Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 15, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-04698 Association between shortened maternal and fetal telomere length and abnormal fetal development PLOS ONE Dear Dr. GOUMY, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process, detailed below. Would you consider the proposed, major revision of your manuscript, please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 07 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please follow the link for more information: https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/" https://blogs.plos.org/plos/2019/06/looking-good-tips-for-creating-your-plos-figures-graphics/ Additional Editor Comments : Despite the originality of the topic, major issues affect the manuscript, relating mainly in a somehow confusing study design, statistical analysis and interpretation. : 1. The current study design includes both a population of fetuses with congenital malformations, and in a different, smaller group IUGR fetuses, with a restrictive definition (Extremely low percentile definition, exclusion of preeclampsia,...). Such conditions being different, heterogeneous, and only partially overlapping in terms of mechanisms , the robustness of any conclusion drawn from the study results is questionable. Restricting the study hypothesis to pregnancies with fetal congenital abnomalies for example would be preferable, while IUGR might be the object of a separate study. 2. The remark n°1 above is even more important as the hypothesis made by the authors seems to focus on telomere length (TL) shortening as a causal, eventually genetic and heritable factor, which is possible, but not considering in the analysis the hypothesis that TL might be a consequence of acquired, environmental mechanisms, affecting both the other and the fetuses. 3. The manuscript defines TL as a potential biomarker for congenital abnomalies and IUGR together, grouped as developmental disorders. However, the statistical analysis does not include the criteria defining a biomarker, such as specificity, sensitivity, positive and negative predictive values and likelyhood ratios, or ROC curves. This is a major drawback which makes the conclusions in the manuscript not supported by the study design and the results. Minor remarks: 1. The cellular origin of amniotic fluid TL determination is not explicited. 2. The legends to the tables/figures should be located in a separate section of the manuscript 3. The significance of the abbreviation "MCA", which appears in the text, needs to be searched for in a figure legend. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Your paper is a meaningful work, with a good technical methodology and justification, but I have not understood some points or have some notes. First, I think it is necessary to pinpoint that the pregnancy is evolutive, and has many different exposures because of it, mainly for IUGR. So, why did you choose some comparisons to be made between gestational ages different, such as amniotic fluid (20 GW, for controls, vs. 25 GW, for cases), or maternal blood (16 GW, for controls, vs. 26 GW, for cases)? At these different frames you could lost of paramount events on placentation, such as uterine vessels transformation. Second, IUGR use to have a component of placental insufficiency, so it may reflect your measurements being more disperse on this category, but how can you screen it with TL only? I think you should discuss the limitations of TL test or study for a cut-off using gestational age because of factors, such as infections, could alter the length (doi: 10.1186/s12967-024-05879-0). Maybe, also, could it be adjunct to NIPT test on future? Third, on page 6, lines 24-25, I missed a reference. On page 8, lines 1-4, the extrapolation of data was not fully clear to me. Then, I think you should explain it better. Reviewer #2: The article is interesting, but some adjustments and more detailed elaboration are needed in both the introduction and the discussion of the results. 1- Introduction: 1.1 The phrase "chromosomal or molecular variations" is not sufficiently precise, I recommend using more specific terminology, such as copy number variants (CNVs) for structural alterations and single nucleotide variants (SNVs) 1.2 It would be useful if the authors provided more detailed background on previous studies that investigate the association between telomere length and fetal development. 2- Statistycal analysis The authors should clarify whether the sample size was sufficient to detect a significant correlation in the regression analysis. Including a justification or a power calculation would strengthen the statistical validity of the results. 3- Results: 3.1- The paper uses the term IUGR, which has been largely replaced in current literature by Fetal Growth Restriction (FGR). I recommend updating the terminology to FGR, in line with recent guidelines in obstetrics and fetal medicine. 3.2- The phrase "All fetuses had normal karyotype and array CGH results (Agilent 180K, threshold 400 kb)" could be interpreted as ambiguous. It is unclear whether the array CGH results were also normal. I recommend clarifying this sentence. The authors should also point out whether some of these cases underwent NGS analysis (exome sequencing). 3.3: The authors should avoid using the expression in bold: “..prenatal diagnosis for the 108 pregnancies affected with CA” since only 75 fetuses had congenital anomalies, while the other 33 had severe FGR. 3.4 : In the sentence "Fetuses with MCA had significantly shorter telomeres than those with isolated 13 malformations (P<0.001)," the abbreviation MCA has not been defined earlier in the text. I suggest the authors to use abbreviations only when strictly necessary. 3.5. Please clarify the abbreviation RTL and LT ( or the correct term is TL?) since it was used only once: “We then analyzed maternal age-adjusted TL in each group, which confirmed that maternal RTL was significantly shorter…” …These results suggest a potential heritability of LT… 4- Discussion 4.1 – The authors should consider discussing the potential implications and limitations of not performing exome sequencing in cases of multisystem and brain anomalies since it is one of the indications of ES in prenatal diagnostic (many references about this topic); and also to discuss better this topic. 4.2 The sentence "Their findings suggest that TL in prenatal samples could be a useful indicator for assessing the risk of developmental anomalies in fetuses" might be somewhat overestimating the role of TL, given that morphological screening in the first trimester already detects around 40% of malformations. I would suggest rephrasing this to reflect that TL could be considered as an additional tool in assessing risk, particularly in maternal samples, rather than a primary indicator. Figures: The figures have very blurred lettering. I suggest using a version with better visualization. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Your article is very interesting and you have adressed every comment made about improvements. The text is more clear, and I think that it is going to prone to indicate telomere length as a pre-conceptual and pre-natal tool, as you discussed. I encourage you to publish a comparison with fetal growth restriction and small-for-gestacional-age, look for properly avoid selection biases. Reviewer #2: Both the editor's and both reviewers' reviews improved the article, and the authors made appropriate changes. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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