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PONE-D-24-54978Health aspects and lifestyle of licensed manual therapists during the COVID-19 pandemic in Sweden; the CAMP cohort studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Weiss, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The paper is interesting and overall of good quality. Both referees raised several weaknesses that require a thorough editing of the manuscript.. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I am grateful for the opportunity to contribute to the peer review process of this manuscript, which refers to a longitudinal study in a COVID management context different from the ordinary one of alternating lockdowns. The authors have presented very clearly the purpose of their study, the methods used and the results obtained. I would like to express my sincere appreciation to them for the work done. Below are some minor comments and some ideas for a deeper understanding of the study results. 1. In the Introduction the authors should add information about vaccination in Sweden. According to Spetz et al., in Sweden, the vaccination program started on 27th December 2020 and by 5th November 2021, 85% of the adult population had received their first dose. Therefore, the baseline data should refer almost entirely to subjects who were not yet vaccinated, while the follow-up data were collected when the vaccine was fully available and, at 12 months, after having also overcome the major uncertainties associated with vaccination. In my opinion, this aspect should also be considered in the discussion. 2. sub-section Physical activity: If I am not mistaken, according to the cited reference [18], the physical activity data should have been managed in a categorical way, on a scale ranging from 3 to 18 instead of the proposed “minutes of activity”. Instead, the authors considered the minutes, converting the categorical response into the central numerical value of the class. It is not clear to me, therefore, whether this method of converting categorical data into a continuous variable (minutes) has had any validation in the literature. As a small comment, regarding the response alternatives: “1-30 minutes”, “30-60 minutes”, “60-90 minutes”, etc., a more accurate data collection would be obtained, for example, by indicating "1-29 minutes", "30-59 minutes" and so on. The original indication "Less than 30 minutes" (as reported in [18]) would be preferable to "1-30", in my opinion. 3. At the end of the Tobacco and alcohol use section there is a typo on AUDIT-C. 4. Regarding the free text variables, how was the question formulated at 12 months? Such as baseline (What have you done to promote your own health during the COVID-19 pandemic?) or, for example, "What have you done to promote your own health during the last 12 months?". 5. Please add appropriate citations for R packages gee and multgee. 6. sub-section Longitudinal lifestyle patterns: I believe that indicating the sedentary time variation even in minutes can help the reader. 7. Table 2: Why was the 34-year threshold taken into consideration? I suggest adding a reason. Furthermore, to assist readers who are not experts in GEE methods, I suggest clarifying what is reported in the line "Mean difference in change baseline to 12 months (95% CI)". The same goes for other similar tables. 8. Table 5: To highlight the appearance of the new category "Change profession", I suggest introducing a decimal instead of reporting 0%. Personally, I was very intrigued by the classification of "Change profession" among the activities for the promotion of mental health. Did the respondents themselves give this indication? Since it seems to be a relevant result, perhaps the authors can spend a few more words on it. 9. Table 6 and related text (lines 233-237): If I understand correctly, all 202 individuals who responded to the baseline indicated at least one negative impact, but 70 of them also indicated positive impacts. Is that right? 10. Tables 5-10 overall: I would like to suggest reviewing the indication of percentages. With reference to table 10, it is really confusing to find indications higher than 100%. Perhaps, these particular cases could be better explained in the legend. Or, the analysis procedure of the individual responses could be illustrated in greater detail in the methods, perhaps with an example (even a fictitious one). Finally, why COVID-19-related worries were not asked at the baseline as well? References Spetz, M., Lundberg, L., Nwaru, C., Li, H., Santosa, A., Leach, S., ... & Nyberg, F. (2022). The social patterning of Covid-19 vaccine uptake in older adults: A register-based cross-sectional study in Sweden. The Lancet Regional Health–Europe, 15. Reviewer #2: Introduction Lines 58 to 62: The authors discuss how the pandemic impacted the lifestyle and mental health of adolescents worldwide. I suggest revising this section by incorporating references from the scientific literature that highlight the pandemic's impact across all life stages: youth, adults, and the elderly. Alternatively, consider including a reference that focuses on the pandemic's impact on the mental health and lifestyle of healthcare professionals. Methods Participants: While the methodological details have already been published and do not need to be repeated in the current manuscript, it would be valuable for readers to know the inclusion and exclusion criteria for participants, such as sex, age group, pre-existing clinical conditions, exclusion of participants with prior illnesses that could interfere with the outcomes, as well as the total number of participants recruited or other criteria applied in the study. Other Considerations Based on the manuscript itself (and not the reference to the larger study), the study does not appear to align with the characteristics of a classical cohort study in epidemiology. The authors did not explicitly describe (at least in the text) how participants were selected for exposure versus non-exposure to the factor of interest (lifestyle). I suggest that the authors include these details in the manuscript. Additionally, if the study is methodologically a prospective web survey, I strongly recommend replacing the term "cohort study" with "repeated web surveys in the same population" to more accurately reflect the aim of evaluating lifestyle changes. Furthermore, I suggest specifying that this is a mixed-methods (qualitative-quantitative) study. Follow-up: Please clarify in the methodology how the authors handled loss to follow-up and whether this loss was selective. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . 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