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PONE-D-25-33208A psychometric evaluation of the Chinese Impact of Vision Impairment (C-IVI) questionnaire in an adult cohort with high myopia using Rasch AnalysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 06 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper reported the findings from a psychometric evaluation of the Chinese Impact of Vision Impairment (C-IVI) questionnaire in a large group of patients with high myopia using Rasch Analysis. The study was well-conducted overall. The paper clearly presented some interesting results. Some comments are provided to improve the paper. 1. Line 58, please change “VA” to “uncorrected VA”. 2. Lines 196-197, please indicate that SER from less myopic eye of a patient was used to define SER groups. 3. In Method, please mention where these 445 patients with high myopia were enrolled from. 4. Table 1, please footnote that the results for continuous measures (e.g., axial length) were reported as mean (SD). 5. Table 1, please indicate the SER reported was from less myopic eye. Why using -7.9 D as the cutoff when categorizing SER into two groups? It may be better to use the clinically meaningful cutoff for categorizing SER into groups. 6. In table 1, please indicate VA as “Habitual visual acuity”. 7. Figure 1 legend, please indicate what each line of different color represents for. 8. Figure 2 legend , please change “fr” to “for”. 9. eTable 2, are the SER, VI, and MMD all from the same eye (i.e., the eye with less myopic SER)? Please add a footnote to clarify this. 10. Table 3, it will be good to indicate the possible range of overall sore of C-IVI, and each domain score, and indicate higher score means better vision function. 11. Besides the analysis categorizing VA, SER into levels, it may be worthy evaluating the correlation of habitual visual acuity and SER (analyzed as continuous measures) with C-IVI overall score and each domain scores. This correlation analysis may be performed based on both worse eye (more myopic eye) and better eye (less myopic eye), because it is possible that correlations are higher using worse eye than using the better eye. 12. Lines 294 to 295, it stated that high myopia has been reported to increase the risk of MMD, with an odds ratio of 845 compared to non-myopia”, since MMD is only specific to myopic eye, it does not make sense to compare it to non-myopic eye. Did you mean “compared to non-high myopic eye”? 13. Line 297, what is “vsl”? Reviewer #2: This study reports the psychometric validation of the Chinese Impact of Vision Impairment (C-IVI) questionnaire in adults with high myopia. Please see some queries and suggestions below to improve the clarity of the manuscript. Given that Rasch analysis can handle missing data, what was the rationale for excluding incomplete C-IVI responses? What percentage of responses were missing? Was the missingness random or systematic? Can you provide the item frequency tables to report ceiling effects? The authors note that range-based PR was used due to ceiling effects. Please describe how range-based PR is calculated and its practical relevance compared to sample-based PR? Given that the scales had low sample-based PR, how might this impact the accuracy of person estimates and the validity of comparisons between sub-groups? One of the aims was to examine relationship between VRQoL and myopia macular degeneration (MMD). However, the sample included only 68 individuals with MMD. The IVI was designed for people with vision impairment; so, it is not surprising that the items are less difficult than the abilities of the sample, who predominantly had no VI (n=342). Should more data be collected, especially from individuals with MMD, for more reliable validation? If someone wants to use the C-IVI in a similar adult population with myopia, can they use the item and category calibrations from this study to derive person estimates? What limitations should be considered? It would be helpful to be transparent about further application in the discussion. Line 197-8: ‘the relationship between VI and SE, as well as VI and MMD were examined utilizing chi-squared test.’ It is not clear how this aligns with the research questions. Minor: Abstract: ‘SER’ in results was not expanded before. Can the subheadings be written in full rather than abbreviations (e.g. VRQoL, RA)? Line 157: The description under Rasch analysis needs revision. “Andrich rating scale model was used to analyse the C-IVI data in the RA” is not clear. Line 158: “To assess the psychometric properties of the C-IVI, response category functioning, scale precision, unidimensionality, scale targeting, and differential item functioning” – this sentence is not complete. Line 166 – “person readability” should be ‘person reliability’ Line 192: 1 participant with severe VI was combined with moderate VI group for analysis. However, the eTable 2 corresponding line in text (line 208-209) reports severe VI group instead of moderate. Line 297: what is ‘Vsl’? eTable 1: item 18, ‘fafety’ should be ‘safety’ ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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