Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 6, 2024 |
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Dear Dr. Peng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ------------------- In addition to reviewers' comments, please consider the following comments from academic editor while revising your manuscript: Novelty and Clarity of Research Gap: The study identifies a critical research gap by focusing on the impact of local government land transfer practices on urban-rural integration development, emphasizing mechanisms such as land price competition and fiscal dependence. While this topic is significant and addresses a policy-relevant issue in the context of China, the novelty is somewhat limited due to the extensive prior work on land use and urbanization. The study's differentiation could be improved by further elaborating on how its approach surpasses existing research. Literature Review: The paper provides a robust review of relevant literature, delineating prior studies on urban-rural integration and the role of land markets. However, it could better integrate more diverse international perspectives to highlight potential parallels or deviations in global contexts. Additionally, while the hypotheses are well-articulated, their connection to the literature could be more explicitly justified. Methodology: The use of panel data from 281 cities and bidirectional fixed effects modeling is appropriate and rigorous. However, the paper could provide more clarity on the rationale for selecting specific control variables and the measurement of constructs like "urban-rural integration development." The robustness checks strengthen the validity, yet the discussion of potential limitations in variable definitions or endogeneity concerns requires expansion. Statistical Analysis: The statistical results are presented systematically, with clear interpretation of coefficients and significant effects. However, the justification for the inverted U-shaped relationship between land price competition and integration development could be more thoroughly grounded in empirical patterns or theoretical reasoning. Theoretical Contribution: The study makes a meaningful theoretical contribution by incorporating labor transfer, public services, and industrial structure upgrading into a unified framework. Nonetheless, it would benefit from a deeper discussion of how these mechanisms extend or challenge existing theories on urban-rural dynamics. Practical Applications: While the paper provides actionable insights, such as the need for regional customization of land policies, its recommendations could be more nuanced. For instance, proposing strategies for regions with high land finance dependence beyond reducing reliance could add depth to the practical implications. -------------------- Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: The study is good effort and well organized and well written. However, the anther needs to explain practical and theoretical implications of the empirical findings study. Also explain the significance the study. Reviewer #2: The review process of the manuscript is completed. In my opinion, the justification and theoretical foundations of the research have been well explained. However, this study is full of shortcomings in econometric models. You have justified some of the findings. Provide references for these sentences. For example, in part 4.2.1 Regression results and analysis by region, some sentences about the possible reasons for the difference in results in different regions need to be referenced. In Table 6, the column of social criteria is repeated twice. Please correct. In all the tables, tell what the numbers in parentheses represent. The coefficients obtained in the estimated models are numerically very low. This issue is probably related to the different units of the variables. Check this item and check by changing the unit of variables. On the other hand, somewhere in the text, it is stated that it is taken from the variables ln. While some variables are in the form of percentages or ratios and cannot be taken as ln. In panel data, the unit root test and the presence or absence of cointegration in the long run between variables are necessary. Why is the gmm model used? This model is a dynamic method and there is no evidence of this in the results table. And of course, why are there only three degrees in gmm results in table 7? List the units of the variables in a column in Table 2. In line 256, the notation error term is reported incorrectly. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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| Revision 1 |
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Dear Dr. Peng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 23 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Amar Razzaq, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** Reviewer #2: The revisions have been well done by the author. The address of these changes is well highlighted in the text. Reviewer #3: The authors have made substantial efforts to incorporate the feedback provided in the first round of reviews. The revised version of the manuscript demonstrates significant improvements in methodological clarity, theoretical grounding, and empirical robustness. The responses provided to the reviewers' comments indicate a serious and constructive engagement with the feedback, leading to a more refined and academically rigorous paper. Strengths of the Revised Manuscript: - Thorough incorporation of reviewer feedback – The authors have made significant efforts to address the reviewers’ comments, particularly by clarifying their research framework, refining their data presentation, and strengthening their discussion of mechanisms. - Clearer methodology and robustness checks – The manuscript now includes a more detailed description of the econometric models used, as well as additional robustness tests, which enhance the reliability of the results. - Improved discussion of policy implications – The authors have strengthened their discussion on the practical implications of their findings, offering insights for policymakers and urban planners. - Better presentation of empirical results – The tables and figures have been revised, improving readability and making the results easier to interpret. Reviewer #4: The article deals with an interesting and current topic. It discusses the relationship between land prices and regional development. The topic is suitable for publication in a journal. However, I have a few comments on the processing. In my opinion, the literature review is not sufficiently processed, even though it is a case study, it would be appropriate to supplement the review with the results of research on the given issue from other countries. I am not entirely sure whether the economic performance hypothesis and the Land finance hypothesis are appropriately formulated as hypotheses. After reading it, they are more like research questions. Because hypotheses should be based directly on the problem being solved and not refer to the authors. For H1: "Selling industrial land at low prices.... it is no longer stated what the low prices are and on what basis they were defined as low prices. And also "high industrial land prices" - on what basis are high prices defined? Why are relatively old data used? (The study's dataset spans from 2003 to 2017). There are no newer ones available, since the price of land is a dynamic variable and what was current in 2017 may not be current in 2025. It would be appropriate to add a period of at least 5 years. Or to justify well why this particular time series of data is used. Is it possible to make recommendations for the current period based on relatively old data? On what basis was the sample of cities selected? Is it a statistically significant sample? In the conclusion, the research limits are missing. Reviewer #5: Here are the strengths of the manuscript: the issue is interesting and eligible for academic discussion, with major variables identified in the numeric analysis. However, there are several areas that need improvement: 1. The manuscript lacks clarity in its preparation. 2. It does not provide sufficient depth and breadth in the theoretical and conceptual framework. 3. The literature review section needs to be reworked to address topical issues and include relevant empirical studies. 4. The research methodology (approach, design, data gathering tools, sampling, analysis, etc.) is not adequately described. 5. The research discussion is not supported by empirical evidence or other literature; it lacks triangulation techniques. 6. The study lacks qualitative data sources and their analysis, focusing solely on numerical data. Therefore, the manuscript is not suitable for policy research. 7. The manuscript contains redundancy of ideas throughout the paper. 8. The title of the manuscript requires modification. 9. It lacks coherent technical procedures ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Diogo Henrique Helal Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Peng, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Research on the Impact and Mechanism of Local Governments' Land Conveyance Behavior on Urban-Rural Integrated Development——Empirical Evidence from 281 Prefecture-Level Cities in China PONE-D-24-33248R3 Dear Dr. Peng, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Amar Razzaq, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #4: Thank you for the detailed explanation of my comments and for incorporating them into the article. The edits contributed to improving the quality of the article. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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