mesonephros in Biopore cultures limits the specificity of gene expression data. Even in agar slab cultures, residual mesonephric tissue could influence RNA sequencing results. To address this, the study could further evaluate the influence of residual mesonephric tissue on RNA sequencing results by comparing single-cell RNA sequencing data, which would provide a more detailed and accurate picture of gene expression in cultured gonads. 7. The study does not clearly state the number of biological replicates used for gene expression analysis. Given the complexity of temperature-induced sex reversal, a larger sample size would help determine whether observed trends are biologically meaningful or due to individual variability. 8. While agar slabs performed better than Biopore membranes, other 3D culture techniques, such as extracellular matrix-based hydrogels, might provide better structural support and improve morphological and molecular outcomes. The study does not explore these possibilities. 9. The study optimizes culture conditions based on previous P. vitticeps staging but does not test whether earlier or later developmental stages might yield better results. A more detailed assessment of optimal culture windows could improve the model. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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In vitro organ culture protocol for intact urogenital systems supporting gonadal differentiation PONE-D-24-57396R1 Dear Dr. Whiteley, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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To answer this question, please click the link to protocols.io in the Materials and Methods section of the manuscript (if a link has been provided) or consult the step-by-step protocol in the Supporting Information files. The step-by-step protocol should contain sufficient detail for another researcher to be able to reproduce all experiments and analyses. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Does the protocol describe a validated method? The manuscript must demonstrate that the protocol achieves its intended purpose: either by containing appropriate validation data, or referencing at least one original research article in which the protocol was used to generate data. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. If the manuscript contains new data, have the authors made this data fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the article presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please highlight any specific errors that need correcting in the box below. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have well addressed the comments made by reviewers. The authors added sections to acknowledge the limitations of in vitro culture system including their proposed model that those cannot fully recapitulate the environment experienced in vivo. However, the proposed model is an improvement on in vitro culture models in that it cultures the intact urinogenital system and can be an experimental choice for in vitro culture model. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the major concerns thoughtfully, particularly regarding the limitations of in vitro systems and the absence of systemic endocrine inputs. The inclusion of adrenal tissue is noted, though it does not fully replicate HPG/HPA axis signaling. The clarifications added to the manuscript are appreciated. Functional validation (e.g., hormonal assays) and advanced culture platforms (e.g., hydrogels) could further enhance the model’s utility. Additionally, assessing a broader developmental window may optimize outcomes. This study represents a promising and accessible approach to investigating reptilian sex determination. With further refinement, the model could offer significant and hopeful insights into the environmental and molecular mechanisms of gonadal development. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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