Peer Review History
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PONE-D-24-18209 Multi-level factors influencing HIV risk behaviors and oral PrEP use among Black and Latino men with heterosexual contact in New York City PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please attend to both reviewers comments in full in your resubmission. Please also note that all underlying data in the manuscript must be made available in a publicly accessible repository prior to publication. These data should be deidentified (pseudonymised) to comply with your IRB/ethical approvals. ============================== Note from the Editorial Office: Please note reviewer 2 accidentally uploaded a draft version of their comments (file name: "Reviewers comments.docx"). We have attached the final version of their comments as the file "Reviewer 2 comments_PONE-D-24-18209.docx". ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This qualitative study reports on findings based on n=16 interviews conducted with individuals participating in a PrEP trial. While this is an important topic, several concerns diminshed enthusiam for the paper in its current form: 1. Potential bias of the researchers leading to concerns about how data was collected and analyzed, 2. Unclear if the sample size was sufficient to reach saturation on these primary themes among a heterogenous sample of LEP and English speaking Black and Latino men, 3. Characterization of interviewee participants is lacking leading to low generalizability of results. 4. Missed opportunities here to extend the research especially regarding how either of these groups of heterosexual men (Latino, Black, LEP) view PrEP in their individual contexts. Specific comments below: Abstract • Background: Make clear that this is a heterogenous sample of LEP men and English-speaking men. The way it is written currently led me to believe on first read that the sample was all LEP black and Latino men but after reading to the methods within the paper, I now realize it is a mix of English-speaking and LEP men. I think this should be clear as some of the barriers faced to PrEP care for LEP men likely differ from English-speaking men. • Inclusive language, “substance use problems” in results section should just be substance use or negative consequences due to substance use depending on what we are trying to get at here. • Conclusion should be more concrete towards the results and not a call or discussion of implications. Introduction • The introduction is beautifully written • Page 3, lines 55-64, it might be helpful to include the clinical guidelines for PrEP for heterosexual men or people in general. US Public Health Service: PREEXPOSURE PROPHYLAXIS FOR THE PREVENTION OF HIV INFECTION IN THE UNITED STATES – 2021 UPDATE, A CLINICAL PRACTICE GUIDELINE (cdc.gov) • Page 3 lines 65-68, please make clear here that a similar shared characteristic among the population you interviewed were LEP. • Page 4 line 72, please make clear here if the entire interview sample are LEP or if it is a heterogenous group of LEP heterosexual men and English-speaking men. • Page 4 72-73 “U.S. States federal government” is awkward phrasing. Are you saying the State government of NY or the federal government of the United States. Method • The inclusion/exclusion criteria for both the parent study and the qualitative study presented in this manuscript should be stated much more clearly. For example, Page 4, Line 87-88 “indicated for PrEP” does this mean they were approached about PrEP and seemed interested or was this that they seemed to meet the clinical guidelines to be prescribed PrEP?. Additionally Page 4, Line 90-92: “…, engaged in heterosexual contact at the time of recruitment,..” Within what time period? • Some of the information about recruitment for the larger study and this study are unclear. For example, Page 4, lines 82-86, participants of the larger trial were recruited from various departments within the hospital. Then the next sentence says they were identified through the emergency room. Which was it? Clarify. • As many of these participants may have been at different places within their larger trial participation and that this trial participation seems to have convinced at least some to try or get on PrEP, it seems important to detail where each participant was on the trial continuum. Should be added to a Table 1. • Include the interview guide as an appendix • Data analysis: Was the codebook closed or open? Could new codes be added during the coding process? If they were, how did you handle it? • What did the study team do to address and mitigate their own biases within the data collection and analysis phases of this study? • Is there any information available as to how study investigators decided thematic saturation had been reached? Results • It’d be nice to know where each participant was on the trial continuum if that information is available. I think it’s important contextual information to characterize participants, especially if any of them got on PrEP during the course of the trial, as stated in previous comment. • Is there more demographic information available for these participants? For example, Page 8, Lines 193-195 references they aren’t sharing needles. Do you have any further information to better characterize this group of black/and Latino English speaking and LEP men like percentage that are PWID, HIV risk behaviors, others to better characterize participants? • Further, is there any information as to how many potential participants were approached yet refused? This is important for helping the reader understand the generalizability of the sample. • Page 7 Lines 166-172: Some of this feels like participant blaming. Is there a better framing maybe more towards low levels of health literacy and knowledge about how their own behaviors influence risk? • Page 9 Line 212 to 215: This again reads like blaming the participant but there are many contextual reasons that this happens that is beyond the participants control and is rooted in the contextual experience within which this man lives. Calling this misperception “misguided” feels like it belittles the contextual factors within which Black and Latino men exist like masculinity which, despite its effect on women comes with its own negatives for men. This leads to questions about bias influencing the study. • Page 9 Lines 216-227 illustrates why there needs to be further characterization of these men. Were the majority of participants on PrEP after the intervention? I think this holds implications for the understanding of this research. • Page 12 Line 284 – 286: Please find an alternative language to “double standards”. • Page 12 Line 294-297: This quote does not seem to go with the written passage above it. Seems to me this person is saying that you never know who you can trust, even your wife or husband can be in an adulterous relationship. I don’t read this as viewing women as “implicitly adulterous”. • The authors should adjust their tone when discussing their participants who trusted them enough to participate in interviews and share their stories. The current tone feels laden with bias against participants who agreed to be interviewed. Discussion • The last paragraph of this discussion would be strengthened by providing key conclusions/summary of findings. Reviewer #2: Like I indicated in my comments, the authors need to edit the language including the grammar, typo errors and punctuation as well as explaining some of the quotes, which are not clear. I suggested putting an explanation in brackets again the quotes that are not clear. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Multi-level factors influencing HIV risk behaviors and oral PrEP use among Black and Latino men with heterosexual contact in New York City PONE-D-24-18209R1 Dear Dr. Lim, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sebastian Suarez Fuller, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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