Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 11, 2025 |
|---|
|
Dear Dr. Cucato, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please define telehealth in the introduction since other readers may not know what telehealth is. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 11 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Enock Madalitso Chisati, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that you have selected “Clinical Trial” as your article type. PLOS ONE requires that all clinical trials are registered in an appropriate registry (the WHO list of approved registries is at https://www.who.int/clinical-trials-registry-platform/network/primary-registries" https://www.who.int/clinical-trials-registry-platform/network/primary-registries and more information on trial registration is at http://www.icmje.org/about-icmje/faqs/clinical-trials-registration/). Please state the name of the registry and the registration number (e.g. ISRCTN or ClinicalTrials.gov) in the submission data and on the title page of your manuscript. a) Please provide the complete date range for participant recruitment and follow-up in the methods section of your manuscript. b) If you have not yet registered your trial in an appropriate registry, we now require you to do so and will need confirmation of the trial registry number before we can pass your paper to the next stage of review. Please include in the Methods section of your paper your reasons for not registering this study before enrolment of participants started. Please confirm that all related trials are registered by stating: “The authors confirm that all ongoing and related trials for this drug/intervention are registered”. Please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-clinical-trials for our policies on clinical trials. 3. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: [We would like to acknowledge the League of Friends of Newcastle Hospital and Newcastle Hospital’s Charity for funding the study, the vascular research team for their help and support, and the staff at Healthworks for engaging the patients in the study. We note that you have provided funding information that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: “The authors received no specific funding for this work.” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information . 5. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Define telehealth in the introduction of the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The research team recruited 37 PAD patients for a RCT to assess the feasibility and acceptability of a home-based telehealth intervention. They concluded its feasibility and acceptability for PAD patients in socioeconomically disadvantaged areas with potential benefits in subjective function capacity and health behaviors. 1. Please provide a brief rationale or reference for the target sample size of 60 or effect size estimation. 2. While the dropout rates are comparable between groups, it would be informative to report an official comparison on whether they were likely to randomly withdraw. 3. How to handle the missing data in the analysis, e.g., those without achieving full adherence? 4. The actual recruited sample size is much smaller than the expected sample size, which may affect the interpretation of the results. With this sample size, standardized mean differences or relevant information may be provided as an information for future trials planning. Reviewer #2: SUMMARY This study aimed to assess feasibility and acceptability of a Tele-Health intervention, which constituted lifestyle modification targeted educative reading materials, videos and one-one interaction with specially trained health improvement practitioners. Participants attended a phone-based educative/counseling session once a week via a phone call and participated in a zoom-based exercise therapy twice a week. The control intervention constituted the usually offered lifestyle education and counseling aimed at increasing physical activity levels (e.g doing 30 minutes of exercise three times a week) and adoption of healthy behaviors, which are offered at the PAD clinic. A total of n=37 participants living with PAD were recruited, instead of an expected total of n=60 participants. An exploratory analytical approach was conducted to answer the study’s set objectives. ABSTRACT 1. Authors conclude that the intervention is ‘feasible and acceptable’. In the study protocol, it is clearly indicated that qualitative interviews were (possibly) done to explore the experiences of participants after receiving the intervention, to determine the ‘acceptability’ of the program. Nevertheless, this aspect has not been reported in the study methods of this paper (measures, analytical plan) and results sections; yet it appears in the abstract’s conclusion. How did the authors draw this conclusion? INTRODUCTION 1. Page 3: line 10. Authors should consider putting a space between the ‘quality of life’ and (9) 2. Page 3: Line 14. ‘and weight management (1). Authors should consider putting a space between ‘management and (1). 3. Pages 3-4: Authors describe the aim of the study, which are mainly focusing on assessing the feasibility and ‘acceptability’ of the Telehealth intervention. However, the subsequent sections (including results section) have not narrated the assessment of acceptability aspect, and why it was important to assess. It may be important to insert such information to indicate the relevance of the approach/intervention. METHODS Inclusion and exclusion criteria 1. Authors indicate that they enrolled participants aged <40 years. Did this age limit contribute to the low turnover rate? a. Why limiting the age to <40 years when in the introduction it is mentioned that PAD particularly affect those aged over 60 years? 2. Were the patients on secondary prevention medications? This has not been mentioned in the protocol either. 3. Authors have also reported that patients with ‘chronic limb-threatening ischemia’ were excluded. Was this based on a known existing diagnosis? Intervention 1. Authors report that ‘prescribed exercise’ was done at home (intervention arm). It is not clear if the participants underwent baseline screening to establish their appropriate exercise target zone (for both safety and effectiveness of the intervention)? 2. Authors also mention that the intensity was prescribed and progressed between 12-14 Borg-RPE-20 scale. The intervention comprised of both aerobic and strength exercises, were the strength exercises prescribed? Considering that Bog-RPE scale is suitable for monitoring aerobic capacity. How did authors consider safety of the participants in using ‘household objects’ for strength training if no personalised prescription was done? 3. I am assuming that all participants had access to mobile phones (smart phones) to access all intervention materials? Or were they supported with such resources (the 8% and 15% with no device/internet access)? 4. Are the health improvement practitioners also trained in ‘exercise prescription’ or they are promoted to implement already prescribed exercise therapy? Is the dream to have a partially structured physical activity intervention in this case? RESULTS AND DISCUSSION 1. On page 7, results section, authors indicate that there were n=99 eligible participants, yet the flowchart indicate n=60 as passing the pre-set inclusion criteria. 2. Due to the limited interpretive nature of the quantitative descriptive data, authors may consider presenting the qualitative data drawn from the qualitative individual interviews aimed at assessing the acceptability of the intervention. Hearing from the participants may be a better supplementary information, key to understanding the technicalities of the intervention. GENERAL COMMENTS 1. Authors refer to study participants as ‘patients’. To reflect patients’ active role and contribution towards the research process (compared to their passiveness in clinical care ‘delivery-access’ processes) it is generally recommended to refer to them as ‘participants’ in research. Authors may wish to reconsider this. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
|
| Revision 1 |
|
<p>Telehealth Exercise Training in Peripheral Arterial Disease (TEXTPAD) Study: A Pilot Randomised Controlled Trial in Socioeconomically Disadvantaged Populations PONE-D-25-30092R1 Dear Dr. Cucato, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Enock Madalitso Chisati, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-25-30092R1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cucato, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Enock Madalitso Chisati Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .