Peer Review History
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Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: It appears that all the comparative analysis in the primary is simple and done done correctly with the correct conclusions being drawn from the data. However, the design and analysis needs a more formal development. It looks as if the sample size is based on a parametric assumption and some of the analysis is done nonparametrically which makes sense given the small sample. The sample size needs further justification. For the design what is the rationale for the 20 mm difference and 15 sd. and what reference is being used to make the calculation? There are many analyses done with a limited sample. One should be aware of possible multiple comparison issues. The secondary and exploratory analysis is interesting and appears to have been well executed, However, some detail is needed for clarification. How was the general linear model implemented? Clustering and multivariate statistics are involved. One reads the Annex and Figure 2 and notes some detail and the clustering. However , what other multivariate statistics are used and how? Reviewer #2: 1、 The authors investigated the effects of foot reflexology on chronic pain in patient with Parkinson's disease and associated changes in brain functional connectivity . The methodology mentions that "The dopaminergic medication as well as antalgic treatment had to remain stable for at least 4 weeks before and throughout the study." However, specific details about baseline antalgic treatment (e.g., whether participants were taking antalgic medicine and medication history, types, and dosages) were not provided. Considering the potential impact of antalgic on intervention outcomes, this information should be clarified and analyzed. 2、In the study design, participants received one 60-minute FR or SM intervention every three weeks, totaling four sessions. Could the relatively low frequency of interventions have influenced the effectiveness of the treatment? This possibility should be addressed. 3、The study included participants with various types of pain, but no subgroup analysis based on pain type or stratification by pain severity was performed. This lack of detailed analysis makes the study design appear somewhat simplistic. 4、The baseline data show that the duration of pain symptoms among participants is longer than the duration of their PD. Is this finding reasonable? The authors should provide an explanation for this observation. Reviewer #3: The current study examined the therapeutic effect of foot reflexology (FR) in Parkinson’s disease (PD) patients with chronic pain using a randomized controlled trial, in which the therapeutic effects were assessed from both behavioral and neuroimaging perspectives. However, the results showed that there was no significant therapeutic effect of FR compared to sham massage (SM). The description of the significance and feasibility of fMRI analysis and ROI selection in the current study needs to be improved. Here are some of my specific comments: Abstract 1. Authors should reorganize the Abstract section to comply with the formatting requirements of journal. Introduction 1. The second paragraph of the Introduction should be switched with the third paragraph, and the second paragraph is too simplistic, with insufficient introduction of the significance and feasibility of why the insula, the nucleus accumben, and the mPFC were chosen as ROIs. In addition, the feasibility and significance of ROI-to-ROI analyses are missing. 2. The last two paragraphs of the introduction could be merged. Methods 1. The present treatment protocol for FR comprises four FR treatments, each with a duration of one hour, administered with a three-week interval between sessions. How was this protocol determined? 2. Why is the pain threshold measured using thermal stimulation? 3. In section of Seed-to-Voxel functional connectivity, the coordinates of the mPFC and the radius of all seed need to be reported. 4. The description of the ROI-to-ROI analysis is not clear, why these networks were chosen is not presented in the Introduction or Methods. And how were these networks obtained, was it through ICA? Finally, did the ROI-to-ROI analysis also use GRF correction? 5. In first paragraph of section of 2.5 Statistical analyses, was it an estimate of the sample size? If so, what is the basis for estimate? 6. The authors seem to have only examined the correlation between FC and VAS, and the authors might also consider examining whether there is a correlation between FC and KPPS or CPAQ-8. Results 1. Supplementary analyses should be added to the methods section. In addition, it is not clear why analyses were conducted using precentral gyrus, postcentral gyrus and supplementary motor area. 2. In Table 2, ‘*’ appears more appropriately after the P-value. 3. Statistical values that appeared in the manuscript should be italicized, such as p. Discussion 1. I disagree with the discussion in the third paragraph of Discussion, which categories FR as a form of manual therapy and suggests it is effective. However, the current study showed that there was no significant difference between FR and SM (placebo), which suggested that FR had no actual therapeutic effect. Reviewer #4: Title: Effect of foot reflexology on chronic pain in Parkinson’s disease: A randomized controlled trial (ID: PONE-D-25-02337) The authors explored the effectiveness of Foot Reflexology (FR) and Sham Massage (SM) on PD patients with chronic pain. The VAS scores showed no significance between FR group and SM group, while the brain functional connectivity has some difference. This study provides new insights into PD. However, there are some issues that should be classified. Abstract 1.It is suggested to improve the methods section in the Abstract. 2.More detailed results are better. Introduction 3.More information on the pathophysiology of pain and studies of rs-fMRI on the brain function alterations in PD would be better. 4.It is recommended to integrated the last two paragraphs of Introduction. Methods 5.Why didn't this study set up a normal control group? 6.What does adverse events usually mean? 7.In rs-fMRI analysis, why were the insula, the accumbens, and the mPFC chosen as ROI? 8.It would be better to placed the specific coordinate points of mPFC and accumbens. 9.What does NNCP refer to (line241)? 10.For statistical analysis, in my opinion, the first paragraph regarding the sample size was not necessary. 11.Bonferroni corrections method was used for multiple comparisons (line280), however, GRF method was mentioned before (line236), which one was it? Discussion 12.The discussion regarding the changes of functional connectivity should be deeper. 13.What are the possible reasons why FR was not particularly effective in patients with chronic pain in PD in this study, which differs from the results of previous studies? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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