Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 11, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-09172Monitoring Cognitive Resilience in Military Personnel in Extreme Operational Environments: The Role of Smart Technologies and Nutritional Strategies – A Scoping Review ProtocolPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Siminiuc, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. 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For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article addresses an important and current topic. At the outset, it should be emphasized that the literature review methodology employed by the Authors has been presented clearly and appears to be formally correct. The method of analysis and synthesis of available sources has been described appropriately. Nevertheless, for the purpose of further analysis and a fuller understanding of its implications, the following issues are worth considering, as they may be a subject for further discussion or supplementation: 1. Time scope of analyzed publications and evolution of nutritional standards. The use of articles published over various years in the review is understandable from the perspective of a comprehensive approach to the topic. However, it should be noted that such a time span entails certain limitations. Dietary requirements and standards for other nutritional interventions (e.g., supplementation, design of combat rations, or implementation of personalized diets) have undergone significant changes over the years. Therefore, the question arises as to whether the Authors have considered these dynamic changes and potential restrictions concerning top-down imposed nutritional norms in different periods and armed forces. It is also crucial to specify what exactly is understood by the term "personalized diets" in the context of the analyzed studies – whether it refers to individualization based on biological markers, preferences, or other factors, especially in military realities where logistics and standardization play a significant role. 2. Operational specificity versus monitoring of cognitive resilience. In the context of monitoring Cognitive Resilience in military personnel using smart technologies and nutrition, a crucial aspect appears to be the differentiation of analysis based on the type of operations performed and, consequently, different training categories and specializations of soldiers. Have the Authors considered how different mission profiles (e.g., long-duration, low-intensity operations vs. short-duration, high-risk, high-stress operations) and training specifics (e.g., pilots, special forces, logistics) might modulate both nutritional needs and responses to interventions, as well as the interpretation of data from monitoring systems? Different tasks and profiles can be associated with varying cognitive and physiological loads. 3. Criteria for selecting monitoring technologies and data integration. Nutritional intervention is a complex process. Consequently, questions arise regarding the technical aspects of real-time monitoring. What are the detailed criteria for the selection and validation of monitoring equipment (e.g., accuracy, reliability in field conditions, minimal invasiveness)? Will the article include a review or recommendations for specific types of biomonitors (e.g., wearable sensors, sweat, blood, saliva analyzers) capable of tracking markers relevant from the perspective of nutritional status and cognitive functions? Furthermore, it is fundamental to explain how data from biomonitors, collected in real-time, can be effectively integrated and correlated with the assessment of the impact of nutritional interventions on observable behaviors, psychophysical performance, and cognitive resilience of soldiers in a dynamic operational environment. Reviewer #2: In the "Funding" section of the manuscript body (lines 189-191), it clearly states: "This research was funded by the National Agency for Research and Development (NARD) through a postdoctoral grant...". However, in the "Financial Disclosure" section under "Additional Information" at the beginning of the document, the response to "Did you receive funding for this work?" is: "The author(s) received no specific funding for this work." These two statements regarding funding sources are completely contradictory. This is a serious issue that requires immediate clarification and correction. Please ensure consistency in the declaration across all sections. "Free Full Text" Restriction: In Appendix I, under "Search Filters Applied," it specifies "Access Type: Free Full Text." This is a very significant limitation. The goal of a scoping review is to broadly collect and map all relevant literature in the field. Limiting the search to only free full-text articles will lead to the omission of a substantial amount of potentially relevant and important research that requires institutional subscriptions or payment, which could result in systematic bias and incompleteness of the review's findings. It is strongly recommended to remove this restriction and to explain how non-open access literature will be obtained (e.g., through institutional library resources). Presentation of the PubMed Search Strategy: The PubMed search strategy presented in Appendix I (Table A1) appears more like a series of exploratory, separate sub-searches (e.g., searching separately for "military nutrition and cognitive resilience," "cognitive resilience in a military context," and "smart technologies in a military context") rather than a final, comprehensive search query integrating all core concepts (nutrition, smart technologies, cognitive resilience, military personnel). The protocol should more clearly explain how the results of these sub-searches will be combined and used, or provide a more integrated Boolean search string capable of retrieving all relevant concepts simultaneously. The protocol mentions (lines 139-140): "Record screening is expected to be completed by 15.04.2025, followed by the finalization of data extraction by 30.05.2025." Considering today's date is May 29, 2025, the deadline for data extraction (May 30, 2025) is imminent. If this protocol was recently submitted or is currently under review, this timeline may be inaccurate or overly tight. It is advisable to confirm or update the timeline. Handling of Non-English Literature: The protocol plans to include literature in multiple languages (English, French, Spanish, German, Romanian, Russian), which is commendable as it helps broaden literature coverage. However, the protocol does not mention how non-English literature will be translated, or how consistency and accuracy in data extraction from these different language sources will be ensured during the data extraction process. A brief explanation of the relevant process or resources could be beneficial. The exclusion criteria state: "research focusing on dietary supplements or pharmacological compounds that are not applicable to military operational nutrition will not be included." The judgment of what is "not applicable to military operational nutrition" might be somewhat subjective. It is recommended to provide screeners with more specific defining criteria or examples to ensure consistency in the screening process. Minor Suggestions and Clarifications: In the "Additional Information" section, under "Data Availability," it states: "N/A - No results are reported" and "No datasets were generated or analysed during the current study." However, the main text (line 138) mentions: "At the time of submission, this scoping review is in the initial data extraction phase." If data extraction has already begun, it could be stated that "no datasets have been finalized or fully analyzed at this stage." A more precise statement could be: "Data extraction is currently underway. No datasets have been finalized or fully analyzed at the time of this protocol submission. All relevant data from this study will be made available upon study completion." Detail in the "Concept" Definition: In the "Inclusion Criteria" under "Concept (C)," when describing smart technologies, it mentions "emerging technologies for real-time tracking of physiological and cognitive responses to nutrition, without direct dietary adjustment." This limiting condition "without direct dietary adjustment" requires all reviewers to have a consistent understanding and application during literature screening. ********** 7. 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Monitoring Cognitive Resilience in Military Personnel in Extreme Operational Environments: The Role of Smart Technologies and Nutritional Strategies – A Scoping Review Protocol PONE-D-25-09172R1 Dear Dr. Siminiuc, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rogis Baker, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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