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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study compares four macroscopic Invasion Percolation (IP) models for simulating gas flow in water-saturated porous media beyond the discontinuous regime. Using light transmission imaging and randomised entry pressure fields, the models are tested against experiments in transitional and continuous flow regimes. A diffused Jaccard coefficient is used to evaluate performance. Results show that some IP models are effective outside their traditional application range, and that initial entry pressure fields have a significant influence on outcomes. The study presents a generalizable framework for model evaluation using high-resolution spatial and temporal data. A minor revision is recommended to improve clarity and quality. 1. Introduction: In Lines 74-75, as for the discontinuous flow regime, discrete gas bubbles could be modelled by coupling buoyancy-driven bubbly flow in porous medium with Navier-Stokes equations rather than capillary-viscous-inertia-driven air slugs and air continuous flow. This model has been well-developed in COMOSAL. Recommended work: Ma, Y., Yan, G., & Scheuermann, A. (2022). Discrete bubble flow in granular porous media via multiphase computational fluid dynamic simulation. Frontiers in Earth Science, 10, 947625. 2. Methodology: Figure 1 is a good illustration of IP, while you forgot to provide a photo of your IP model in both the main text and the appendix. It would be beneficial to draw the dimensions of the IP model, the initial and boundary conditions applied to it, and include a scale bar on the IP images. Additionally, the optical calibration between physical length and pixel should be provided, along with the imaging methods (camera, resolution, frame per second, etc.), image processing (grayscale threshold for binarization, noise filter algorithm, etc.), and image analysis. Not all details are necessary, but some key information should be mentioned for experimental replication. Line 452: No indentation ahead of notation starting with “where”. Please fixe the same issues elsewhere. 3. Results and discussions: Have you paid attention to the high gas injection-induced inertia effect in two immiscible phase seepage flow in porous media, as high injection flow rate may trigger dynamic nonequilibrium capillary water flow. These could be verified by comparing the Reynolds number and the Weber number to assess the relative contributions of inertial, viscous, and capillary forces. Recommended publication: Yan, G., Li, Z., Bore, T., Torres, S. A. G., Scheuermann, A., & Li, L. (2022). A lattice Boltzmann exploration of two-phase displacement in 2D porous media under various pressure boundary conditions. Journal of Rock Mechanics and Geotechnical Engineering, 14(6), 1782-1798. 4. Conclusions: Please restructure the conclusion as follows: Paragraph 1, Overall Summary: Begins with a broad overview of the topic, outlining the scope, key themes, and the progression of the review. Sets the context by connecting existing knowledge with emerging challenges or gaps. Paragraph 2, Thematic or Point-by-Point Breakdown: Followed by a structured list of conclusions or insights, usually numbered or bulleted. Each point presents a distinct observation, finding, or implication, often supported by comparisons or qualifications. The list moves logically from theoretical foundations to experimental methods and finally to practical or applied considerations. Paragraph 3, Final Integrative Conclusion: Ends with a synthesis or reflection, often forward-looking. Highlights the practical relevance, implications for future work, or broader significance of the findings. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents a comparative framework for evaluating four macroscopic invasion percolation (IP) models against experimental data from gas injection in water-saturated sand across transitional and continuous flow regimes. The authors use a diffused Jaccard coefficient approach to rank model performance and identify that Models 3 and 4 (which incorporate rules for multiple block invasion and stochastic selection, respectively) outperform traditional IP models in these previously unexplored flow regimes. - Novel Evaluation Framework: The introduction of the diffused Jaccard coefficient and a robust, image-based comparison method provides a significant advancement for model-data comparison in porous media research. - Clear Problem Definition: The manuscript addresses a well-defined gap in the literature regarding the suitability of IP models for flow regimes beyond traditional discontinuous cases. - Comprehensive Experimental Basis: Nine well-characterized experimental datasets, covering triplicates at different flow rates, offer a strong basis for benchmarking. Major comments: - The abstract is overly technical and method-focused. It under-emphasizes the broader significance of the work. Revise to highlight (a) the problem addressed, (b) the novelty of the framework, (c) the key results (e.g., Model 3 generally outperforms others), and (d) implications for practical applications such as CO₂ storage or groundwater protection. - Limited Physical Understanding: The manuscript lacks sufficient mechanistic insight into why certain models perform better. The authors acknowledge that Models 3 and 4 can "partially consider viscous effects" but do not provide clear physical justification for how multiple block invasion or stochastic selection actually represents viscous processes. -The manuscript claims that the framework is generalizable beyond gas-water systems, but this is not strongly substantiated. Provide concrete examples of how this framework could be applied to other multiphase systems (e.g., oil-water, CO₂ sequestration) or even to data-driven models. - Address Model Limitations: Explicitly discuss the physical meaning of unrealistic gas saturation values and their implications for model applicability. - Expand Experimental Scope: Include additional porous media types or acknowledge this as a significant limitation. Minor comments: - The manuscript is generally well-written, though some sections (especially methodological details) could be condensed or clarified for broader accessibility. - Extend analysis to 3D models or justify 2D limitation - Systematic evaluation of parameter sensitivity - Consider additional comparison metrics beyond Jaccard coefficient ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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A framework for objectively comparing competing invasion percolation models based on highly-resolved image data PLOS One Dear Dr. Banerjee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE and for your careful and thorough response to the reviewers. Nevertheless, there remains one additional point raised by reviewer 1 that you should consider addressing. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses this point. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 05 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have mainly addressed the comments from the last round of review. I have no additional comments on it except for one raised by the other reviewer (Reviewer #2). The authors answered that heterogeneity in the initial entry-pressure field strongly influences model performance (Lines 47-48). You answered this well in your response letter and included additional information in the abstract. However, you forgot to mention this part in the main text and only put minor information in Line 742 (the uncertainty of the geological heterogeneity in their experimental setup). Could you please add the essential findings and discussion not only in the abstract and response letter but also in the main text, in the results and discussion chapters? Also, another good study investigated the role of local heterogeneity in the initial entry pressure and scale effects in the capillarity-saturation relationship, which may help to support this finding (“the initial entry-pressure field strongly influences model performance”). Yan, G., Bore, T., Schlaeger, S., Scheuermann, A., & Li, L. (2022). 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