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PONE-D-24-51742Partial FAM19A5 deficiency in mice leads to disrupted spine maturation, hyperactivity, and an altered fear responsePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Seong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Additional comments :In Figure 5� the authors made observations on the difference of different types of dendritic spines between the wildtype and the mutant mice. To help the readers to understand the figure, the authors should provide an image illustrating the different type of spines such as filopodia, mushroom and branched spines with clear labeling. The submitted figures were shown in an order from Fig7 to Fig1, which is not the usual order for manuscript submission. Please re-order the figure sequence from Fig1 to Fig7 during the revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 04 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Shahapal et al. paper utilizes a FAM19A5 KI mouse model to investigate protein’s function in brain development and behavior. This model exhibits a partial reduction in protein levels measured by immune blotting and in the CSF. However, this reduction does not appear to impact overall brain morphology or development. The authors report alterations in dendritic spine distribution, with a shift toward immature forms. Additionally, they observe lower body weights and other behavioral changes, including hyperactivity and delayed fear response. The authors conclude that while FAM19A5 doesn't influence overall brain structure, it plays a role in neural connectivity by regulating spine maturation. While the explored idea is interesting, I save one major and a few minor concerns that must be addressed. Major comment: The authors observed no overall impact on brain morphology, hence no impact on brain development in the FAM19A5 KI mouse model. The only reported impact on brain structure is a shift toward immature spine types, which the authors interpret as a potential disruption in synaptic plasticity, which may underlie low body weight and daily food intake. I believe the authors don’t have enough data to support their hypothesis, given that all other brain parameters were not affected. The authors are required to provide more evidence of disrupted synaptic plasticity in the FAM19A5 KI mouse model. Minor comments: 1. In line 2 of the results, remove “these” from the phrase “these two amino acids from the translated protein.” 2. Is there a specific reason for the variation in the number of mice used across different experiments? For instance, only 3 mice were used to quantify FAM19A5 levels in the cortex and hippocampus, whereas 6–12 mice were used to quantify protein levels in the CSF (Fig 1). In Fig 1C, only the levels of non-glycosylated FAM19A5 are affected in the +/LacZ group; however, the authors did not provide any commentary on this observation. Additionally, in Fig 1D, please specify which form of the protein is represented (non-glycosylated, glycosylated, or both). Moreover, in Fig 1E, it is unclear how the protein levels were measured in the CSF. Could you clarify the methodology? The authors do not provide any data to explain the low levels of FAM19A5 in LacZ KI mice. While they speculate that this may be due to protein degradation, this hypothesis could be tested using a protease inhibitor assay. MT FAM19A5 exhibited a high binding affinity for LRRC4B in Fig 1E, possibly due to protein overexpression. HEK293 cells seem to have higher MT FAM19A5 levels, especially the non-glycosylated form, compared to protein levels shown in Fig 1C. In Fig 1E, MT FAM19A5 demonstrated a high binding affinity for LRRC4B, which could potentially be attributed to protein overexpression. Notably, HEK293 cells appear to exhibit higher levels of MT FAM19A5, particularly the non-glycosylated form, compared to the protein levels shown in Fig 1C. 3. In Fig 2, please label "A" as male and "B" as female for clarity. Additionally, it appears that the body weights of males are more affected compared to females; however, the authors have not provided any comments on this observation. Furthermore, is there any available data on female food intake? Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes the further investigation of FAM19A5-LacZ KI mice which express a carboxy-terminally altered FAM19A5 protein. FAM19A5 is encoded by the TAFA Chemokine Like Family Member 5 (TAFA5) gene. TAFA proteins function as brain-specific chemokines or neurokines that act as regulators of immune and nervous cells. First, the expression level of the altered FAM19A5 and binding to its receptor LRRC4B where analyzed revealing residual expression of about 35% and less affinity, respectively. Phenotypical observation of revealed smaller body size and reduced body weight, altered spine morphology of several cortical neurons, and subtle behavioral changes related to FAM19A5-LacZ KI mice activity and fear conditioning. The experimental approach is sound and adds to further characterization of FAM19A5-LacZ KI mice. These mice may serve as a model for considerable but not complete loss of FAM19A5, however, the carboxy terminal alteration does not permit the distinction between loss-of-function versus altered, compromised function (receptor binding). In this respect, comparison of FAM19A5-LacZ KI mice with heterozygous FAM19A5 mice may be helpful. The results are clearly described and carefully interpreted. The statistical analysis appears correct. Minor points: - the introduction lacks a description of the TAFA5 gene and FAM19A5 with potential structure and functions saving the reader to dig in the original literature. - the quality of the Western blot shown in Fig 1C is not optimal - the ELISA shown in Fig 1G is based only on n=2 - increased activity is too strongly interpreted as reduced anxiety Additional note: supplies Fig 1 is very nice ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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PONE-D-24-51742R1Partial FAM19A5 deficiency in mice leads to disrupted spine maturation, hyperactivity, and an altered fear responsePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Seong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Figure1SA westernblot showed a clear splice mark between WT48h and MT0h. Apparently, the results were from two gel runs. If so, they should not be put together into one panel. Separate gel runs should be presented by different panels. Figure 1SB, D, the term "the relative protein expression" should be explained in the method section. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Hualin Fu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Figure1SA westernblot showed a clear splice mark between WT48h and MT0h. Apparently, the results were from two gel runs. If so, they should not be put together into one panel. Separate gel runs should be presented by different panels. Figure 1SB, D, the term "the relative protein expression" should be explained in the method section. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Authors, Thank you for your effort to address the feedback provided by the reviewer. The authors have addressed all my previous comments. However, I have a follow-up regarding Fig S1, which was generated in response to my previous comment regarding the low levels of MT FAM19A5 in the lacZ KI mice. The authors used MG132 to explore this pathway, and the results are shown in Figs1. The authors transfected the MT FAM19A5 protein in HEK 293, yet the protein migrates at the same molecular weight as the WT. Similarly, in Fig 1F, both WT and MT appear to run at the same level. However, in the updated version of Fig 1C, the authors stated that the WB analysis reveals a minor size difference in non-glycosylated MT FAM19A5 due to the additional 8 a.a at the C-term. It remains unclear whether the band represented by the open arrow in Fig1C represents non-glycosylated MT FAM19A5 from FAM19A5 LacZ/LacZ mice. Additionally, in Fig 1s, it is unclear why, at the 0h-timepoint, the CHX-treated group shows high levels of both WT and MT, while in the MG132-treated group, WT protein levels appear low and MT starts at higher levels. The increased accumulation of WT protein over time may be an artifact due to the initially low signal at 0h. Clarification is also needed on how the blots were quantified as the quantification in panel D doesn’t seem to reflect the WB shown in panel C. How many independent experiments were performed to generate these results? I suggest combining the two experiments into a single protocol in which cells are first treated with CHX to prevent additional protein synthesis and then with MG132 for 48 hours. This would allow for a more accurate assessment of protein half-life rather than relying solely on relative protein expression. If MG132 stabilizes the MT FAM19A5, it would support the author's hypothesis regarding protein degradation pathways. However, However, this is only a recommendation, the authors may choose to either conduct this revised experiment or clarify the current text accordingly. Lastly, in Fig 1S A, the WT blot is cropped at the 48h time point, please ensure that the full band is visible. Line 272, remove the letter s from "(Figs 1C)" Good luck. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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